Date: Apr 18, 2013 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like your honest responses and how your being mature about it. Unlike others up here. Half them can't even take what i say.
There so spoild from getting to many good reviews fo probably something that's not all that great. I'm not here to down anyone i can't believe these authors up here are getting offended at me.
I don't wanna lie to people on here. If i like it i like it. If I don't i don't. I will be straight up about it and tell you how i feel and what i think you should do to approve.
Is that a crime? If i come off as a little tough doesn't mean that im being mean or judgemental about it. I never thought the truth would get you in some mess. I thought the truth she'll set you free. Looks like don't........
I've been on ther site leaving comments and they don't get upset and dramatic about like the way these authors does's on here.
Can you tell me something that idk about this site please? This is most sensetive one i been barely wanna accept my constructive criticsisim.
Idk how anyone will make it in the world like that?
I get judged but i don't take it the wrong way i just better my self and learn from it that's all it takes.
Btw i like you yanagirl i actually feel more free talking to you about this.
Thank you for your humbled and honesty to.
Author's Response:
I wish I could give you a solid reason as to why authors on this site are more sensitive, but I don't know for sure although I do know that this has been brought up in the past and a lot of people agree with you. I think it's because a lot of authors on this site are teenagers (Hell, I'm a teenager myself) and as a teenager we tend to take things a bit more personally than an adult would. I used to take things SO offensively when I was like 14, but now I'm over that stage. Some people aren't, and some people are just more sensitive than others.
I agree, you shouldn't have to lie just make sure that you're being polite about it (which in my opinion you are, but make sure to keep it up).
Everyone gets judged at some point; some people just handle it differently than others. I like to laugh and make a joke about it :P Some people ignore it. Some people put it into consideration and try to fix it. Some people cry about it. Some people get mad... It all depends on who you are really, and what you've been through, and how you've been raised...
Don't take it to heart if someone gets offended though, everyone on this site is really kind and nice I can assure you, they just react differently to criticism and it may come off a bit as rude.
Yay! Haha! I like you too! You're honest and some people need a wake-up call! But trust me, a lot of people on this site like honest people, ShellApple for instance, is CRAZY honest and a lot of people appreciate that about her :)
Thanks for talking to me! I enjoy having an honest and intelligent conversation every once in awhile :P
Date: Apr 18, 2013 03:21 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm glad you accepted what i said.
Because some authors won't handle my honesty. If they wanna be so real and serious about there fics the why not give them serious and honest reviews?
It's only fair. I'm not gonna sit up here pretend that everyone is great on here. I've read many stories with great writers and they still mess up in there own ways. No writer is perfect all will flop once in a while.
I may be the only truthful on here on the site. I also read other fics that's not Mj's and i give honest reviews.
I respect you for accepting my review your pretty strong i see. Lol You and two other authors handled my reviews well.
As for the others umm there a bit sensetive about it. One erased mines while the other got offended.
I'm not trying to hurt no one's feelings here. I'm just being honest that's all. Everyone is great authors on here i just wanna be real with people's mistakes in my opinions though.
And thank you so much for responding to this. Your really friendly! And don't worry you'll be amazing soon!
Author's Response:
I got the feeling that you gave honest reviews when I read your Penname ;) haha!
It's constructive criticism, and there's nothing wrong with that at all! Even I'm aware that some of my stories are better than others. Hell, there are a bunch I'm not that proud of, but whatever, it's not my job to write amazing fanfics, I just choose to write fanfics (whether they turn out amazing or not depends).
You should be real with the mistakes, otherwise they'll never get fixed! And please don't ever feel intimidated to review on one of my stories even if it's not a review saying; OMG BETS STORY EVER!!! Because I actually appreciate the constructive criticism and honesty very much! I promise you I won't get offended by it at all!
Haha I wouldn't say my reaction makes me strong since I didn't get offended in the first place ;)
And no problem! I respond to all of my reviews so it would be a bit unfair to leave one out :P
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2013 10:58 am Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE this concept!
girl, u KNOW how i feel about new world order/illuminati/mind control type stuff and this is just.....YAAAAASSSSS!!!!!!! :D
i agree, ive never thought Michael wasnt masculine enough (im assuming that this was from his point of view). I dont think muscle=manly.
Ironic, i know, with my body building father who has been nicknamed
"the incredible hulk fae mastrick!" ("From Mastrick" where he lives lol)
but i still dont believe in that stereotype, despite his insistance that its true :P
so psyched for this girl!!
<3
Author's Response:
I agree. Muscle does not make a man. But there were all of those rumors that him and Janet were the same person (wtf?? lol) and that he was a girl/ wanted to be a girl so I decided "why not?" but I have something else that I'll use later as well ;)
Lol! I love how you type it the way it would be pronounced and have to give a translation next to it ;)
Thank yoooooooooooooou!
<33
Date: Mar 31, 2013 02:23 am Title: Chapter 1
It's a very interesting plot sweetie. This first chapter was really well written. I like this idea of having only one year to live and to see if he will succeed to stay alive.
The idea of being locked and killed because you're strange it's quite frightenning to be honest...To have tests, the officers coming for locking you...Fortunately, it's not like this in real life even if being strange and different isn't easy for some people.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm happy you think so!
Thank God it's not like that in real life; the world would be so boring if everyone was forced to be the same! :P
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2013 12:56 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm looking foward to more updates soon.
GO GO GO
Author's Response:
Haha! Thank you!
I WILL I WILL I WILL
;)
Date: Mar 30, 2013 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm internally crying xD Omg it's so good! I can't wait for it to continue :D This is going to be great!
Author's Response:
Haha! Thank you! I'll aim for getting a new chapter up soon :P
Date: Mar 30, 2013 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like it. Seems very interesting, can't wait for more. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much ^-^ I'll try and post the next chapter soon :P
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2013 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Omfg, this is good c6;👍😆
Author's Response:
Haha thank you! :D
Date: Mar 30, 2013 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like it! No, actually I love the idea. For the very first time, it's not about mike and a girl, thank you, lord!
I think Imma enjoy reading this one!
Shiniee xx
Author's Response:
Haha! Thank you! yeah, I've been getting kind of tired of writing about Michael being in love with someone, so I decided to try this out :P
Thank you! :D