Reviews For Crimison Tango
Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed 
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Date: Jan 17, 2013 10:28 pm Title: Prologue: Interlude to a Disaster
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2013 10:28 pm Title: Prologue: Interlude to a Disaster
I liked the chapter, but i think you should be more descriptive and put your paragraphs closer together.
However, that's just my opinion. I mean, coming from me, I'm not expertise on these things since I'm not so great myself, lol.
Can wait for another chapter :)
Reviewer: ilovemj1973 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2013 10:46 pm Title: Prologue: Interlude to a Disaster
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2013 10:46 pm Title: Prologue: Interlude to a Disaster
wow I love this new story...cant wait to see if Michael will actually be faithful :)