This is a wonderful story!

I love how human you’ve managed to make both Michael and Jade and the natural progression in their relationship.

Jade is so lovably unlikable in the beginning when we don’t know much about her past, which is so rare in any book (at least in my subjective opinion). It’s a great change of pace and a definite positive in my opinion. Already there’s been a lot of character development and I imagine she is far from done in that department - there’s so much room for it!!!

With that defensive nature of hers, the reader cant fault Michael for not seeing her as a gift from God. In truth it just paints him in a better light because he’s a lot more persistent than most would be. I love there dynamic, and am excited to see how it will change in future chapters.

Also I love that the world in the book is getting bigger. More characters are being introduced along with subplots which makes for a more dynamic environment to explore the main characters in.

Basically I’m saying I for sure am looking forward to reading every chapter until the last and then crying about there not being more.

Good job, skywriter