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Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2016 10:15 pm Title: Could You See Yourself With Me Again?

She's not a bad mother she's just after the wrong thing and generally wants Michael to spend more time with Melanie , full custody isn't necessary just an agreement 

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2016 08:24 pm Title: Could You See Yourself With Me Again?

You outdid yourself again!👏 YASS...keep em' coming!😆📝

Ooh...Jan is pregnant for real! Hot damn, it's about to knock the fan over! Michael might gag at this relationship and pregnancy news, but if he has any sense, he'll know he's in no position to judge.

Aww...this time between father and son was needed and I loved it.

Regarding Renée and MJ and her feelings still about his baby mama drama-at least he understands. Now, if he goes for full custody, the question will be if his family understands. Mainly his ex-wife/current girlfriend and his kids, especially Micah, sense he understood more than Carlie about his dad's infidelity, divorce, and the reason Melanie even exists.

Thanks! 👌👏🙋

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2016 05:21 pm Title: Set You Free

OMG, yes girl, keep these updates coming! 👏😆

I see you Michael! That was so sweet what he did for her. The shopping spree, diamonds and pearls, dress and shoes... Swoons🙆💏👰👸

Poor Michael is about to burst!😤 Lol. Renée better stop playing before that man throw her down 💪💪 and make her say 👂👂 his name!😂

How cute is Micah with his little ponytail like daddy and Carlie with her little dress.

Now, since the media has caught on and reported on them, I wouldn't be surprised if Alexandria tells the media about Melanie now to try and blowup Michaels spot and dampen Renee's trip, even though she's accepted the little girl and forgiven Michael. That other thot Lena been too quiet!

I love Bill! He needs a woman. Miss Rena is single💅👩

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2016 05:09 pm Title: I Think I'm Ready To Love You

Aww...this was a fantastic chapter! 👌💋 Michael has really changed and he's doing his best to prove it to his woman; nothing wrong with that at all.💐

Lord, lol Michael is feigning like a dog in heat! Renée too. She's playing tough and about to kill herself. Lol. She wants the 🍆. 😂👀👅💯

I love Tonya. She reminds me of a cousin of mine who's down for me with whatever, as long as I'm not being hurt or hurting anybody. 🙆👭 I really hope she haves the 👶 she deserves.

This will be b32; if all three of them (Janet, Renée and Tonya) are all pregnant at the same time!

The only issue will be if Michael trips about Jan and Jerrell, especially if she's pregnant by him.

Thanks 👏👍

Reviewer: syl Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2016 08:47 am Title: Set You Free

They're so cute.. just give I  Renee

Reviewer: DAngERouS2200 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2016 10:44 pm Title: Set You Free

I love this story so much! Glad to see Michael has really changed and that him and Renee are giving it another try! Poor Michael, Renee is serious about not giving him any lol. He is just suffering 😂 loved this! 

Reviewer: syl Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2016 01:00 pm Title: Chocolate is a sin!

Renee know she want him..

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2016 08:42 pm Title: Chocolate is a sin!

🙎😮...Renée girl, stop resiting and "Give Into the Fire!"💃😂👅b32;💯

She knows she wants the 🍆; he knows it and Tonya knows it. 💅👀👂 Now all I need for them to do is go at it, and Tonya comes back having left something and catches them ass out getting it. Lol.

I bet she'd be in the other suite at the wall like 👂👀👀

Thank you! I love quick and fast updates👏👌👍🙌

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2016 02:32 pm Title: Confusion and Conclusion

OMG!! The fuck is going on!? Janet done really brought James and he actually agreed that she and Jerrelle should be together...girl, pick my mouth up off the floor! 😲😂

Lord, Renée done invited Tonya. Lol. She trying hard to not give up the goods, even using Tonya as interference, lol.

More please. Please tell me this isn't the end? I'm hoping you'll make this a trilogy. I love it! 👌👍👏

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2016 02:28 pm Title: What You Won't Do For Love

Girl! I spit my juice out literally at this conversation between Renee and that crazy Alex, lol. Chic is a grade A gold digger and proud of it. I agree with Renée though, that she doesn't feel sorry for Michael that he's going to have to put up with that crazy heifer. He made his bed so he has to lie in it.

I too, feel bad for Melanie, because she will always be known privately and publicly as a child created from infidelity; essentially, an "accident."

Alex seems more interested in Melanie than her son. I guess his daddy ain't got that Michael money.

Janet!?🙊😲

Reviewer: syl Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2016 05:34 pm Title: What You Won't Do For Love

Janet pregnant 

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2016 11:00 am Title: Well Hello

Aww shit!Now, why did Renée agree to this meeting? That Alex chick is crazy, but I guess curiosity got the best of Renée. Michael did suggest it. I only wonder, if she will tell the truth or lie and make their encounter (her and MJ) more than what is was...👀👀👀👀👂

Now, this is why I kinda wish Bill would have agreed with Michael telling Renée about her visitation for money stunt, that way Renée would already know she's got an ax to grind.🚫👀

Janet and Jerrelle: girl, I can't deal! Lol. They really about to shake up the family! Lol.😂🙌

Ooh...and I see Renée is eating like a pregnant woman...I mean, she and MJ have had sex at least 3 times unprotected, so it's definitely possible. I know their kids would love it.💅👀🍆👅👌

More tea please! I'm foaming at the mouth. Please don't keep me in suspense too long. Lol😂💯🙋👍👌

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Author's Response:

Isn't Janet and Jarell crazy? 😂😂 hopefully she isn't pregnant , if so Joe won't be a happy father. 

Bill prob should have kept that advice a thought cuz Renee has gone through enough .

but hopefully Alex isn't too bitchy in this convo, but thanks for reading girl! I have more coming your way!!

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2016 09:05 pm Title: Promise Me

Aww shit, the plot just keeps thickening! Girl, you keep bringing the "juice!"👏💯

Now, Lawd, Jerrell and Janet have really backed themselves into a corner. She's ENGAGED and may be pregnant by another man; her brother in law too!? 💅 a33; straight b32;.

Now, to Alex...ugh, that trick is crazy! She don't want Michael to spend time with Malanie. She wants him to spend time with HER. She's a straight gold digger who got pregnant for a come up and Michael dumbass fell for it. Sigh.

I see she is a professional gold digger too. Has another kid by another wealthy man. Wonder if he was or is married too, since that seems to be her MO.

Aww at Renee calling Mike to confess the truth. He's shocked because he thought she would never come around. Now, he needs to treat her right and be honest. I understand Bill saying not to say nothing to Renee right now about the drama with Alex, but he already took her through lies and betrayal and she's giving him a second chance based on his promises. He don't need to start it out with lies. Just tell her straight up and get her input. Afterall, if he sues for custody of that little girl, Renee would be raising her.

Thank you! 😆👍

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2016 01:25 am Title: Promise Me

Please continue to add more chapters to the story.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2016 01:23 am Title: Promise Me

Wow! I hope that this will do the trick...

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