[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2013 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 3
Love it!
Date: Nov 05, 2013 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 3
this is so good
Author's Response: Thank you
Date: Nov 05, 2013 11:28 am Title: Chapter 3
tane is so clueless lol ...
I'm so happy u updated please update soon 😊😉👌d84;a039;
Author's Response: I plan to update pretty soon
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2013 10:40 am Title: Chapter 3
YAY! You helped my lonelyNess before class lol. Welcome back!!! I like this book even thou it is confusing me i love it for some reason! :) update soon please!
Author's Response: How does it confuse you lol
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2013 09:27 am Title: Chapter 2
I loved the chapter from start to finish! The manner in which you explained the chase was so thrilling. You're a great writer! :) Update soon please!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2013 06:13 am Title: Chapter 2
O.o This is one weird of a story girl lol. but for some reason i really do like it tho. :)
Author's Response: Lol I know it is thank you. I wanted to do something different
[Report This]Date: Sep 13, 2013 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
"Uh Hola?" lmaooo idk why that made me laugh. I could just pcture it all! Hahaha
And oh boy, what a journey she had to go through to get to where she ended up.. where that is. But that place doesn't seem so bad... a man half naked with an engelic voice... mmm not bad indeed. Although her hyperventilating because of his bare skin is quite comical. Wow, they really are suppressed. Just her revealing a little bit of skin because of that tear on her body suit was enough to freak her ut. Haha
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Im glad ur enjoying it lol
Date: Sep 13, 2013 02:57 am Title: Chapter 2
i love this already
Author's Response:
Thank you so much I'm glad you enjoy it!
[Report This]Date: Sep 01, 2013 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love it already! Update soon please. :)
Author's Response: Thank you I will and I like ur name
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2013 01:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this is amazing so far! It reminds me off all those futuristic movies and a little bit of that book, 'Brave New World' written by Aldoux Huxley. I can't imagine living in a world that is so suppressed... void of emotions and thoughts.. so cold and superficial. I can't wait to see where this one will go.
I have to tell you that your writing is impeccable! All your stories have gotten me hooked for real Please continue updating!
Author's Response: I will and thank you so much
Date: Aug 19, 2013 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very unique I like it
Author's Response:
Thank you
[Report This]Date: Aug 19, 2013 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
It'a gooooooooooooooooooooooodXDXD Very unique and interesting. I like it! Keep on keeping on with this one! :-)))0
Author's Response:
Lol I think im gonna go ahead and post the next chapter
Date: Aug 19, 2013 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
great story im liking it so far :)
but one thing im a little confused about is what a tube ?
<333
Author's Response:
lol its a futuristic story so there is going to be technology that we dont have. It will be explained in a later chapter though lol Thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: Aug 19, 2013 11:13 am Title: Chapter 1
Looks interesting! Cant wait for next chapter!
Author's Response:
Oh thanks. Next chapter coming soon enough