Date: Jul 26, 2013 12:56 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh my gosh I love it keep writing :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2013 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is good.Continue.
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2013 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 2
Please countiue.Did you like my stories?
Author's Response:
I've just updated =] sorry for the delay! And I've read one so far but I'm just about to go read another! your stories are great <3
Date: Jul 22, 2013 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
I like what you have so far and I'm looking forward to her first meeting with Michael!
Author's Response:
Thank you! keep an eye out for chapter 4 for the first encounter with Michael =]!
Date: Jul 21, 2013 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
Please update this story soon! It's got a good plot and I'd love to see it go a very long way. I do however think you need to make the updates a lot longer to add more detail and make the story a lot more interesting. :)
Author's Response:
I've just updated again =] Thank you for your constructive criticm I've taken it on board and have tried to apply it to chapter 3 =] thanks again!
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2013 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
Literally just started reading this and its amazing :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for such a kind review! I'm just getting started so I hope you like the story =]
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2013 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 1 (if this doesn't work try the other chapter 1) The website went funny!
Really good.Countiue.Also,read my stories.Tell me what you think. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'll have a look at your stories :)!