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Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2014 04:52 am Title: CHAPTER 39 | Aftermath

What? That's it? Damn! I was looking forward to reading all night! I guess all good things must come to an end... Just update soon please!!!!!!



Author's Response:

LOOOl, sorry if the end dissapointed you but it's not the last chapter of the story ;-))

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 15, 2014 03:22 pm Title: CHAPTER 1 | Beautiful Stranger

I like this so far..should have read this sooner..am gonna catch up on the rest.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Karen :) I hope you will like the story :D

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 15, 2014 06:52 am Title: CHAPTER 39 | Aftermath

Oh lord, now Harper will get a ride with Ethan and be photographed with him AFTER Michael fired him, which is only going to make things worse. Michael is going to get more upset, and show up and punch him in front of paparazzi. Watch they'll get into a fistfight at the VS fashion show and end up crashing the runway. Or maybe a slap fight, since Michael enjoys acting like a little bitch so much in this story.

What a bunch of fuckery over NOTHING. Michael needs to apologize for acting like a 13 year old and hanging up on her, and for being a hypocrite since he was MARRIED at the time Harper and Ethan were playing hide the sausage. He has no grounds on which to be jealous. I think the reason he got so angry has just as much to do with his ego as the fact that she didn't tell him about Ethan. Think about it, she rejected him at the time and not Ethan. But Michael needs to get over that shit and fast cause he didn't exactly try that hard to get her he just moved on to the first available hole. And Harper should apologize for not telling him the truth sooner. I don't know what planet she is living on thinking her boyfriend is going to be OK with her being around and ex all the time in his absence, especially an ex that he is PAYING and knows nothing about. If I were in Michael's position I would have been mad too, and I don't blame him for firing Ethan.

These two are making me angry. And Harper shouldn't have listened to Harlow. She should have called Michael, not necessarily to apologize because she was wrong, but to talk about it because they are BOTH wrong. More communication in a relationship is never a bad thing and being stubborn isn't going to help anyone. Same for Michael. He needs to swallow his pride and call her.



Author's Response:

Hey Camille :) Wow, I haven't updated this story in so long :S! Sorry for the wait!

"Or maybe a slap fight, since Michael enjoys acting like a little bitch so much in this story."

http://media.tumblr.com/70bad16c7fa8a9826193a5066815d4b0/tumblr_inline_mvrh717to41rl4gtw.gif

Michael overreacted and you are right when you say it's more because she rejected him and went with Ethan! And he basically paid the guy who was having sex with the woman he wanted lol. Too bad for him, he should have worked harder not have sex with Lisa and marry her that easily!

Now they need to communicate!

Thank you for the review and sorry for the (very) late answer :/

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 15, 2014 01:34 am Title: CHAPTER 9 | Foreplay

Yes! Very, very uncomfortable, neither couple feels right!



Author's Response:

Well, thank God I haven't written the sex scenes lol!

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 15, 2014 12:43 am Title: CHAPTER 7 | Friends

Ethan and harper? Blegh!!!



Author's Response:

You didn't see it coming?

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 15, 2014 12:20 am Title: CHAPTER 5 | Between Me and You and You

Oh no! She broke his heart!



Author's Response:

Hey! I see that you are a new reader lol! Sorry for the typos :x

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 15, 2014 12:15 am Title: CHAPTER 39 | Aftermath

While Michael did overreact, he also had just realized that he'd essentially been paying a man to have sex with the girl he was paying to play his gf AND who he was lusting after. The fact that she didn't immediately ask for another bodyguard raises flags as there is just NO way that could turn out good.

THEN Harper's decision to call Ethan in the midst of the drama?!  http://31.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_ls1inlxKt21r0ojhto1_400.gif

I see Harlow's advice as potentially backfiring.



Author's Response:

HEY REDONE :D

LOOOOl, it's true that if we see it like this...

http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mdveszXYPc1qze8f7.gif

You know Harper is kind of wrong for calling Ethan but I'm sure she has a good reason :) And Harlow's advice wasn't bad I think. Michael does need to calm down if they want to have a real conversation!

Thank you for the review and the rate, Love :D

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2014 10:51 pm Title: CHAPTER 1 | Beautiful Stranger

It's good... Speechless... Okay, I like it a lot but I don't know how to say it... Shit! I'm shit at this!



Author's Response:

LOOOL! The next chapter will make you even more speechless ;-)

Reviewer: mjlover07 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2014 06:50 pm Title: CHAPTER 39 | Aftermath

Well she didn't see that one coming....Update soon please



Author's Response:

The new chapter is here :D

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2014 06:47 pm Title: CHAPTER 39 | Aftermath

For once, I have to agree with Harlow. Harper doesn't need to be crying about Michael's overreacting ass and she DAMN sure don't owe him a damn apology! Like she said, HE WAS MARRIED when she was doing her thing with Ethan. So fuck him and the horse he rode in on. And I'm not surprised Michael's petty ass fired Ethan. Smh ol jealous ass. He's really on my nerves right now. Whenever him and Harper do speak, PLEASE let her read his ass for complete filth! I would cuss him the entire fuck out for not only overreacting on me, but the audacity to hang up in my face too!!! Fuck him! Harper needs to do like her sister said and make Michael's narrow ass work for it and apologize his sorry ass off to her to make this shit up. 



Author's Response:

They both overreacted and what they need is to talk calmly! And if Michael loves her like he says he does, he will calm down and let her tell him the side of her story!

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 06, 2014 03:12 pm Title: CHAPTER 23 | DAY 1 - part 1

Harper obviously doesn't have enough siblings (or twisted friends) to know the traps. Deny deny deny.



Author's Response:

LMAOOOOOOOO!!!!! If I were Harper I would be so embarassed lool! Thank you for the review, I updated! I hope you're still reading ;D

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 06, 2014 02:21 pm Title: CHAPTER 16 | Showtime!

This about sums up my response:

yippee



Author's Response:

HAHAHA! I'm going to steal all your gifs!

Reviewer: Redone Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 06, 2014 12:51 pm Title: CHAPTER 8 | All by Myself

“Shh, shh. Play the piano”

Jammin'


Oh shoot, LMP moving in?!

WTF?



Author's Response:

?uestlove LMAOOO! You know shit is about to hit the fan!!

Reviewer: Redone Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 06, 2014 12:16 pm Title: CHAPTER 6 | Unrequited

“Because I want you Harper!” Michael exclaims

Huh



Author's Response:

LMAO @ this gif! I'm definitely watching all the seasons of Sex and the city this summer ;)

I'm glad you're reading this too :D

Reviewer: mjlover07 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2014 04:10 pm Title: CHAPTER 38 | Phonecall

Ethan needs to be slapped!! Update soon please



Author's Response:

I agree LMAO! the new chapter is online :D

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