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Reviewer: BestOfJoy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2013 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 4: Don't drop that th-th-thong

Damn Robin is gonna play her ass. Just saying. Dont drop that th-th thong. Girl that cracked me the fuck up.

Just imagine Michael with a big ass thong and it's dropping. Well atleast his brother's got to see how big his dick is.



Author's Response:

 

Maybe he is but it's better to love and lost then to never have loved at all. Lol! I know right that thing would've been hella giving him a wedgie from the extra package on the front. Ew lol! Love you T

Reviewer: MikeyJackieLover Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2013 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 3: I'm in love!

Sexy, sexy, sexy, sexy, sexy, sexy, WOOOO SEXY. Mm mm mm Robin Thicke. D#MN! *Wipes forehead*

Author's Response:

I know right! I love me some Robin Thicke hence why I used Paula Patton as Ava. She was actually going to be Meghan Good but I didn't know who to use for the second guy and then I was like... My second husband of course! Lol, thank you so much for reading and sharing the same thought on both Michael and Robin xD I'll update ASAP

Reviewer: MJThrillerRockerChick Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 29, 2013 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 3: I'm in love!

wait, I thought they knew each other for a day? Well, I feel bad for Michael :( awww, He liked her alot.



Author's Response:

It has the dates on there. Yeah, I'll try to update soon. Thanks for reading. 

Reviewer: Makayjuliet Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2013 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 2: #Gotdemdigets!

Please, please, please write more :3



Author's Response:

I'm so sorry it took me so long to talk back to you. I've been off for some time now but I'm back. I will as much as possible! Tonight I would write another chapter so I'd be one step ahead but my cat is driving me up the wall! Thank you so so much for reading! 

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2013 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 2: #Gotdemdigets!

I'm really liking this so far! They're so cute! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I know, all of my stories Michael is either crazy, pervy, or a total jack ass so this is a change for me. Thanks for reading. 

Reviewer: MJThrillerRockerChick Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2013 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 2: #Gotdemdigets!

let's hope not mike



Author's Response:

Lol,Francis could be the bomb though!

Reviewer: MJThrillerRockerChick Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2013 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 1: Welcome, Welcome, One And All!

Mike, you may have found your love interest



Author's Response:

Oh snap! Lol thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2013 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 2: #Gotdemdigets!

Haha wow i am LOVING this!!! Its such a great idea and I love the direction its going... Hopefully first kiss will happen soon! ;)



Author's Response:

Awww thank you! That winky face though xD love it! We'll see! Thanks for reading hun.

Reviewer: BestOfJoy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2013 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 2: #Gotdemdigets!

"I pray to god that she doesn't just blow me off, move to France and have kids with some dude named Francis."

You blew me with that one you are petty for that.

LOL remember Tonight.

They look like they have a great bond together.

#TeamLizzyTheAuthor.

~Nera

 



Author's Response:

Like no joke, French dudes are named Francis. My sixth grade French teacher was names Francis! LOL thanks girly love ya <3

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 27, 2013 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 1: Welcome, Welcome, One And All!

Oh my god, of course you should go on!! This is amazing, I love it! Amazing author we got here! =D

Great start, I'm sure it will be a fantastic adventure! Y'all have my support! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much it means a lot to me!

Reviewer: MikeyJackieLover Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 27, 2013 07:53 am Title: Chapter 1: Welcome, Welcome, One And All!

You did good wit this one gurl. Michael is wrong tho, Ms Katie was like "Michael baby please dnt do this"....me personally, I think she needed a hug n Mikey just got n da car and horribly drove away. Lol, smh.

Author's Response:

Lol! Mike just wants to have fun, woah Mike just wants to have fun! that's all he wants, some fun! When the singing days all done oh Mike just wants to have fun! Lol thanks for reading girl!

Reviewer: BestOfJoy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 27, 2013 12:06 am Title: Chapter 1: Welcome, Welcome, One And All!

I love it so far.

Keep going I was laughing all the way at Michael that nigga something else.



Author's Response:

Lol "Making my way down town!" 

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