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Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2013 11:02 am Title: Chapter 15 The B*tch is Back - The Sh*t Just Officially hit the fan - Pt2

I hope they drag Michael and this ho for complete filth chile! I'm talkin absolute chromosomes. And for Tatiana's dumb ass, I hope she realizes the same way she got him is the same way she will lose him. He'll cheat on her too, that's IF he even decides to be with her. With the shitstorm that Priscilla has cooked up, Tatiana may not even wanna be with him. She will have no privacy and be constantly taunted. Good. They both deserve to suffer and live a miserable existence for this trifling shit they've been doing. To add the icing on the cake, Lisa needs to take her kids and run. And I bet Tatiana will have an abortion or miscarriage will all the shit that's about to happen. I don't feel sorry for her cuz like I said before, hoes NEVER prosper. Bravo Priscilla and Lisa. Make Michael and that ho miserable. They deserve every bit of it. I'm glad she's divorcing his ass too. Tatiana will forever be a sideline ho because she didn't have enough respect for herself. I don't give a damn who the man is. If he's married, he will not and should not be entertained. So I don't feel an ounce of sympathy for the pain she's about to endure. He's about to play her ass again anyway. She will never be acknowledged openly, and by the time the media is done dragging both their sorry asses, he just might want Lisa back and I hope she will have moved on with somebody else. Mistake she made or not, no woman deserved to be treated like that. Let the suffering and dragging of Michael and this ho begin!!!! Yassssss. 



Author's Response:

true that the way it works I have been both for the same man and refuse to ever do it again... it's possible but you have to understand how michael works Michael WIll Love you charish you and be there for you FAITHFUL ONLY if you DON'T Betray hime Lisa comitted a CARINAL SIN against him and all Michal did was wash his hands of her but as any good business man will do he protected his asset 'keep your freinds close and your ennimes'  he used her as long as he need her and was plaing to drop her when the time alotted he MOVED ON mentally and Physically from her all he need was the Paper work to cover is ass which was a mear technicallity

Michael love you till YOU fuck up and then like any man he will MOVE on to the next

it is trifling what he did but he's a man and Lisa ain't innocoent by no Means and LISA has another secret up her sleeve that may make you think Twice on how mcuh of a victim she is in this whole scheme which will come out in later chapters if you stick with me

Son't try to predict my story ust read and see jow the cards fall where they may just stay tume the tables are about to turn again 

Reviewer: Suzzanna Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2013 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 14: The Begin of the End...The Sh*t just Offically hit the fan - Pt 1

Oh nooo , btw I hope Tati feels bad for all this . And did you read the story put uptoday that got taken away or something like that anyways its up but you cant read it . 

 

..... I really think Michael needs to be more careful an ways thanks for the update



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She didn't know what happened so how is she supose to feel bad,...he was not careful that is the point one freek excution caused him  to get caught 

Reviewer: melissmjj1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2013 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 14: The Begin of the End...The Sh*t just Offically hit the fan - Pt 1

D:

OMG!!!!! next chapter nowwwww pleaseeee!!

i beg you hahaha



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YOU ARE AT MY MERCY HAHAHAHA

Reviewer: MJJApplehead Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2013 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 14: The Begin of the End...The Sh*t just Offically hit the fan - Pt 1

oh no lisa clocked them omg!!! tatiana please tell michael;  so u can both be happy together pleass!!!! i wonder how the confrontation fromn the 3 of dems gonna turn out lol



Author's Response:

YES she DID she Really did see them .. Tatiana will have to wait a minute before she can share that bit of information with him it will be a rather tangled web 

Reviewer: MJJApplehead Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2013 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 14: The Begin of the End...The Sh*t just Offically hit the fan - Pt 1

oh no lisa clocked them omg!!! tatiana please tell michael;  so u can both be happy together pleass!!!! i wonder how the confrontation fromn the 3 of dems gonna turn out lol

Reviewer: CrazyForMikezilla Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2013 10:17 am Title: Chapter 14: The Begin of the End...The Sh*t just Offically hit the fan - Pt 1

NO NO NO NOOOO !!! GOD MICHAEL YOUR SO FUCKED UP! oh my god she might have a miscarridge or however u spell it ... because of stress! Please UPDATE SOOONnn oh my god :(



Author's Response:

No Misscarriages ..... Yes he fucked up because she is no longer going to trusted him anymore 

Reviewer: Michael_Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2013 09:54 am Title: Chapter 14: The Begin of the End...The Sh*t just Offically hit the fan - Pt 1

O M G 

OH MY GOD

OH MY GOSH

OH MY GOSHHHHHH :O :O :O PLEASE UPDATE ANOTHER CHAPTER? RIGHT LIKE RIGHT NOW?:O



Author's Response:

ONly One chapter a day that how i roll Sorry

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2013 09:08 am Title: Chapter 14: The Begin of the End...The Sh*t just Offically hit the fan - Pt 1

Michael is a damn fool if he thinks Lisa would just give his punk ass her kids. Like I said, I hope she sues for full custody and divorces HIS ass and let everybody know about his infidelity with this skinny no career having ho. She really won't have one now. I'd never thought I'd say this in a story, but I'm actually on Lisa's side this time. She's been the only person in this marriage trying to genuinely work it out. And Michael has been childishly playing her. Now it's on. I'm glad Lisa caught him and I hope she rips his ass a complete new one. And that thirst bucket he's cheating with. To willingly be a side ho AND get knocked up. That baby won't come to fruition though. I have a feeling. Michael knows his image can't take anymore damage than what it's already had and like I said before, Lisa was the woman who would stand by his side. Now that she's about to be gone, Thirstiana won't be able to take her place. She's good for a roll in the sack, but a mother? She is not. Strong and supportive like a wife, like Lisa was to him? She is not. Michael's suffering is gonna begin now and I don't feel sorry for him or his ho at all. He's gonna miss Lisa when she's gone. She needs to take her kids and leave. There is no possible PR move or way he can spin this. She needs to air his ass out on court and the world will know. Tatiana will be black listed for being a mistress and Michael will be reamed by the media for cheating on Elvis' daughter while she was pregnant with their kids. Let the damage and suffering begin. 



Author's Response:

Did Michael ever say he was going to fight her for custody NO so no argument there, you will see in the next few chapters what happens with that Like i said before you have to CARE to want to make someone Pay you'll have to see how that plays out, They will Divorce and his infidelity will be out But always keep the media in mmind and how they wish to portray him. can you relly say she was working on in when she lied for damn near a year and then every time she had the operturinity to tell the truth she does what LIES then becaomes needy because shee pregant and doen't want to loose him and how exactly is that GENUINE she wants him back for the wrong reasons when she had the opertunity to have him she blew it and when she had the opertunity to make it right MORE THEN ONCE she lied, don't be so sure about about your theories which looks better beeing a child molestor or being a unfaithful husband one cancels the other Our don't you think but do you think the media that built that stoy would RELLY want to portay michael that way when it Ruins his child molestaiton credablity they WORKED SO HARD TO BULD

Lisa does what ever she is told to do and if she had a back bone she wouldn't have been going thorugh this in the first place if she had been a stong willed woman and put her marraige first she wouldn't be in the mess but she is weak and he actions show that so how can somone so week be trusted to stand by soomeone when the next pieace of black mail may cause them to go cowering and lying in the corner.

Tatiana and Her motherliy instict is this No onwan has  mother ly instact until they become a mother they may have traits but if when there child is boarn they love it protect it and cherish it then they are a good mother, How is she not strong and supotive when she was strong and supotive when he came crying to HER when he susoected Lisa's Wrong doing and SHE ACTUALLY gave him GOOD advise...

Willl Michael suffer YES he will... WILL he miss Lisa when she gone YES.... Youl have to see how the Lisa thing lays out though until you see that will you understand everything.

No there is no PR move that can spin it But cont on good old Media to do that job for him watch what they do, Tatiana might Not be Blacklisted she will work again but it will take ALOT to fix that image that is for damn sure, the damnge and suffering has begun     

Reviewer: tiyacts11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2013 08:55 am Title: Chapter 14: The Begin of the End...The Sh*t just Offically hit the fan - Pt 1

(winces) OUCH!!!! Shit is about to get real in minute 

Reviewer: Suzzanna Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2013 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Not The Only One - I Can't Wait to Let them Know about us - Pt 2

what if what ??? Oh oh  is she prego 



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Yes Yes she is

Reviewer: RhythmChild Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2013 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Not The Only One - I Can't Wait to Let them Know about us - Pt 2

I'm sorry, now Michael is just FOUL.

Foul, foul, foul, motherfucking FOUL.

Lisa over here trying to make up for all her shit, thinking maybe they can work it out if she doesn EVERYTHING he asks her to, meanwhile he's going all Duplicity on her ass holding Tatiana's foolish behind on the side....

I wish he just divorced her from the get go instead of doing this to her. Cuz now this is worse than Lisa's secret. I feel terrible for those kids who are going to one day learn about the immaturity of their two parents and the vengeful SPITE of their father.



Author's Response:

YES michael is foul but they all are in there own ways and i can tell ALL of you get that because you all pick who you hate next Lisa is NEEDY because shes Hormonal because shes pregant Lisa wants it but she as any woman Knows deep down the truth that it will never work out but the HOPE it s there 

Yes he's keeping Tatia but he is keeping Tatia because she makes him feel better the lisa right now he feels more for her right now then he did Lisa NO quite as bad as lisa but is bad he's being cold calculated ana manipulative and the truth is HE IS when it comes to protecting his BUSINESS assets and that is ALL he;s doing PROTECTING his MONEY and before you go off on me about it

HE NEVER would have made it as far in his career IF he WASN'T cold calculated and MAnipulative that hwo he got the Music catalogs and Watch the KIller Thriller spech again Look how he nonchalantly says "it was just Busness"

all I have to say is don't try and predict what I'm going to write Just read and see

 

 

Reviewer: CrazyForMikezilla Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2013 11:53 am Title: Chapter 13 - Not The Only One - I Can't Wait to Let them Know about us - Pt 2

I totally agree with iam_music ! I know for a damn fact that shes preagnet. Ho -___- Shell just have an abortion or something. Yass girl yasss hes going to REGRET losing her when he ends up with nothing, 



Author's Response:

Yes she is Pregant NO she won't because SHE un like LISA understood the weight of what doing that would do to him SHE witnessed it with him and Lisa so NO she won't Michael will rebuild But he will regret because he has not lost what he will end up loosing YET you have to read and find out what happens with that

 

Reviewer: tiyacts11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2013 08:28 am Title: Chapter 13 - Not The Only One - I Can't Wait to Let them Know about us - Pt 2

Uh Tati better tell mike the real deal before she end up doing the same thing as Lisa. Omg the drama has now begin, I wonder what all three of them are going to do???



Author's Response:

Believe me she will she WON't do the same as lisa it's about Timing, Yes the DRAMA don't you love it, you will see SOON

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2013 07:41 am Title: Chapter 13 - Not The Only One - I Can't Wait to Let them Know about us - Pt 2

She'll have an abortion next. Yawn. Whatever. I hope Lisa snatches both their wigs back. I hope the media has a field day airing Michael and this ho out. The way Lisa has been there for him through everything, he's going to regret losing her. That's how it always goes. 



Author's Response:

NO shes not going to have an abotion if she did that she would have had to have NOT heard ONE word he said yes she going to keep the baby because she trust he's going to leave his wife and that adds more nervousness for Michael and wanting to say so but TIMMING isn't on her side with it 

Yes the media is going to have a field day, 

yes lisa has been there for the important things BUT what she did to him is HARD to forgive VERY hard

HE WILL regret Losoing her For HOW and WHY it happens which you will find out later 

Reviewer: melissmjj1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2013 07:17 am Title: Chapter 13 - Not The Only One - I Can't Wait to Let them Know about us - Pt 2

oh mu god  i she pregnant too??? D:

that Michael is a cassanova hahahaha



Author's Response:

Yes he is a BIG time casanova yes she is she very Much is 

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