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Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2013 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 8

I can't. I don't even have the energy. She shouldn't have slept with him. Period. I'm not even going to go into the whole spiel. I still think Michael is a coward, a liar, scum, everything. I hope Jill just used his ass for the sex and goes on with her life. I hope she continues to see Jayro the entire time she's in Anguila. Let Michael's ass seethe and feel confused. Let him be angry and hurt. Let him feel used. Everything that Jill felt. Those fools probably didn't even use protection on top of that. I hope she doesn't get pregnant. If she does, oh well. I'm over both of them already. 



Author's Response:

That wasn't the smartest move but what is done is done! I think it was more of a revenage than the first step to take Michael back. Jill just wanted to hrt Michael and I think she suceeded

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2013 06:35 pm Title: PART 1

OK that's even better revenge. Use him for sex and then ditch him for Jayro. Now Michael knows how it feels.

Lisa is either the dumbest person on the face of the planet or she truly doesn't give a shit. I think it's the latter. I'm curious to find out why she is even still with Michael. Are they just staying together for PR at this point? Cause it sure seems that way. 

 

 



Author's Response:

High five for Jill lol! That was vicious but at the end she got what she wanted; revenge. And that was COLD!

I think Lisa doesn't care lol. Michael stays with her because he is used to her presence. You know some people stay together because they don't want to be lonely. I guess Michael rather stay miserable with someone than miserable alone. And they don't even talk so Lisa is here without being here lol. Maybe Lisa likes the lifestyle; she likes the fame, living in a big house, having people doing everything for her. I don't think Lisa is ready to give up on this lol!

Reviewer: SmellyApplehead Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2013 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 8

I know Lisa cheated on Michael, but you know, i was just thinking that what Jill and Michael have down there is something NOT right too, you know. Now the case is I'm not a fan of Lisa and yada yada, but when Michael and Jill did their affair the only picture i had in mind is the crying Lisa. I felt bad and i don't even know why.

This is my favorite chapter. Thank you :-)

Author's Response:

You mean when Jill and Michael "dated", because Jill didn't know Michael was married to Lisa. Or when they had sex in this chapter?

Thank you fo readin and rating! :)

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2013 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 7

Oh hell no. Jill had better not sleep with Michael's lying ass. But if she is doing this to torture Michael and give him blue balls then more power to her. Personally I think she should rip his balls off. 



Author's Response:

LOL! Let's see what Jill does with this power ;)!

Reviewer: melissmjj1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2013 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 7

awww poor jill hahaha xD



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IKR!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2013 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 7

Ugh!!! Damn Jayro for fucking everything up. I am so done chile. Michael is a fuckin fool. Period. Jill needs to tell him to get the fuck on. Take his stupid ass back to his cheating wife. I'm so pissed that she and Jayro didn't have sex. I at least wanted Michael to believe they did. Couldn't even do THAT right. I just can't. I am done.



Author's Response:

Jayro ruined it! But at the same time I understand; he might have felt that she didn't want to have sex because she likes him but for something else. Can't blame him!

Reviewer: BestOfJoy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2013 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 7

Whoa Whoa WHOA wait a minute.

The hell oh now Michael want some he better go with that sit if I was Jill I would walk to his ass and grab his buldge and squeeze the fuck out of it until it hurt for him and end that shit like a boss.

BUTTT

Then again this might happen.

 

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Because you NEVER know with.....

 

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That dick and THRUST. Lol my nasty ass but you can't judge me.



Author's Response:

Indeed, you NEVER know!

Reviewer: melissmjj1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2013 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 7

awww poor jill hahaha xD



Author's Response:

Ops, double review lol

Reviewer: melissmjj1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2013 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 7

awww poor jill hahaha xD



Author's Response:

TRIPLE lol

Reviewer: Wassup Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2013 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 6

you go girl ! Team Jill all the way haha



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*HIGH FIVE*

Reviewer: SmellyApplehead Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2013 08:53 pm Title: PART 1

Annie GUH ! You have no idea how much i love you and of course your story, right. *blows kisses*. Oh, and i want to give my opinion to Michael and Jill.


First of all, Mike. You need to DAVID GUETTA way from Jill.

And Jill.......don't let that man get near to your vajay-jay, girl. Being a mistress is not healthy *flips bangs*

Author's Response:

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OMG, Thank you so muchhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! *blow kisses back*

You need to DAVID GUETTA way from Jill.

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I agree, Jill neds to ignore Michael and gone with the wind fabulous!

Reviewer: BestOfJoy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2013 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 6

I just love jill that's my girl ,and it better be loud just for Michael to here so his ass can pissed the fuck off.



Author's Response:

HAHAHA!!

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Reviewer: melissmjj1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2013 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 6

amazing!!! 

keep wrtting!



Author's Response:

Thank you :D I will

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2013 10:31 am Title: Chapter 6

Yassssss Jill!!!! She needs to fuck Jayro in that room and make SURE Michael's ass hears every bit of it. He has a lot of damn nerve talkin bout tryna make her see Jayro isn't the man for her.. Excuse me? Your sorry MARRIED ass ain't either! Chile I hope Jill talks to Elvis face more for the sake of makin Michael's ass seethe and squirm. So the bitch don't know that Michael was with Jill, huh? All the better. And he's being a fuckin coward for not telling her! Is this dude serious? He walked in on Lisa fuckin her ex husband's brains out but now he wants to play the modest saint who did nothing wrong? I just can't. He actually wants to spare this ho's feelings when she doesn't give a flying fuck about his. I really can't with this right now. I hate Michael in this. He's so fucking dumb it's pathetic. I hope Jill continues to make his ass suffer and I hope Elvis in drag continues to cheat on his retarded ass. The nerve to try to protect that bitch feelings while he hurt Jill's. I'm sorry but NO. Jill needs to fuck Jayro in every inch, nook, and cranny of that bedroom and I hope Michael listens to all of it. At this point Jill doesn't even need to know why Michael cheated and everything else because its gonna piss her off more. He went back to the trifling ho of a wife so be deserves everything she's put him through and more. I really hope Jill moves on. Fuck Michael and the ho he's married to. I'm so done. 



Author's Response:

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I think Jill befriending Lisa will be the death of Michael lmao! And it's going to be so good once she confide in Jill about her relationship with Michael. If she doesn't want to hear why Michael slept with her from his mouth, maybe she will hear it from Lisa... :)

Reviewer: glitterpix Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2013 08:48 am Title: Chapter 1

hmmmmm IDEA sex attic michael :D



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