Date: Oct 27, 2014 01:09 am Title: Chapter 5
You never disappoint i do hope you finish all of your stories. They're always original,different and interesting. Please continue even if it takes forever..ill be waiting.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much I really appreciate all the love!!!
Date: Jun 28, 2014 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 5
GYAAAAAAAH YAS
I'm glad Tane is slowly taking a stand for herself! Well done on this chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2014 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 5
LMAO she's too funny with her thoughts. She's so naive that it's kinda endearing in a way. Like for example, when she was curious of how "shitting" would be like in action or her wondering if it meant going into a shaded area when he told her to cross over into the dark side. HAHAHA how do you come up with these things?!
And I find it cute that no matter how much Michael tries, he's grown a bit fond of her. Not too sure if he's catching feelings... maybe not at this stage of their "friendship" but he's definitely starting to be protective of her.
Great update! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much hun!
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2014 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love this already. Update soon
Author's Response:
I will hun thanks for the review
Date: Jun 19, 2014 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 4
I have just finished reading all four chapters and this is absolutely incredible ! As usual you continue to completely challenge the norms of this site with this captivating piece. It's really as if once you start reading it just demands to be finished You are very talented please continue writing this story it has so much potential which refuses to be ignored. Ugh , I loved it - amazing! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much *blushes*
Date: Jun 16, 2014 12:28 am Title: Chapter 1
YAY! So glad it's back! I can't wait for the next chapter already! 8D
Date: Jun 15, 2014 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is so good! Reminds me of "Harrison Bergeron" with a twist. I feel the same excitement reading this as I did reading Heist. The description in your stories is really something serious. I'm so ready for the next update.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm all about description lol
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2014 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ooooo, your back! Hey!
This story is so unique and different, I like it! I love the way Michael is portrayed in this story too......On the part when she ate the Twinkie and he stared at her in a trance...I was picturing him standing there all mysteriously cool and sexy. Whew.
S/n: This is so off subject but ive gotta share since your a les twin fanatic as well. You know les twins are going on the run with beyonce and jay z, right? Well guess who is going to see them July 15th? Yes, meeee! I'm so excited, you just don't know! I don't even care about Jay Z and Beyonce lol
I also am taking heed to what you said when you went to the beyonce concert to see them and you ran for their tour bus lol That's what I plan to do lol Jk...maybe.
I'm also going to a workshop in October to see them too! They may think I'm a creeper for seeing them again so soon, but whatever lol they made me this way.
Sorry for ranting, but I had to share. Anyway, love this story and all your other ones too! You're so good!
Author's Response:
No I love rants! And omg (Squeels!!!) Thats awesome! No seriously run after their tour bus lol most likely they will be taking pics. Im so excited for you! If I could go to a workshop....(dies) lmao anywho...thanks a million I'm glad you like this story.
Date: Feb 12, 2014 04:21 am Title: Chapter 3
This is fantastic! When are you going to continue this?
Author's Response:
Soon
Date: Feb 07, 2014 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 3
More More more!!!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 10, 2013 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love it
Author's Response: thanks
[Report This]Date: Nov 06, 2013 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oooh I'm definitely liking this Mike so far. He has a certain aura to him that you can't help but be drawn to. Ah but wth?! This is Michael we're talking about! Women flock to him like moths to a flame without him even trying! Lmao
This is going to be quite an adventure for Tane the alien. Heh heh. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.
Date: Nov 06, 2013 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nigga...
Author's Response: Shut up
[Report This]Date: Nov 06, 2013 09:55 am Title: Chapter 3
Great update!!! Sure hope the next is soon :)
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2013 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow..you are a good writer! How old are you?
Author's Response: 18 and thank you very much. I've been trying different writing styles. This is one of my trial and error stories lol