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Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2016 06:40 pm Title: Neverland

Great chapter!💯👏

I understand René and I can understand why she is concerned about how the world will view her. Hell, let's face it, nobody wants to be pitied.

I couldn't have even imagined that Mel was conceived through trickery! I mean, don't get me wrong, I knew that chic was crazy based on how she behaved when meeting René, and I know that groupies will try to trap a man...damn, Michael has shitted and stepped in it, because he's stuck with her crazy ass, and it's only a matter of time before she has another psychotic episode, once she realizes that all of her shananagans didn't work for real.

Glenn Close in "Fatal Attraction" come to mind. We'll see how it goes. I do have one question: René should have asked MJ WHY did he even have condoms in his bag, when he's married and they don't use them....?🔎🔦 I'd hate for him to have lied again and fuck shit up.

Thanks! More please 🍵📝. PS,I'm 📆 Lol.

Reviewer: Crazyme55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2016 12:11 pm Title: Neverland

I really hope Renee can heal her heart and get back with Michael. I hope Michael doesn't screw up.

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2015 07:45 pm Title: Her Eyes Look Like Mine

Aww...brought tears to my eyes for real; I can't lie. Sigh...

I understand her feelings though; most women AND men would, because that little girl is irrefutable proof and evidence of his cheating and Renee feels humiliated because everyone in the world would know her husband was cheating on her. Totally different for friends and family to know it versus the world and everyone pitying her and talking.Sigh.

I'm hoping they can connect again, because Michael truly seems to have changed and is repentant about his failure as a man and husband, though I did feel his looking at Alex and talking about she looked good was wack. However, realistically the man has eyes, and he can't really avoid the woman.

He owes it to Renee to be completely honest about that woman. Renee shouldn't have to do anything. It's all on him. If he REALLY wants another chance, he should have to grovel for it.They need to stop having sex though, because it seems to be producing guilt,emotions, and feelings of euphoria and escapism temporarily.

Thanks! Know when you can update again?

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2015 08:01 am Title: Ok Jackson!

Lol. These two, I tell ya'! 😂 All this sex they're having with no condom...they gonna mess around and be expecting. 👌

The little girl seems cute, and the kids seem to accept her.

Alex, her mom though; what's the hoe's story, BC definitely knew Michael was married when she slept with him. She was all giddy about meeting Renee and for what? Most mistresses are afraid the wife is going to beat that ass... and what did MJ tell her about their divorce and apparent back togetherness again?

I have questions that need answers pilot. Lol

Author's Response:

Haha it's coming. Don't worry :) I won't let you down !

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 11, 2015 07:09 pm Title: Monopoly is always fun!

Girl, keep it coming! You're on an update roll and I 💖 it!👌

Lol, I was going to comment on the name too, since it was Ria. However, at this point, it's a moot point.

I feel for René; she's strong, BC I would've asked Alex how long she was fucking my husband. I feel really bad for Micah. Poor boy knows what his dad did, and now he sees yet another result, that little girl, and he knows that deep down René is bothered, which shouldn't be unexpected, IMO.

Now, Michael is the only one responsible for trying to make the best of this situation and try to soothe the feelings of his ex-wife and their children.

These two and their freak sex activities! Lol. They playing these little games, when all they want to do is screw. René hiding behind her hurt a lot still, when her eyes betray her. Lol. Michael is just straight feigning Lordt. 😂

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2015 09:19 am Title: Michael You Ain't Slick!

Where's the damn water to put their fire and mine out, Jesus!!! 😭😹😿


Girl, you did that! 👌

I knew these two were playing games, because ain't no way in HELL, they were going to be able to keep their hands, lips,and body parts to themselves; chemistry and lust were too strong.

Cues R. Kelly's "Your Body's Calling for Me."

P.S. In the next chapter, since Bill and the kids are looking for them to play "Monopoly," I think they should catch them in the act; throw Rena in their too, with her "unexpected" visit. Lol. Mouths would drop and eyes would pop out of heads! 😂😼🙈

Michael and that 👅turned Renee ass OUT! 💃She wasn't ready! 🆘b

More please...this is me now 👀👀👏

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 06, 2015 04:54 pm Title: 2 steps forward...

Squeals!!!👌

Ms. Rena is funny. Lol. She wasn't playing with Michael at ALL! 💯Jaceon is a mess and rooting for them, right along with Nana.

I like Houston. He seems like a good man, who's changed from a hoe like Michael into a great husband for Cheyenne.

Michael and Renee are too cute and I love the hope their kids have for their family to get back together. Aww and lol at them all peeping through the window watching them kiss. Nosy asses, lol. 👈

P.S. I wonder what Michaels driver thinks about his little late night rendezvous... Lol.

Thank you! Loved it. 💋💖c6;👊👏

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 06, 2015 09:58 am Title: Then There's Ms. Rena

Thanks!! It was a little awkward, to be honest. But, who is Ms. Rose? I thought Rene's mamma's name was Rena?

OK, back to the story. Lol. I thought Rena knew about what happened in their marriage. She knew about him sleeping with that hoe of an ex-friend of Rene's, and his other child. Speaking of his other child, when exactly does he plan on introducing these children and Renee, and who is the mother? If it's someone she knows, Michael can consider his chances DEAD, and I wouldn't blame Renee at all.

In addition, Renee needs to stop fronting, she knows she wants that man!All that staring she was doing and lusting...Girl, she's dick-whipped and needs to stop playing! LOL.

Please update again soon, as I was dying waiting with my nosy ass. LOL

Author's Response:

Girl I'm not even gonna lie haha I forgot her name forgive me 😳😩😩!! Just wait it's sooner than you think girl! Lol stay tuned! I'm trying to update all of my stories as frequently as I can. Thanks for keeping up though haha 

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2015 02:08 pm Title: Is that a yes or?

Awww shit, here this nucca is again! Ugh, LOL. Now,is the time for Micah to sneak call the Big Man (his daddy) and squash this little damn reunion. I am rooting for Michael because with all that talking Trey was doing, he was no better than Michael. He was a liar too. Imo, he lied worst, while pretending. And, having Renee think their child would be his first. I just KNOW, there's some other shot he's hiding; more skeletons in his closet.

Hint, hint. ;) LOL.

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2015 01:45 pm Title: Dinner and A offer

YASS! Lol. For all this talking the both of them are doing about "friendship" they don't even realize that everyone else around them is watching in fascination. These "friends" are calling each other "baby" and staring into each other's eyes. LOL.

I think Michael is putting his best foot forward and surprisingly, Renee is finding a way to come around. I think it's fantastic!

Renee need to stop playing. You know you wanna say YES girl! (In my Floetry voice)" All you gotta do is say yes. Don't deny what you feel, let me address it baby. " ;)

Micah is so cute. The little guy is rooting for them, and he knows what's up, judging by his mother's dressing up and the light she's carrying on the night of the date.

More, more, please!

Reviewer: eazybreezy2015 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2015 05:18 am Title: It's Not The Same

I don't blame her for moving on. Wat else is she supposed to do?  Mike just don't wannna change. Dam Trey is foine!!  lol XD



Author's Response:

Lol right , yes he is girl ! Lol . Enjoy

Reviewer: eazybreezy2015 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2015 04:58 am Title: The Surprise Guest Has Arrived!

You go girl. 2 can play the cheating game 

Reviewer: eazybreezy2015 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2015 04:51 am Title: Lessons For The Lover

She was right to  leave him coz he really need to get his shit together and get rid of Tatiana

Reviewer: eazybreezy2015 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2015 04:39 am Title: I Can't Win

Man his better get it together and wat is Tatiana doing there?

Reviewer: syl Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 20, 2015 04:05 pm Title: Sticking My foot in

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