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Reviewer: MJQuick Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2021 04:54 pm Title: Update?

WRITE MORE PLEASE!

Reviewer: elizardbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2019 06:27 am Title: Update?

I know it's been a few years since you posted this, and I'm not sure if you'll read this, but I love this series, and another chapter to this would be great! No pressure, though. :'D

Author's Response:

I definitely do still get messages! I can maybe try to pump one out for you over the next few days! :)

Reviewer: Dri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2018 02:15 am Title: Update?

Update please! Dont give up!

Reviewer: Clsflames Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 13, 2018 09:46 am Title: Prologue

I know its been along time since you have added to this story. I just found the series and would love it if you could finish this off. Looking forward to the reaction and uproar they have when they realize there really is a baby... would love to see Alanna upstage lisa by having twins... not that Michael would love them differently but Lisa's reaction to that should be priceless

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2015 07:26 pm Title: Update?

Awwww man, I thought this was an update. It'd be nice to see this story finished. Just to see what really happens, but if you're not really feeling it then it's okay. 

 

Maybe just a few chapters to finish it off. 

Reviewer: Crazyme62 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2015 05:03 pm Title: Update?

Please continue with your story, its very good. 

Perhaps Alana could be pregnant but a little further along then Lisa but having more than One baby maybe three. Not to far down the road the real father of Lisa's baby comes into the story. It's not known who the real father of her baby is.  

 

 

 

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2015 09:40 am Title: Update?

Yes please continue I love you're stories.

Reviewer: Thunder Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2013 11:03 am Title: Prologue

I am so sorry you have stopped writing this wonderful story. Please let me know if you are posting on another site.

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2013 10:14 pm Title: The Belly Rub

ohhh I'd love me some jealous Michael thats is always fun to read lol

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2013 02:26 pm Title: The Belly Rub

Who the fuck is Lisa pregnant by is what I wanna know? If she's even pregnant. Cuz the shit ain't Michael's child. Whatever. Let some Alana's exes pop up with some shit. Hopefully one of em is still madly in love with her and wants to take her away from Michael's stupid ass. 

 



Author's Response: HMM....I like your thinking...

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2013 10:16 pm Title: Lisa's Arrival

OMG iam_music's review had me rolling!! Lol I hope Michael catches what Marie is trying to do. But damn what had me a bit shocked was, Michael is starting to reminisce what he had with Marie. That is no bueno. But I know Lana is strong, she'll put Marie in her place!



Author's Response:

' Michael is starting to reminisce what he had with Marie.'...... Just wait and see what else is in store! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: MissA1485 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2012 06:43 am Title: Lisa's Arrival

These updates had my blood boiling lol everytime Alana sighed. I sighed. Everytime
Lisa mentioned the "baby" I rolled my eyes lol
and everytime Michael was acting overly friendly with Lisa I wanted to smack him lol
I really hope she's not pregnant. I want Alana and Michael to finally have their happily ever after :)
can't wait for more.....

Author's Response:

Then yuo and Alana shared the exact same feelings Bravo! It's partly what I wanted. lol Thanks as always for the review. More coming very soon.

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2012 04:23 pm Title: Lisa's Arrival

I wish Alana would just beat Lisa's ass once and for all. Lisa's too damn evil to carry a baby, I hope that bitch has a miscarriage. I hate Alana is even back in this situation. She should be married to a man with no baggage, drama, or Elvis in a wig lookin exes. Smh damn shame. I feel for Alana. Michael is gettin on my nerves and y'all already I can't stand Lisa's fake wack sour faced ass. Somebody push this bitch down the stairs. 



Author's Response:

Ha! I love that you tell me how you really feel! I have a feeling you're going to be more angry as the story continues to progress then. lol I have a few tricks up my sleeve! :)

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