Date: Jan 27, 2014 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 6
Neat so far. :) I like it. And I hope Richard sees sense and apologizes to Michael for not being gentlemanly in telling him "if you tell her, I'll kill you", that he didn't really mean it, and that he should've realized Michael liked Vivian and also respected that, too.
Keep up your super-neat, very creative and beautifully inspiring writing! :)
Date: Jun 27, 2013 03:41 am Title: Chapter 5
omg that was unbeliveble Rich is sick
Date: Jun 26, 2013 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is great so far. Really cool idea. Poor Michael. I feel so bad for him. He needs to start sabotaging Rich. Think of things he knows she won't like and tell Rich to do them.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yeah, I was thinking of starting to do that! xoxox
Date: Jun 26, 2013 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like this a lot!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I've only gotten one review so far and I was starting to think no one was interested, but you comment makes me happy, so thanks :) xox
Date: Jun 25, 2013 04:58 am Title: Chapter 3
omg this story will be so beautiful love story oh gosh please more
and poor Michael i hope one day she will see that Michael is the perfect men for her
Author's Response:
I'll post an update or two tomorrow! I just don't want to post today because I feel we should all remember the real Michael and not be thinking about stories about him, even though they are great. Long live MJ!
xox