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Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2013 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 9

MOMMA PASSED AWAY?!?!?!?!?!?! WTHHHHHHHH

Omg I feel so so badddd oh my gosh, I cant imagine... :'(

Poor Lola, and Michaels gonna need to console her BIG time.

I love this story so so so much!!! I cant even put into words, its magical. Michael himself would have loved this. The emotion, the passion, the carefully written chapters, the perspective, the plot... the sex ;)

I am like inlove with this fic XD

Cant wait for more, girl! You're amazing. I mean that!! <3 :)

Reviewer: Mikayla Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2013 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 6

Oh my god, there needs to be more of this!

Reviewer: Mikayla Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2013 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 4

Oh my god, Michael's so cute.

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2013 07:06 am Title: Chapter 1

What a beautiful, heart warming story. You are a great writer. I love this story and can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: AppleheadJax Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2013 09:54 am Title: Chapter 4

Ohhh they were talking like old friends xD like they actually did know eachother for years. I can tell they'll be good friends c: I wonder whether Janet will like her. Lol, seems like she will, just guessing though :p 

 

Keep up the GREAT writing. Its amazing. I love you<3 Im actually rereading To Follow Your Heart xD it took me a 3 hours to read the whole 30 chapters because I kept giggling and swooning :p 

 

Much LOVE,

Shiniee xD



Author's Response:

Thank you. God bless you. I love you more ;) <3

Reviewer: AppleheadJax Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2013 09:51 am Title: Chapter 3

Oh fuck she was about to get gangraped. Michael to the rescue. Yeahhh lol xD the way he said would you like to be my friend? Omg that was so cuteeeeee xDDD she have 50 dollars to get her flower and note to MJ. Wow, shows the heart of a true michael Jackson supporter. :-* great chapter.

 

Much Love,

Shiniee xD



Author's Response:

haha can you just imagine being rescued by Michael...? I'd faint lol 

Michael was always wanting to ask random people to be his friend. He was so cute ^_^

Reviewer: AppleheadJax Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2013 09:48 am Title: Chapter 2

Awww this was sweet, when she met MJ, and said that. So sweet. I was smiling widely :-) 

You know, even if this is so different from 'To Follow Your Heart', I can feel the same kind of emotions. I know I saw this a lot, but you truly have a gift :)

 

Much love,

Shiniee xx



Author's Response:

Aw :') thank you so much! <3

Reviewer: briarae92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2013 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

This chapter had chills run down my spine.

Reviewer: SpiceGirls4Ever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2013 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 2

I'm loving this story. I hope Michael is able to find a friend in Lola, someone he can trust. Plus I love Dangerous Era Michael even though this is a part of the Dangerous Era that I would like to forget.



Author's Response:

Yes, wouldn't we all love to forget that part. Thank you for the kind words. Much love <3

Reviewer: AppleheadJax Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2013 11:56 am Title: Chapter 1

Omg I love this idea too. I started CRYING, just like when in To Follow Your Heart she takes the bullet for MJ. I can tell this will be a good fanfic. The emotions are very well written. The sadness of losing a child, that truly touched me. The idea is good. Keep up the good work. 👍 :)

 

Much Love,

Shiniee xx



Author's Response:

Thank you lovely. This was oringally my first fanfic written on another site. I didn't like how the first one turned out so I'm rewriting it. Thank you for your support and kindness. It really means more than you know <3

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