Date: Jun 23, 2013 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 1 who is she?
You go Atianna. Make him seethe with jealousy. Sometimes you don't appreciate what you have until it's gone.
Author's Response:
You damn skippy!!!
Date: Jun 23, 2013 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 59 I'm done....
To hell with them rules *throws my hands up in the air* sorry Mike
Author's Response:
hahaha Cali_Santana, you're the best!
Date: Jun 23, 2013 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 58 a choice..
Oh shit some problems are gonna start if she calls him
Author's Response:
Yes they will! but I think Atianna needs to assert her independence!
Date: Jun 23, 2013 11:45 am Title: Chapter 58 a choice..
Chile I can't.. I just can't. Did this bish REALLY ask him for permission? Lmaoooooo I'm done. And this fool said he will think about it?! There's so much shit wrong here, it ain't even funny. *throws hands up* I am finished chile.
I cannot. Nope.
Author's Response:
hahahaha you had me cracking up! You will love the latest chapter so tear it up lol
Date: Jun 23, 2013 10:22 am Title: Chapter 57 Enough
Damn the ultimatum is serious....she better lay it out all on the table and tell him how she really feel
Author's Response:
I will have some good stuff coming up my love!
Date: Jun 23, 2013 10:14 am Title: Chapter 57 Enough
Yet again, Michael bye. Get the fuck outta here. You don't own that girl and you don't even have the balls to ask to be her man. You want her as your puppet so she can be on call for you and only you when you want some attention? Niggrum please. Ati deserves so much more. She needs to end this bullshit ass agreement. Michael clearly thinks he can have his cake and eat it too. This fool is berating her like she's his child.. Like she has to answer to him. They have a friends with benefits relationship! She don't owe him a damn thing! She needs to tell his skinny ass where to get off, I'm telling you. I truly hope she continues to see Aadarsh and has sex with him. I'm sick of Michael's controlling, coward ass.
Author's Response:
You are some kind of strong! I got some inspiration from this!
Date: Jun 23, 2013 06:55 am Title: Chapter 56 Answer me
"You need to get to the car NOW and head straight to the hotel and wait for me"
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WTH? Oh yeah, sum sh*t gotta change quick fast and in a hurry. This negro done lost his mind. Got the nerve to have his nostrils all busted open cause the girl had a friendly chat. So what- he's got her under video surveillance to? And here's what really messed me up. The damn guard had the gall to be pissed. Where was his shaky @zz when she tried to call? I'm so hoping Atianna sets his stick thin @zz straight. She ain't gotta have a mini tantrum but she does need to get her point across. The only difference in Mike and her first pimp is he's using Psychological abuse instead of physical to control her.
Mamaspearl, u bout to make me forget all about my cup of cider and snatch a cancer stick with this story here. LOl!!! *
Author's Response:
Why don't you tell me how you really feel! You are a smart cookie, you see what is going on! I thought I was being slick lol
Date: Jun 23, 2013 03:22 am Title: Chapter 56 Answer me
Oh damn! I'm just praying Mike don't hit her but if he do Atianna you know what to do girl. Grab that knife and cut that fool or shank him which ever one floats your boat. Come girl update this shit so i can see what Michael gone say
Author's Response:
Damn ya'll, you're all a bunch of crazy bitches! lol but I love the family so I will be updating soon
Date: Jun 23, 2013 03:17 am Title: Chapter 55 What's wrong?
Ohhh shit! Mike funna snap
Author's Response:
Mike was so passionate on stage..I just know he was passionate in life too!
Date: Jun 23, 2013 01:01 am Title: Chapter 1 who is she?
OK Michael, bye. You have no right to get pissed and jealous when you are fucking that old Elvis looking hag. If he doesn't want a relationship that's fine, then Atianna should be allowed to see other people too. And she should definitely be allowed to have as many friends as she wants. He doesn't own her. Hell if I was Atianna I would fuck that other dude out of spite and make sure that Michael finds out about it. I'd tape that shit and send it to him LOL.
Eventually Michael is going to have to either give her the relationship she deserves or let her go. She needs to make this clear to him. What they have is a temporary arrangement and if she meets someone who will truly love her instead of treating her like a piece of personal property, he needs to know that she will leave. His selfish ass needs a major wake-up call.
Ugh I hope he becomes less of a controlling prick as the story goes on. Right now I just want to punch him. I know that Atianna was in a desperate situation when he found her but she is such a sweetheart. She deserves better.
Author's Response:
Well welcome to the family first off...I don't know what is going to happen quite yet...but thanks for the input
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2013 12:19 am Title: Chapter 56 Answer me
I know Michael is not angry at Atianna for talking to another man, lol. He is tripping and out of line for talking to her like that. I hope Atianna puts him in his place.
Author's Response:
Well from what I heard, Michael could get jealous so I wanted to make Michael a real man with real emotions..not some perfect martyr
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2013 12:13 am Title: Chapter 55 What's wrong?
Did Michael follow Atianna? He has no trust in her at all, smh. Seriously he needs back up off her and give her some space. If he doesn't he'll end up pushing her away.
Author's Response:
keep reading!!! Some shit is about to happen
Date: Jun 23, 2013 12:09 am Title: Chapter 56 Answer me
Oh HELLLLLLL NO chile! Atianna needs to stop acting like Michael is her fuckin daddy! Girl bye, he ain't even your man! She can talk to, fuck, etc whomever she wants. I wish she'd realize that. Michael does not own her, shit isn't he the one who always emphasizes and makes it clear that they aren't together or anything like that? Ati better stop being so fuckin weak and tell his narrow ass where to get off! He does not own her. He ain't her man, husband, daddy, none of that. I hope she keeps Aadarsh around, he's cute and seems very respectful. Michael done lost his damn mind. Unh unh chile, I'm not feeling that. She better go off and really tell him about himself. I hate that she has this warped ass thinking. Like Michael is her damn master or some shit, girl bye. She better check his ass NOW! I really hope she'll fuck Aadarsh now. I see a point needs to be made. Michael thinks he can just do whatever and whoever the hell he wants, and Ati is just his damn salve and does whatver he tells her? No ma'am!
Author's Response:
Calm down there killer! I will be updating soon so keep reading...
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2013 12:01 am Title: Chapter 54 Don't start..
Even though they have this agreement between them it doesn't mean someone's feelings won't be hurt and in this case it was Atianna. Michael is very demanding of her and in trying to protect her he's holding on to her to tight. She needs some freedom to what she wants. He needs to trust her.
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2013 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 53 Not now..
Atianna should just went on ahead and kicked Lisa Marie's ass, lol. And what's the deal with Michael hooking up with Lisa Marie? That's why she won't leave cause she hooked on his bed room skils. He tap that ass to good last time he was with her, lol. Poor Atianna I think her feelings are hurt.
Author's Response:
Girl, you don't know tha half of it!