[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2013 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 6
I knew Larenz was gonna get physical with Alexis but to rape the he "loves" he done lost his damn mind. I hope Michael shows up like Alexis is praying he will.
Date: Jun 27, 2013 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 6
“As a matter of fact she did. I ranned up in her today and she gave it to me. “Michael said laughing. “
“Dude it sounds like you checking in on ya girl. What’s up bro? Having second thoughts? Michael asked laughing.
That's some funny shit!! Lmao Michael and his inside jokes!
Date: Jun 27, 2013 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 6
omg what is he doing
Date: Jun 27, 2013 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 6
I mean Alexis. Smh lol
Date: Jun 27, 2013 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 6
Shit. So Larenz's has found out!!! And no, regardless of what's happened, she does NOT deserve to be raped! I hope Michael comes and beats Larenz's weak ass! Poor Robyn. All because she wants Michael and he's the better man for her. I hope he comes and beats Larenz unconscious, then they both can get the hell away from there.
[Report This]Date: Jun 24, 2013 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 5
Well, Alexis...You better should have asked, what Larenz knows or not. Poor Larenz! His girl just broke his heart thrice. 1. She tells him that she's slept with Michael, 2. HIS best friend and 3. that she has fallen in love with him. She really should NOT be in that bathtub now. Please let Larenz react hysterical and throw her out, instead of killing both of them. I'm really scared right now. I understand that she decided for Michael, though she does not actually know him. I'm excited to see how this will work out, but she had to tell Larenz sooner or later. Alexis' heart and body decided for her. "Girlfriend, you better tell your boyfriend, yea...Tell him, exactly what we doin'...Tell him what you do to me...Late at night when the wind is free...Tell him what he needs to know...Or he may never let you go...You gonna have to tell him...You'll only be a girlfriend of mine..."
Please update soon! I can't wait! I can't wait! I love this story
Author's Response: Lol. I'm so happy you're enjoying it. The next chapter is ready. I'll post tomorrow or the next day . Thanks for reading and commenting
Date: Jun 24, 2013 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
O lawd!! I wonder what Lauren's was going to say
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! )
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! )
Date: Jun 24, 2013 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 5
Lawd!!!! Girl you gotta update again. She might as well leave now and go back to Michael's cuz he's about to throw her ass out! She done confessed to fuckin Michael. Larenz finna call her every name in the book! Leave now girl!
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2013 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm desperately waiting for this update...I'm dying! Checking back daily, like every hour! lol I love love, love this story! What would be totally weird would be Michael and Larenz having planned this all out to test Alexis faithfulness, but in the end Michael and Alexis REALLY start falling for each other...
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2013 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
Just read these first 4 chapters and I have say thar was some crazy rough sex Michael and Alexis had together. Both of them are wrong for going behind Larenz's back like this but they do make a better couple sexually. Larenz says he loves Alexis, he even proposed to her but he doesn't trust her which you need to make any relationship work. It seems to me that their relationship is falling apart but both of them are holding to it together for pride. Alexis could have used Larenz's trust issue against him as way to get out of being engaged to him but she choose to try and make it work with him. But as soon as he gets that phone message shit gone hit the fan! Can't wait to read the next chapter, keep writing!
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2013 03:52 am Title: Chapter 4
Wow, I can't breathe! This story must be the sexiest I have EVER read! It wandered straight to my favorites. I can't even know what to say, but I want more, much more of that. Michael is irresistible and Alexis knows it. I can't blame her. Still it is morally questionable, what BOTH of them are doing. It's a principle: You don't go for your best friend's girl and you don't go for your man's best friend! I SOOO WANT THIS TO BLOOM INTO A GREAT LOVE STORY THO! LOL I knooow...Contradictory much? LMAO They gotta go on and on and on. Now they are about to get caught anyway.
Date: Jun 20, 2013 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 4
Uh-oh!!!
Date: Jun 20, 2013 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 4
omg!
Author's Response: lol