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Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 07, 2013 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 2 - First seeing her

Uuuuu, that sounds like silver bells ringing in the air! Good part!



Author's Response: Silver bells? Haha you'll have to tell me what that means. I'm glad you like it :)

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 07, 2013 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome to New York

Wow, sounds promising! It's great!



Author's Response: Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2013 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Are you excited to see me?

Who could be upset to see Michael in front of them? Sure as heck not me! ;) Can't wait for the update! :)



Author's Response: Haha I don't know???? Me either i'd be like baby give me a hug!!!! :) lol Thank you it will be up I hope sometime this week but i'm busy with school so will see. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, hugs :)

Reviewer: whatmorecanigive Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2013 07:07 am Title: Chapter 5 - Are you excited to see me?

You girl...you little girl! You and your cliffhangers! XD Not fair XD What an amazing chapter I so enjoyed it!
Like I told u u write the scenes with his kids so beautifully! Nobody can write it like you!
Youre amazing!!!!

Author's Response: Aww thanks sis *blushes* You know I have to have you beggig for more XD hehe. It maks you want to read more doesn't it? I'm so glad you are. Thank you. I can so see Mikey poo being the loving father that he is. Thanks sis nobody can write like you either and your more amazing. Thanks for commenting and reading, luv u *blows kisses* XD ;)

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2013 07:03 am Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome to New York

Can't wait until you continue!

BTW, is it okay if you leave a review on my story Risky Business? TY :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! Sure I will totally check it out. Thank you for reading and reviewing

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2013 07:02 am Title: Chapter 5 - Are you excited to see me?

She should be happy!

If she isn't, she had a mental problem, lol.

Author's Response: Haha your right, who could not love seeing him?!?!? but will see XD Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2013 07:00 am Title: Chapter 3 - Just call her!

He better call her!

Author's Response: LOL totally, he seems to really like her. ;)

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Date: Feb 02, 2013 06:57 am Title: Chapter 2 - First seeing her

Ooh, Veronica!

She dunno what's she's in for, lol.

Author's Response: Hehe I don't think so :) Thanks

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2013 06:55 am Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome to New York

Poor Michael :(

I'm liking this so far!



Author's Response: I'm so glad! Thanks so much :)

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2013 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 4 - I got her info

Blackmail, Mike? That's cold! LOL 

I doubt she'll be upset, he didn't really find anything out that was too personal. Besides, who coud be mad at that face? ;)



Author's Response: Haha I know can you believe mikey XD Maybe she won't and maybe she will, who knows. ;) I know I could not be mad at him he's just to darn cute and sweet! Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: whatmorecanigive Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2013 12:55 am Title: Chapter 3 - Just call her!

youre lovely Haley...youre just so

Author's Response: Aww thanks honey bunch your so lovely yourself. Thanks for reading sweetie, luv you :)

Reviewer: ilovemj1973 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2013 12:00 am Title: Chapter 3 - Just call her!

I love this ...please update soon cant wait to see where this goes :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much i'm glad your enjoying it. I'll try to update in a day or two. Keep a close eye on this story you never know the twist and turns it will have?? HAHA thank you for reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2013 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Just call her!

I hope he decides to get to know her for himself, instead of using his P.I.'s info..



Author's Response: I hope so too, but will see. Thanks for reading and commenting <3

Reviewer: whatmorecanigive Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2013 09:10 am Title: Chapter 2 - First seeing her

Oh I love this, Veronica is so daring XD I could never ever contain myself like then if Michael would ask me about my number XD She seems realy interesting, I can't wait to read how she and Michael get along :P

This sounds like its going to be an ice relationship at some point, cause theyre both so daring ^^



Author's Response: Veronica is very cute, just like her pic. Me either honey I would probably faint on the spot or be laughing like a idiot XD You have to wait and see what happens sis ;) I want it to have lots of ice moments but you know I sorta get embaressed about that, but hopefully I will. Thanks for reviewing honey bunch luv you <3

Reviewer: whatmorecanigive Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2013 09:08 am Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome to New York

I l.o.v.e. this chapter, its so adorable how you wrote the scene with Michaels children. And how Karen saw in his eyes that something was bothering him       *gasp* love it!!!

The end was cool "showtime" XD

I love this story sweetie XD

Junie foreveerrrr ^^ ( nobody that reads this review, exept you, will get it XD ) <3



Author's Response: Aww thanks sis, i'm glad you like it. I know Paris and Prince are so darling like their daddy :) Karen does seem like the person that could tell if something was bugging Michael, even if she did I think have the hots for him XD You like the ending part im so happy honey bunch. Aww you do thanks so much sis I love you *kisses* Thats right Junie forever and ever!!!! XD

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