[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2014 02:42 pm Title: CHAPTER LIV - Closure
Ugh! I know she was wrong for all she did but damn. Michael shut up! Please and listen damnit! He thinking she just kicked him to the curve when she really is in love with him. The fact that he just paid Evan off just makes it worse! Money is not a solution for going to the limit of drugging your own child! Sick bastard! Ugh! I want to decapitate Evan. Tape Michael's mouth to make him listen and also Ava for lying so bad! -___-
Author's Response:
Hello April :)) LOOOOL! Michael really needs to learn to listen to Ava. It would have avoided so many misunderstanding! Thank you for the review and the rate :D
[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2014 08:55 am Title: CHAPTER I - Ambition
I also agree about the phone thing, why didn't he just call her before freaking out?
Author's Response:
Maybe he did... ;-))
[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2014 08:53 am Title: CHAPTER LIV - Closure
LMAO @ iam_music asking for Michael to get a swift kick in the nuts!!! I'm never one to deny a good nut kick when it is deserved but at this point I think that's a bit harsh. I'm storing mine up for when he really deserves it. Hopefully I won't need to use it.
Good lord these two just need to stop all the drama already and kiss and make up. They both love each other, who cares about all the other bullshit.
And Michael's staff will come around, they are only upset because Michael is. Some of them are already starting to see Ava's point of view.
One thing though, Ava had better make it clear to Michael that her and Rael are not together and haven't been for 3 years. At this point he is just a friend. But if Michael keeps pushing her away, maybe she WILL end up back with Rael. I hope he realizes this before it's too late and that the thought of another man being with her will make him change his tune.
Whatever Michael decides to do in regards to their relationship I hope Ava doesn't remain silent and continues to clear his name. Eventually he is going to feel like an idiot for ever doubting her intentions.
Author's Response:
Hey Camille :D HAHA! Maybe that's what Michael needs to understand Ava is the woman he needs! Ava needs to fight for him and show him he is the one she wants. They are meant to be!! Thank you for the review and the rate ;D
[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2014 03:47 am Title: CHAPTER LIV - Closure
No no no no no no nooooooooooooo this has to stop! Dammit Ava, grab him, kiss him until his socks melt and make him realise he needs you and can't live without you aaaaaaaaaaaaaaarghhhh..!
I seriously need a rabies shot here; this foaming-at-the-mouth crap is getting a bit much.
Author's Response:
Hey Tiger :D LMAO! Ava needs to fight for Michael because he ovviously doesn't hve the strenght to do it anymore! Thank you for the review and the rate ;)))
Date: Mar 10, 2014 02:38 am Title: CHAPTER LIV - Closure
I think your writing is GREATdont let no one tell you otherwise
Author's Response:
Thank you :))
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2014 08:38 pm Title: CHAPTER LIV - Closure
<!-- /* Font Definitions */ @font-face {font-family:"Cambria Math"; panose-1:2 4 5 3 5 4 6 3 2 4; mso-font-charset:0; mso-generic-font-family:auto; mso-font-pitch:variable; mso-font-signature:-536870145 1107305727 0 0 415 0;} /* Style Definitions */ p.MsoNormal, li.MsoNormal, div.MsoNormal {mso-style-unhide:no; mso-style-qformat:yes; mso-style-parent:""; margin:0in; margin-bottom:.0001pt; mso-pagination:widow-orphan; font-size:12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size:10.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";} p.MsoHeader, li.MsoHeader, div.MsoHeader {mso-style-priority:99; mso-style-link:"Header Char"; margin:0in; margin-bottom:.0001pt; mso-pagination:widow-orphan; tab-stops:center 3.0in right 6.0in; font-size:12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size:10.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";} span.HeaderChar {mso-style-name:"Header Char"; mso-style-priority:99; mso-style-unhide:no; mso-style-locked:yes; mso-style-link:Header; mso-bidi-font-size:10.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman";} .MsoChpDefault {mso-style-type:export-only; mso-default-props:yes; font-family:Cambria; mso-ascii-font-family:Cambria; mso-ascii-theme-font:minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family:"a325;a331; 明朝"; mso-fareast-theme-font:minor-fareast; mso-hansi-font-family:Cambria; mso-hansi-theme-font:minor-latin; mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-bidi;} @page WordSection1 {size:8.5in 11.0in; margin:1.0in 1.0in 1.0in 1.0in; mso-header-margin:.5in; mso-footer-margin:.5in; mso-paper-source:0;} div.WordSection1 {page:WordSection1;} -->Aiko is so friggin cute...and fat. I'd recommend a diet, but I'm afraid he'd lose some of the cuteness.....
Okay, so I really really wish that Ava would have some faith in Michael. Everytime she rushes into something, it seems to bite her in the booty. Also, why didn't her mom accompany her to Neverland? That could have been an interesting scene lol.
Glad you aren't feeling super pressured. I bet it's easy to get to that point with so many readers. It also reminds me why I usually don't start reading a story until it's done - I'm SO impatient. 0:-)
Author's Response:
Oh, what happened in your review lol? Yes, Aiko needs to eat less lmao! But she is so adorable! Michael needs to trust Ava because after all, all she did was for him! He has to forgive her and be together already! Thank you for the review and the rate ;D
Date: Mar 09, 2014 08:17 pm Title: CHAPTER LIV - Closure
Yeah. I'm seriously over Ava and Michael. I really don't have the energy anymore. I knew this bullshit would happen. This is completely ridiculous. All she does is fucking cry and somehow make it about herself and feel sorry or regretful that she didn't do somethin right, or shoulda done something differently. What Michael needs is a swift kick in the NUTS. Fuck a kick in the ass. He needs to be kicked right in his nuts. So he came for her and she wasn't there? BIG FUCKING DEAL!! That's what they make phones for! Doesn't she have a pager he gave her? I just don't understand this. And yeah she's staying with Rael. Which is confusing because one minute he's referred to as her ex husband, then he's her husband. Which is it?! This is pure insanity. If Michael wants to be a stubborn ass, let him. Ava may as well get back with Rael. This shit is stupid.
Author's Response:
:(( I guess it's time for Janet to come back and shake some sense into Michael lol. Hopefully he won't need that to run after Ava!:)) Thank you for the reviewww
Date: Mar 09, 2014 07:37 pm Title: CHAPTER LIV - Closure
No they have to get back together or I'm gonna cry. :'( continue please
Author's Response:
The new chapter is here
Date: Mar 09, 2014 12:05 am Title: CHAPTER I - Ambition
Hey Girl,
It's been a while! I miss your story!
Hope that you're gonna come back soon!!! No pressure:)
Author's Response:
The new chapter is online :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 25, 2014 07:46 am Title: CHAPTER LIII - Action
Ava is asking for nothing but trouble staying with Rael. Only one day is probably ok, but she'd better not stay there any longer than that or she's going to end up having a baby of uncertain paternity in about 9 months. Not the best way to earn Michael's trust.
Glad she's not staying hidden or silent. She needs to fight for her man!
And I still say Janet needs to slap him!
Author's Response:
Hey Camille :D Yup, staying with Rael is not the smartest move :/
"she's going to end up having a baby of uncertain paternity in about 9 months" LMAOO
YYYEESS AVA, FIGHT FOR YOU MAN! LOOOL, maybe Janet will come bacl :)) Thank you for the review and the rate :D
Date: Feb 24, 2014 11:19 am Title: CHAPTER LIII - Action
Continue please
Author's Response:
new chapter online
Date: Feb 24, 2014 07:47 am Title: CHAPTER LIII - Action
Girl, don't take this the wrong way ('cuz I LOVE your updates):
I look at all of our comments and see the pressure to update update update. Take your time. I mean, I always want a chapter asap, but that isn't always realistic. Keep this fun for YOU.
Oh, and if you ever need a line-editor, I'm up for the task! :D
k....to my comment on this chapter:
- Rael!?! Nooooooooooooo. Can the drama get any thicker? Seriously: she left the place MJ had her hidden at, contacted June, and is now at her hubby's place (not even an EX!)? Girl is digging herself deeper. I don't care if her dad would be mad, I'd go to his place. Of course, I'm just saying that because I'm picturing Laurence Fishbourne talking like Morpheus.
-"Not worthy of the classy woman and honorable mother I am”
L_____perfectly-plucked and shaped eyebrows are raised.
Author's Response:
Oh girl, it's ok :). I update when I feel like it and that's it ;-)
LOOOL, Ava can't keep herself out of troubles! Thank you for the review :DD
Date: Feb 24, 2014 07:31 am Title: CHAPTER LIII - Action
Ahhhh nooo come on Ava get yourself together girl!
Author's Response:
LOOL! the new chapter is online
Date: Feb 24, 2014 01:59 am Title: CHAPTER LIII - Action
Excellent chapter! I'm craving for more actions and reconciliations between Michael and Her.... pease, come back soon!:)
Author's Response:
Michael will definitely be in the next chapter :))
[Report This]Date: Feb 24, 2014 01:11 am Title: CHAPTER LIII - Action
I still don't understand why Evan is after the poor guy's life. The things people will do for money! It is utterly disgusting. I can't believe Evan drugged Jordie to 'extract his tooth'. Come on, it's just so obvious what is happening here, why does nobody see that all they need to do is send Evan to a mental asylum where his crazy stupid ass can be treated and all this will be over?!
I wonder what Michael will say though, when he realizes that Ava left Albuquerque. That is hard to pronounce o.o lol. He's going to be really panicked when he hears that 'somebody' tipped off the press about Ava's location. In all this, it's only Ava who seems to be doing something in this. I mean it's not like you can see Sadie or Ana helping Michael. Yet they're the ones judging Ava for doing what she's doing. Pff.
I'm liking her mother. Gina Torres is perfect. There is something with Rael too.. I like him. I hope he supports her. He seems like a nice guy.
Oh boy it's getting crazy. I agree with Camille, you should do a Janet appearance. That's definitely going to lighten things up. Keep doing what you're doing, girl. XD <33
Author's Response:
Hey girl :)!! Michael and Ava needs to talk. Michael needs to understand everything Ava is doing is for him and to clear his reputation! Thank you for the review :))