Date: Nov 30, 2014 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 13
Hey just letting you know I'm still around not forgotten about this story. I hope you continue and I hope it get's finished unlike so many other stories on here that go abandoned. I love the two new chapters thanks for posting and I hope you post again soon! I still love this story big time!
Author's Response:
I'll have a new chapter for you real soon! Thanks for sticking with it, that means a lot!
[Report This]Date: Nov 27, 2014 10:35 am Title: Chapter 13
Susie aint your friend! I loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
[Report This]Date: Nov 27, 2014 01:18 am Title: Chapter 13
Wow! I was not expecting that :O
Author's Response:
And neither was Mike!!! Thanks for reviewing d84;a039;
Date: Nov 26, 2014 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
loving it so far
Author's Response:
Thanks for the read and the review! I hope to keep you entertained as the story continues.
[Report This]Date: Nov 20, 2014 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 12
Hang on....I he using the crowbar again? Just a question lol.
I'm hoping for the next chapter someone catches him of something I'm not really good at the whole suspense thing.
but hey if you like the idea why not right :P
Author's Response:
Thanks for the read and review. I hope chapter 13 is more to your liking and garners a higher rating than 2/5 :P
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2014 10:20 am Title: Chapter 12
Lol Unsurprising but awesome chapter Ria! Mike is wrapped around Susie's finger still and is off to commit murder number 2. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
There you go my love, a nice juicy chapter for you! If you saw this coming I'll eat my fedora!
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2014 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 12
:D I'm excited for what's to come!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the read and review! Nw chapter update for ya! Hope you like it!
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2014 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 11
XD You had the same chapter notes for "Man In the Mirror". You awesome thing you. Aw Michael, you weak weak man, too crazy in love to notice Susie'll be his downfall. Since I want Mikey to be saved, I say he doesn't kill, tell her taking another life will send him to the cookoo club which he does not wanna go. Then just see how it goes! Lol. Excellent chapter!
Author's Response:
Well spotted! XD I didn't plan it that way but the comments were appropriate for both :D Keep your eyes peeled for an update very soon and we'll see just what Michael decides to do! x
Date: Mar 15, 2014 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 11
I get the feeling he's going to go through with it. Lust and passion can do strange things to a guy lol. So glad you posted! I hope you update more often! I still love this story and have not forgotten it!
Author's Response:
I am writing chapter 12 as we speak! Thanks so much for sticking by the story, much love x
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2014 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 10
This BBBBBBBBBBBBBB!!!!!! DON'T KILL RYAN STUUUUPPPPAAAADDDDD!!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 27, 2013 06:28 am Title: Chapter 9
Interesting story. I hope u continue.
Author's Response:
I shall indeed my dear :D thanks for the read and review
Date: Aug 26, 2013 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 9
SO glad you're back girl! I missed this story so much. I'm glad you're updating again. I hope you finish this. I always check to see if there are any updates here. I never forgot about you hehe. Update again soon?
Author's Response:
Thank you love :D I have really big plans for this story so stay tuned! Thanks so much for sticking with me xxx
Date: Aug 25, 2013 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 5
Dang I still like Miguel though im not gonna lie. I know soon Michael is gonna start babying her....well he already do.
Author's Response:
Wait and see darling!
x mwah x
Date: Aug 25, 2013 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love Miguel. He is a bad boy. What did he say though. Come on Ria tell me.
Author's Response:
Hahaha he is a bit of a bad boy....but how bad? Miguel yelled at Michael "Fuck you asshole!" he's not the most polite young man!
x mwah x
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2013 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 9
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO_OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
YA MAKE ME WANNA SAY OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great chapter and I still don't trust Susie. She's a little liar and deciever and skank. Still love Ali and Mikey needs some help. I'm so happy for this story to be back!! Day=Made!:-))))))))))))))))))))
Author's Response:
Thank you so much darling xxx I really appreciate how you've stuck by this story. It really has a special place in my heart and I have BIG plans for it!
x mwah x
Ria