[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2013 05:40 am Title: Chapter 8 broken woman part 2
Poor baby. Atianna's been through so much. It made me wanna hug her!! Aawww!
I'm so intrigued, I can't stop reading! Good job!!
Author's Response:
Welcome new reader!! Keep reading and reviewing and a future chapter will be dedicated to you
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2013 05:39 am Title: Chapter 4 break of dawn
Omg... if I knew Michael Jackson was on his way to MY apartment...
I'D BE TRIPPIN!!! LMAO!!
I'd be like,
Ha ha ha!!
Author's Response:
tooooooo cute!!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2013 05:37 am Title: Chapter 3
NEW READER ALERT!!!
I'd taken a vacation from this site... (I used to be a writer, but I deleted my story.) Anyhoot, I came back to check on my favorite stories, and something about this one caught my attention.
I LIKE THIS!!! 
I shall continue... *clicks next*
Author's Response:
Well welcome to the family! You're a cutie pie!
Date: Jun 22, 2013 05:02 am Title: Chapter 54 Don't start..
Duhh Mike you should've know that don't nobody wanna fuck a bag of bones with no damn cushion. Plus curvy chicks give you something to grab on you feel me? Lol
Author's Response:
as Mo'nique said..once you go fat, you don't never go back
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2013 04:51 am Title: Chapter 49
Aw Lisa Marie is mad, I don't care LOL
Author's Response:
None of us do!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2013 04:25 am Title: Chapter 48 Planning
I don't know why Atianna is acting like that? She knows she wants to be Michael's boo :)
Author's Response:
i think she's afraid
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2013 04:04 am Title: Chapter 47 Our Routine
Yup, Michael attract the crazies alright XD
Author's Response:
obviously, we all love him!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2013 03:59 am Title: Chapter 46 simplicity
I'm soo sorry that I haven't reviewing this story much :/
Author's Response:
better some reviews then no reviews!
Date: Jun 22, 2013 12:44 am Title: Chapter 53 Not now..
Ati should've slapped that ugly hatin ass bitch. And shame on Michael for messing with her tacky ass two months ago, if that's true. Ugh. I hope her punk ass is gone for good. Mike has some explaining to do.
Author's Response:
keep reading baby! I love the reviews, I have some shit planned for you all!
Date: Jun 22, 2013 12:41 am Title: Chapter 53 Not now..
To answer yo question hell yeah I'm Tupac shit I'm biggie too lol
Lisa knew what was coming to her when she knocked on that door but damn Mike you fucked the bitch 2 months ago....see that's that bullshit
Author's Response:
hahaha, keep reading girl I will have the new chapter up in a bit
Date: Jun 21, 2013 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 52 a long time waited
I feel all gushy and shit inside..i like that shit though lpl Thanks for the chapter thoughhhhh!
Now to the chapter
*runs back and forth screaming* OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH SHITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT! Mike wasn't joking bout the punani he was like You gone give me some today girl. And in his mind he was like awww yeah I'm bout to beat this pussy uuuuuuuup!!! Bitch you gone be in a wheelchair when I'm done.I don't know why but i kept thinking that Lisa was gone barge in and scream like a lil bitch. And if she did i would've been at the door with my gangsta homies ready bust a cap in her ass if she got any closer to them. Yeah that's how i roll
Author's Response:
WHo the hell is this? Tupac? lol
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2013 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 51 thank you
Lisa Marie is so thirsty! She needs to realize Michael has move on and she needs to let go plus she's a married woman now. Her vows should mean something to her but if the rumors are true she's not a faithful woman. I hope Michael lets Atianna take her mini vacation and she doesn't fuck it up.
Author's Response:
Keep reading darlin! I got some surprises up my sleeve
Date: Jun 21, 2013 09:58 am Title: Chapter 51 thank you
They about to get it on! I wish Lisa's tired ass walked in on them doing it, and seen the way Ati puts it on him cuz his ass loves it. She needs to take the hint and get the hell on. Plump or not, Ati still shits all over her Elvis face ass.
Author's Response:
Ati...I like that, i am going to put that in the story soon!
Date: Jun 21, 2013 01:30 am Title: Chapter 51 thank you
Hell yeah they about to get on like Donky Kong
And a message to Lisa Marie as my cousins would say Back the fuck up before you get dealt with shawty! You don't want this pressure and you sure in hell don't wanna get a cap in yo ass!
Lol she so damn desprate and thank god they about to fuckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk lawdy have mercy on me when you publish the next chapter
P.S. I meant to say that why you ain't got that many reviews when you have over 5000 reads...i see them silent readers on some real bullshit i don't like that
Author's Response:
Darling, keep your eyes peeled because this next chapter is going to be HOT! And I don't know why my readers don't review..but I love the reviews I get from all of you. Especially yours
Date: Jun 20, 2013 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 50 bring the drama
If Lisa don't get her ugly, haggard, Elvis in wig, stretch marked, soggy stomach, ugly ass the fuck on!! Chile! Atianna is a good one cuz I would knocked that bitch out. Her stank ass is obviously jealous and hatin that Ati is cute, and has curves. And more importantly, Mike is diggin her and don't want her ran thru, sour ass. Poof be gone ho! I'm glad they ran her ass off. Good riddance.
Author's Response:
Oh wow....so let's all have a meeting of the 'we hate lisa marie' club....who's going to take the minutes for the we hate lisa marie club lol