Date: Mar 08, 2014 08:21 am Title: Prologue:Chicago 1930's
Yea like I said u completely just abandoned this story dude.
Date: Mar 08, 2014 08:21 am Title: Prologue:Chicago 1930's
Yea like I said u completely just abandoned this story dude.
Date: Oct 24, 2013 07:53 am Title: Chapter 5:Party time... Showing her chops
I thought u were going to update text back when u got this k.
Date: Aug 25, 2013 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 5:Party time... Showing her chops
canyoufeelit,i was thinking in tomorrow gig that bella baby does she performs her song fever, to michael like in fighting temptation. but before the gig while bella baby is cleaning the dance studio michael stayed behind while everyone left and taught bella baby how to dance. what do u think correct me if im wrong on anything i just said.....be honest ok....reply if u got this.
Author's Response:
you know something I was actually thinking of haig her do that song but not as her first song as a song later down th line when they get closer ans she feels more comfortable doing so but you did give me an idea though having her posibly break outsing a song or maybe even thst song when she doesn'thing anyone is looking while shes cleaning and dancing with the the mop as her Micrphone then gets cought by Michael and thuropghly embarressed
see fever is a song that should be performed when bella feels comfortable to be in that sensual sexual place with him she isn't there yet i like the thought
P.S. NO i haven't forgotten about this story it's just i'm in a steady consentration period with that story I write where ever I'm most Drawn too and right now I'm really feeling that story and so are my readers but I will Post a new Chapter to this one I just wasn't getting that many responses on it so I stopped working on it
No I haven't forgotten about it that night I repsonded to you before I was thinking about writting a new Chapter for it but like i say i write where my insapration it and right now it's on in at different time the readers for that has to wait a LONG time for me to finally start posting and I don't like to post until I'm in a grove where your going to get new chapters day after day after day i don't like to keep you waitting when i have to many steady readers and this story did havve that many i only JUST founf out you were reading when i responded that night don't worry when i start again it will be steady but let me kill this other story and be done with it THEN we'll worry about this one.... that one I'm nearly done with so I'll be back soon
Much Love
Canu
[Report This]Date: Aug 15, 2013 04:00 pm Title: Prologue:Chicago 1930's
hey canyoufeel i want to help with some chapters but i don't want a role in the story.i just want to help.reply if you got this.
Author's Response:
sure i wasn't a stipulation that you end up in the story I just was asking to intise people to read comment and share there thoughts but I would love to here you thoughts so lay them on me and I'll see if they can work in the direction that I'm thinking
[Report This]Date: Aug 15, 2013 04:00 pm Title: Prologue:Chicago 1930's
hey canyoufeel i want to help with some chapters but i don't want a role in the story.i just want to help.reply if you got this.
[Report This]Date: Jul 30, 2013 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 5:Party time... Showing her chops
Im SO sorry that I didn't review right away! I am looking forward to the next chapter! :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2013 10:30 am Title: Chapter 3" New Jobs.... Bigs Big Mistake
I REALLY like this chapter! 10 stars! :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 22, 2013 11:33 am Title: Chapter 2: Street Games
A kid?!? Oh no! Jk, and yay! Mearce will be making her first appearance! :D
P.s, I'm half black and half white with black hair,
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2013 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 1:Meet The 'ol Gang'
Her (My) full name is Mearcella Shotzwell Jackson, but some call her (me) Mearce.
I guess that she (I'm) known for being down to earth and having a sense of humor. She's a goodie-good girl at times but she sometimes can be a diva.
oh! And thank you VERY much! I figure that this might be okay but I don't want her (me) to have the exact same personality as someone else, :)
P.S, Thank you sooo much!
Author's Response:
if you don't mind me asking whar race are you and your haire color
[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2013 10:51 am Title: Chapter 1:Meet The 'ol Gang'
Love the whole concept and plot of this again another great one from you. :)
thank you canyoufeelit.
Author's Response:
if you have anything you feel you want to contribute your more then welcome... I'm looking for things to inspare the drug cartell side of the story
[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2013 04:07 am Title: Prologue:Chicago 1930's
This is just my thinking. you don't have to use it.
Bella Baby and chantrell arrive to Chicago. Chantrell knows how much Bella wants to sing and she somehow bumps into someone who knows a theatre or whatever and tells bella about it.
This is just one idea that came to my mind. If you maybe wrote another chapter, I might be able to get a better idea or so,
Author's Response:
well I like that actually and i was doing some research and There was a Theatre in Chicago that was opein in 1921 The Legindary Chicago theatre and Maybe Michael and Jan'ette can help her get in
I like this Idea if you have any other thoughts Please share the thing that I'm lost on is the side of the story dealing with Big Frankie and Mr Bigs and there drug war part I pretty Much have my thoughts down on Franchesca's side but that side I'm drawing a blank and I do know i want her father and grand father involded in the drug stuff shes just she her mom and sister just never knew about it
but if you have any other Idea's please share
What's your name
and I'll add you in to the story where I see fit you can even give me a full character name [Firstname "Called name" Last name] that my reward to my helpers and give your self a back story that i will tweek if I think it need to be changed
Thanks so much
[Report This]Date: Jul 18, 2013 08:30 am Title: Prologue:Chicago 1930's
Quick question. Is Franchesca "bella Babe" Wislson the main character or do all of these people take part with their pov's? Sorry if I act stupid, but I think I may have some very good ideas,
Author's Response:
Yes she is and I just posted the first chapter how I saw it in my head see if that works with what your thingking YES i would love to hear your thoughts