Date: Jun 24, 2013 05:27 am Title: Chapter 62 decisions decisions
Come on Mike knock it off with dem croc tears and man up. Dog u bout to lose what u used. Lol!!!
I hope after this walk with Aadarsh- **and please do let her take that walk**
She comes back and lays all her cards out on the table. He needs to hear point blank how he's made her feel without interruption. Mama Kate hit on some points yes but there is so much more that needs to be said and Atianna is the only one that can put things in order. Maybe at first his intentions were good but somewhere in there things got twisted and he became a Manipulator instead of a friend. His new found revelation shouldn't gain him immediate access back into the kingdom of Atianna oh hell no! that has to be earned. With that said I hope she milks this for all it's worth while at the same time finding her own way.
I've got a strong feeling Aadarsh is gonna give Michael a hard run for his money. May the best man win.
Bring on the drama girl...I've got my cup of cider ready.**Smile**
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[Report This]Date: Jun 24, 2013 04:39 am Title: Chapter 62 decisions decisions
Hmmm... I think Ati is fed up with their arrangement.
"No more B.S. Mr. JACKSON!"
He loves her? Really? Welp... he'd better PROVE it, or else, he's gonna lose that girl.
And Aadarsh is a cutie pie!! But let's be real. NO man is perfect, and I bet there would be things about him that would get on Atianna's nerves too. Everyone is on their best behavior when they first meet someone. LOL!
Let's see how long he stays understanding to her 'arrangement.'
Author's Response:
Oh shit...that was awesome lol
Date: Jun 24, 2013 12:21 am Title: Chapter 62 decisions decisions
Michael is a joke. He only wants her because somebody else is about to get her and treat like she's supposed to be treated! Actions speak louder than words and so far I'm all for Aadrash right now. Michael has done nothin to show that he is worthy of her. He's preyed on her during her time of weakness and need. Friends with benefits or not, that shit ain't cool. She's basically his plaything! Smh. Atianna needs to tell his narrow ass to shove it and walk right off with Aadarsh cuz at this point, michaels words mean absolutely nothing. Aadrash seems like a sweet guy.
Author's Response:
I love how you speak your mind girl!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2013 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 56 Answer me
I really do think Aadarsh is very sweet and I like him so far. Michael shouldn't be upset with Atianna, it's not like they're boyfriend/girlfriend or something..
Author's Response:
Exactly!!! Kisses
Date: Jun 23, 2013 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 61 a Mother's love.
Well thank u my dear. I'm glad I found this little gem.
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Aw so now his feelings are hurt well Boo da hell hoo. He can't get pissed because he's the cause of the hurt he now feels. All I have to say is he needs to speak up now or forever hold his peace. Her new friend is on a mission. If Mike clams up now he may not get a second chance.
Game on Mike...what'cha gonna do? Lol!!!!
Author's Response:
well you're very welcome...and I am not sure what Mike is going to do yet....my mind is still working on it
Date: Jun 23, 2013 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 61 a Mother's love.
So shall you reap what you've sewn Michael. Smh. I can't even feel bad for him. He brought all this on himself. If Ati really likes Aadarsh and he treats her like a queen and respects her mind AND body, etc. Michael won't be able to compete. Aadarsh may see Ati as his equal and treat her as such. Michael is gonna have some competition.. GOOD!
Author's Response:
Shoot..this is going to be a showdown!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2013 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 59 I'm done....
Atianna girl what are you doing? I know she want friends but couldn't she have hung out with some girls? And if she want her independence that's fine but I don't see how being with another man is going to give her that. I swear her and Michael are ass backward in this relationship. He don't think about her feelings, she finally stands up for herself but then meets this guy, smh. Don't get me wrong he seems very nice and sweet but Atianna needs to work out some personal issues and where this mistress thng is going with Michael. While she's at should figure out what she wants do with life her too. I think being abused all these years has her kind of lost, confused and craving to be loved be someone.
Ok I'll stop ranting for now until the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I can't wait for the next rant!!
Date: Jun 23, 2013 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 60 Just stop
This is turning into an Ike and Tina Turner relationship but without the punches and slaps you know
Author's Response:
well that certainly wasn't my intention lol
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2013 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 60 Just stop
Aaaww... a chapter dedicated to me?? Cheers!! LOL!
Thank you!!
Atianna took a stand... YOU GO GIRL!!! I'm excited to see what happens next!!
Author's Response:
You're welcome!!
Date: Jun 23, 2013 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 60 Just stop
Smh this is getting ridiculous now. Like seriously.. I don't even know what to say anymore. Michael sounds like a fuckin fool. Clearly there isn't anything holding him back from being with Atianna, he just doesn't WANT to. All that other shit is a big excuse and I'm not here for it. And Atianna is enabling this behavior by continuously checking in with him, asking to do things, and making herself completely dependent on him. Furthermore, how the fuck can you be faithful to someone you're not even with?! That makes NO sense, but Michael can do what he wants, when he wants? I'm done with both of them at this point. Whatever.
Author's Response:
well I'm sorry to dissapoint..I hope you keep reading
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2013 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 55 What's wrong?
Aww thank you dedicating this chapter to me, I feel so special! XD
I don't know why Atianna was so defensive towards Aadarsh, he seems sweet and he LOVES Atianna's figure.
Author's Response:
you are very welcome! I think Atianna is so defensive because she still isn't used to kindness
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2013 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 57 Enough
Michael was quick to accuse Atianna of something she didn't do. I'm glad she stood up for herself instead of backing down like she always does. She should speak her mind more often to him.
Author's Response:
Lol it's a process for her
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2013 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 59 I'm done....
IS AADARSH ABOUT TO GET LUCKY?!?! OMG!!
...But if they do something, they'd betta be careful, cuz if Mike finds out, there will be hell to pay!!!
That could be some risky sex...
Author's Response:
what kind of writer would if I be if I revealed all? lol, your review crack me up!
Date: Jun 23, 2013 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 59 I'm done....
Master..Lol!!! After hearing that she's really seeing how one sided this agreement really is.
Mike my man if your fears were that she would go back to the drugs and destructive lifestyle why not try to get the woman into rehab? That would have been the logical thing to do damn.
Lawd, I can't wait see brain sparks fly once Mike realizes his caged bird has picked the lock and is now flying free. Oh Please let Aadarsh and Mike have a meeting of the minds. He's in desperate need of a wake up call right about now. If he loves Atianna the way he claims he bess fess up- drop this we can't be anything but fu*k buddies agreement and come correct. Otherwise he's gonna lose her. He want have anyone else to blame but himself. Now I'm not going to say she should have sex with Aadarsh because she has strong feelings for Mike and does really want to be with him. The old Atianna would have done that without regret. I'd like to think that she's grown up and little since then and can see her self worth. This is not a monkey see monkey do situation. I'm just sayin.
Author's Response:
I fit a piece of this review in the next chapter! I love your reviews, you are awesome...i'm just sayin'
Date: Jun 23, 2013 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 59 I'm done....
Yasssssss Ati! To hell with Michael and these rules. He ain't ya damn man, don't even have enough respect for you to become your man. Just wants you as his little puppet.
Author's Response:
Hopefull, Mike can change his ways soon!