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Reviewer: thewholeworldsgoneoffthewall Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2013 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 4

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 26, 2013 02:47 am Title: Chapter 4

aaaww she won't hurt him he shouldn't be scared of her

Reviewer: DirtyDani00 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2013 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 3

This was so sweet.  I hope Michael gives Whitney his heart! They would be so good together.

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2013 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 3

I think that Michael already feel something for her

Reviewer: MichaelManiac Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2013 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 2

Whitney's so clumsy! I love her personality! I'd be a nervous wreck if I had to go anywhere with Michael! Whitney's a lucky girl!!! Can't wait to read more!!

Author's Response:

Hahaha Whitney is based SO much off of are personalities it's ridiculous.  Although I think i'd be worse than her meeting Michael lol.  Ahh! Can you imagine being that close to him? A girl can dream :).  Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: DirtyDani00 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2013 11:57 am Title: Chapter 2

I laughed when she fell down the stairs.  This is another really good story!



Author's Response:

Dani you are a doll :) Thanks a bunch!

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2013 09:19 am Title: Chapter 1

I love this so far! Something already tells me that Frank's reaction is going to be EPIC when Michael and Whitney inevitably start to bone behind his back lol. I can definitely relate to having an overprotective parent. Can't wait to see what happens!

Reviewer: mjfan1978 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2013 08:55 am Title: Chapter 2

Hey, awesome job as usual. I also love the chemistry between Frank & Whitney to the point of the normal Father/Daughter arguments. 

So Please update soon :)



Author's Response:

Lol they are definetly a pair.  Lots of drama between the two of them to come.  Thanks so much for reading <3

Reviewer: thewholeworldsgoneoffthewall Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2013 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 2

Another great chapter! Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thanks!! :) I should have updates up every night.  <3

Reviewer: HumanNature02 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2013 07:38 am Title: Chapter 1

I love Taylor Swift! This is my first story and I think it's really good.  Wasn't Frank Michael's  manager really? I want to read more!



Author's Response:

Thanks!! Me too.  I actually chose her to be in the story because i thought her songs would make really good storylines lol.  Yes, Frank was his manager during the BAD era :).  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: MichaelManiac Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 17, 2013 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm glad to see this story back!! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response:

Ahh! Me too I can't believe it got deleted.  I was actually in the process of writing more chapters and that's when I noticed they were gone.  Thank goodness I saved them :S.  thanks a bunch for reading!! :)

Reviewer: thewholeworldsgoneoffthewall Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 17, 2013 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love this story already, I love how descrpitive of you are. Looking forward to the rest!



Author's Response:

Thanks!! :)

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