[Report This]Date: May 06, 2016 12:14 am Title: Chapter 29
Good to have you & the story back. I'm glad Michael & Christina are getting back together, but they have alot to work on. Can't wait till the next chapter.
Keep up the good work!
Date: May 04, 2016 04:28 am Title: Chapter 29
Thank you for the new chapter. I'm so glad that you don't drop this story.
I think what Michael has done to Christina, leaving her like that was really cruel. I felt very bad for her when he just shutted her out and left :'(.
Michael loves Christina and she loves him. But sometimes love is not everything when there are still open wounds that haven's healed.
I don't know if Christina can accept Michael's proposition, but it will be very hard :(.
I am looking forward to reading more.
Date: May 03, 2016 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 27
Wait - it jumped from her escaping neverland to a year of separation?! I'm confused. It was too much too quick
[Report This]Date: May 03, 2016 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 26
She is such an idiot to keep meeting Jared. I can't fault Michael for being so resentful and angry.
[Report This]Date: May 03, 2016 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 25
I was just thinking of this story the other day! Sorry for disappearing since I last reviewed. Life = cluster.
Date: Mar 05, 2016 01:20 am Title: Chapter 28
Oh no! Chistiana did not try to kill herself did she? Michael needs to man up and admit his feelings to her anf admit his is wrong. I cant wait for the contract to be over just so she can move on with her life. Update soon
Date: Feb 28, 2016 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 28
I can't stop reading. I love this story and how it's progressing and am eagerly awaiting updates!!!!
Date: Feb 28, 2016 05:10 am Title: Chapter 28
I really really like your story. Please don't drop it. I want to continue to read it so badly.
I am looking forward to reading more. Thank you.
Date: Feb 26, 2016 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 28
Glad u decided to continue this.
Date: Feb 26, 2016 11:39 am Title: Chapter 28
So glad you updated, it's been a long time! Great chapter 😊
[Report This]Date: Feb 26, 2016 11:02 am Title: Chapter 28
uh oh what did she do great chapter looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2015 08:09 am Title: Chapter 27
I don't think she should go to the birthday celebration. I mean why should she? I know love makes u do foolish things like live in a deserted house for over a year but this shouldn't be one of those times. It should however be time for sista girl to grow a backbone and realize her self worth. The man packed up and left the country without spitting a word to her and a year later out of nowhere an invitation comes in the mail talkin bout come to my birthday party. GTFOH! I agree with BrownEyedGirl, Give her a pseudonym to throw everyone off. Make her one of hottest new writers out of LA and have it throw Michael's low down @zz for a loop when he finds out she's no longer the helpless maid he left behind at Neverland.
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2015 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 27
I have been reading your story and it is very good. I am sorry that this is my first review. Anyways, maybe Christine should write a famous novel like Twilight, or hunger games, or divergent because she wants to be a writer. Maybe have Michael read her books. I dont know If she should go to his party because one he abandoned her, he moved on with his life and so did she. Hope a next chapter comes soon.
Author's Response:
Thats actually a really great idea.
[Report This]Date: Sep 02, 2015 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 25
great story so far