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Reviewer: EmjayS_gal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2013 10:56 am Title: Chapter 5

Thanks 4 ur kind words. But it has been possible bcuz of all of US...

Reviewer: MJFan232 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2013 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 5

Neat so far. :) Very awesome, as well as suspenseful and well-written, too. I like it. :)

Keep up your super-neat, very creative and beautifully phenomenal writing! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, I am humbled :)

Reviewer: EmjayS_gal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 04, 2013 11:07 am Title: Chapter 5

I can't stop crying. It seems sureal. If I were there I'd do everything possible to be there for him and seting him free even if it cost me my freedom. He's still the only one my heart belongs to...*weeping*

Author's Response:

EmjayS_gal I can comprehend with everything that must be passing in your head, but the best thing to believe is that whereaver Michael is right now - we gotta pray for him. We really do, and remember this, always remember this and I am very serious when I say this - Michael Jackson was alive for 50 years only because of supportive fans like you, otherwise the media and the pressure would have crushed him way before. It is because of the children of the world, and you. Continue this. Not only for Michael, but for ALL the people like him. I marvel at your spirit. I really do.

Reviewer: MyraJ25 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2013 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 5

u write this like it actually happened to you or someone.love everything bout it even if it makes me cry.nd i say tht truthfully from my heart.



Author's Response:

Oh my sweetheart, please don't cry? Michael wouldn't want you to cry, right? Just continue to heal the world and bring out his message of love in every deed. It will make you and him and all of us happy and a world a better place. I am glad my stories are affecting you in such a powerful way but I hope it motivates you :D don't cry! you are beautiful!. 

 

 

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2013 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 5

aww poor Michael i love this he will finde love



Author's Response:

Keep reading for that :D The chapter will be out soon ;)

Reviewer: MyraJ25 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2013 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 4

this is the first story on this website tht i shade a tear of saddness.which is a good thing.



Author's Response:

*wipes a tear away* *gives a hug* 

Reviewer: MJFan232 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2013 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 4

Wow. Neat so far. :) I can't wait to read the next chapter, too.

Keep up your super-neat, very creative and beautifully phenomenal writing! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :) so so SO much.

Reviewer: lolitabunny Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2013 11:04 am Title: Chapter 4

Mind blowing
Love every chapter

Author's Response:

Thank you very much :D 

Reviewer: Jrmspfingston Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2013 10:05 am Title: Chapter 4

More, more, more



Author's Response:

Yes! Yes! Yes! :) soon!

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2013 08:00 am Title: Chapter 4

wow that was beautiful please next part



Author's Response:

Yup, will be out soon :) thank you

Reviewer: briarae92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2013 03:41 am Title: Chapter 1

first time reader <3



Author's Response:

And I am glad you enjoyed. You are welcome here to read further :)

Reviewer: lolitabunny Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2013 09:18 am Title: Chapter 1

I so love this story

Author's Response:

Aw you do? Thank you very much

Reviewer: Skyler_Love_MJJ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2013 11:40 am Title: Chapter 3

Omg i love this story <3

please tell me its turning to love story :D?



Author's Response:

You gotta keep reading for that. Ahem. Ahem. ;)

Reviewer: StrawBerryMilkshake Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2013 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oooooh I like this X3 please continue :D



Author's Response:

Anything for your amusement :) I hope you love the twist.

Reviewer: MJFan232 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2013 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 3

Neat so far. :) I like it.

And I hope that Michael will appear to both Aziza and Carmela when the time is right, as well as tell Aziza that he was *not* a pedophile, as she so wrongfully dubbed him, but a man with a childlike heart and an innocence in his soul. (I can also imagine him telling her to put herself in his shoes and have those who dislike her see her as a pedophile. She sure wouldn't like that at all. Not one bit.)

Of course, he sees Carmela as a young woman who has beauty and as a flower swaying in the wind.

Keep up your super-neat, very creative and beautifully phenomenal writing! :)



Author's Response:

That has to be one of the most loveliest reviews I have ever received. I am grateful for readers like you. Thank you :)

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