Reviewer: VickiJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2013 11:04 pm Title: CHAPTER 27 | Brazil

Harper is correct making sure her mother is fine should be her first priority over explaining things to Will. She has Michael with her right now for surpport plus Janet and Kerry. If Will can't understand then that's too bad. It's seems as much as Harper and Michael want to wait until their separated from their partners they want each other badly. The way I see it and its already been pointed out by Harper is that people are going to make their own assumptions about their relationship. I'm not saying they just go ahead and have sex but I wouldn't blame them if they did either. But on the hand they've waited for more than a year to be with each so what's a week or so more until things are straightened out with the other people in their lives.

Author's Response:

Hello Vicki :D It'll be easier to think about her relationship with Michael once she is sure her mother is healthy. And there is still Will... Right now, Harper doesn't need Michael's penis but his suport. Let's hope he will not try something to have her until she is compeletely free

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 27, 2013 10:44 pm Title: CHAPTER 27 | Brazil

Sounds like Harper doesn't trust herself to sleep in the same bed as him. Lol. I'm glad he's willing to prove himself to her, he needs to. He's fucked up too many times. For some reason, I'm wondering if Ethan will ever pop up again. That would be funny. I'm interested to see how Michael would react.. Knowin that she's had a sexual relationship with him before. 

Author's Response:

Hey Kat! Indeed, Harper doesn't want to surrender now :)! A Ethan apparition would be nice :D I'll work on that :D

Reviewer: VickiJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2013 03:15 am Title: CHAPTER 26 | DAY 3

Wow first Michael is in the hospital and now her mom, damn! Poor Harper can't seem to catch a break, smh. I hope her mom will be ok and not suffer any serious complications. Oh and Harper should call Will and let him know what's going on. Although I still think he's going to be pissed that Michael went to Brazil with her. But then again he is " hanging out" with Jada, insert eye roll. At this rate I think Will might brake up with Harper first but it will be for the best. They simply weren't ment to together. I hope Harper's family likes Michael.

Author's Response:

Yes, poor Harper :/. But she has Michael to support her! I think Harper should focus on her mother first and once she is sure everything is ok, call Will. WHoever decide to break up, it's good for the both of them. Will can go with Jade and Harper can focus on Michael :)

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2013 05:49 pm Title: CHAPTER 26 | DAY 3

Aww Harper and Michael are in love. It's so obvious. And Michael going with her to Brazil? Mm hmm I predict some interesting things happening! I hope Harper's mother will be ok, it's very sweet of Michael to go with her. They can't deny it any longer and I think her family will see it. They are in love. But Michael still needs to work for her like she said. And she doesn't need to be the one to say I love you first, he needs to! 

Author's Response:

There will be some interesting thing happening during this trip in Brazil! I can't wait to write the encounter with Harper's family :D

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2013 04:59 pm Title: CHAPTER 25 | DAY 2 - part 1

They are so CUTE. It's like watching a basket of puppies. Hell, they make puppies look ugly. And that's really saying a lot!

Author's Response:

Aww, that gif is socute but like you said, it isn't cuter than Mike and Harper !

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2013 01:21 pm Title: CHAPTER 25 | DAY 2 - part 1

Michael's nosy ass!!!! Lol eavesdropping. I'm glad she's not telling him about her and Will's fight. He doesn't need to know because he'll use that as a way to be extra sympathetic and get her to be all open and everything. Nope! Michael still needs to work and earn her. And I agree with Harper in saying that she's gonna do her next relationship the right way. She doesn't need to do anything with Michael until they are actually official. Then she can get his ass all sprung. Lol and I died at precious midget! Jada is pretty tiny. And she was so cute back then. But yes, Harper needs to go so she can handle her business with Will in person. And I hope Michael knows that Harper is just testin him. She wants kids and if they have kids they are gonna be gorgeous! 

Author's Response:

Hey Kat :) LMAO @ you know Michael is feening! But he still needs to work for Harper ;) next chapter up

Reviewer: SunniVan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2013 02:19 pm Title: CHAPTER 24 | DAY 1 - part 2

Aawww! I'm glad they had fun like that...

I'm LMAO picturing Mike and Harper dancing and dry humping.. :-D

 

Author's Response:

LMAO! I think Mickey doesn't see nothing wrong with a little bump and grind *in my r. kelly's voice*