Date: Mar 21, 2017 06:23 pm Title: Big announcement!
hooray! You are back :)
Date: Mar 21, 2017 05:49 pm Title: Big announcement!
So happy that you're back writing!! Can't wait for what's to come xx
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2016 10:20 am Title: CHAPTER 14
I really really like your story! I think your writing skills are so great. Please don't drop "Devil's Kiss". You cannot leave us like that. I want to read more so badly!
Thank you. I am looking forward to reading more.
Date: Feb 03, 2016 12:40 am Title: CHAPTER 4
Can we talk about how spunky this chick is? I love her personality I wanna be her best friend! Btw author, are you a screenwriter? Coz this story kinda reads like a script in some parts. Anyway love your work. Woot!
Date: Sep 28, 2014 02:47 pm Title: CHAPTER 13
Michael, that little s**t.
*shakes head*
Why InLoveWithMichaelJosephJackson, why'd you tear my heart from my chest this way, hmm? I so feel like slapping that boy silly sometimes and as much as I can't wait for them to be together again, I can't help but hope she'll make him suffer a little. I know he's in pain too but daaamn.
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2014 06:00 pm Title: CHAPTER 14
ajksldfjdsla; I'm sorry, your warning that you don't know when the next update might come, has been rejected. I apologize for the inconvenience, but you'll have to 
, as you just left me stuck on another epic cliff hanger.
When that hard knock came...then the horrid roommate....to her mom advising her not to go....to the horrid roommate...to the very last moment in which he practically growls at her. Please please please update within 2 weeks!!
Date: Aug 11, 2014 10:30 pm Title: CHAPTER 13
The way you write is just genius. This story is just to good. Thank you for updating and can't wait for more. :)
Date: Aug 11, 2014 12:06 am Title: CHAPTER 13
YAAAAAAAAAAS maaan i love this Dx
[Report This]Date: Aug 09, 2014 08:48 pm Title: CHAPTER 13
Damn. Michael is stepping up! I loved Janet, Latoya, and Katherine's reactions to Randy's description of her as his girlfriend. Obviously he didn't think highly enough of her to tell them her name. Janet's comments about Michael's social skills 
Then their confession? 
Only for me to be irate (again) after she drew back the curtains. Why must you mess with my emotions *sob*?!? I wanted to hug him, throttle him, slap him, and hug him...all in half of this chapter. That was...realistic and draining. Oh, and Ellie needs to GTFO.
This chapter...seriously...they just keep getting better. It was totally worth the wait...though I hope I don't have to wait long for the next. I want to know what happens next!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2014 06:01 pm Title: CHAPTER 12
Woah. Another chapter with a twist!
First off, Jael feels very confused, to me. IMO, the idea of settling for "happy" when you know you could be "ecstatic" makes as much sense to me as comparing Bieber to Michael.
And Frank's proposition?! WTF? Um. Even if she was sleeping with both Michael and Randy, it would be an big leap to think that means he has a probable chance.
Ellie - "floozy" 
Why are they housemates again?
"After all, you never know who I might run into there..."
Ooh, ooh! Run into Michael! In his bedroom. Better yet, maybe he needs an assistant? Please and thank you :)
Can't wait to see where you take this next. Thanks for continuing it!
Author's Response:
Lol, so happy to see your review on here before calling it a day (at 3:10 a.m., lol)...Frank really is wrong for doing that, especially since she never actually slept with Randy and isn't technically sleeping with Michael either, as you know. Luckily in the story, everything happens for a reason. Even Ellie's role will start making sense in the next chapter...Thank you, Red, and you're welcome! I told you I would :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2014 01:04 am Title: CHAPTER 11
Noooooo. She cannot even consider dating Randy. There is no chemistry. It's too...brother-ish. No.
I had NOT seen JW bringing them together. What a twist. Seriously. I'm loving it (Sorry McDonald's). Keep it coming, please!
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2014 12:52 am Title: CHAPTER 10
So much to comment on that I'm actually virtually commentless. My internal debate about Michael's eyes is still ongoing. What I do like is that you tied in JW to his repentence. I'm mixed on her open door action. It's both believable and disturbing.
I think the only thing I'm clear on is that I'm upset there is only one more chapter for me to read before I'm caught up.
Author's Response:
Right. The reason why Jael did that was to check whether his motives were genuinely clear and he wasn't interested in taking advantage of her again.
You sure are a quick reader, lol. I'm really hoping you'll enjoy the last chapter and I can assure you the next one is pretty much finished but I tend not to update until the end of the week, just in case I should want to make any last minute changes when starting with the next one. Besides, it's good to have some kind of structure, even though it often takes me longer than a week depending on how much time I have. Thank you, again, for your support. You have really motivated me to finish this story after all...
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2014 12:40 am Title: CHAPTER 9
First off: a Jungian therapist would have a field day with your head and that dream. It's almost as trippy as if the dream were to be disrupted by a woman with wings who suddenly wraps her arms around Michael. Oh. Wait.
but the condom… I doubt there’s a psychologically sensible explanation for that one.
Michael's comment about the purple one? Well he didn't. I don't see why Jael has any reason to feel small. He's the one screwing up left and right. She's the employee who could lose her spot at any moment. SMH.
....and then. Holy crap. I can't believe he did that. OMG.
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2014 12:15 am Title: CHAPTER 8
Michael is really really pressing his luck. The darker this gets, the more curious I am as to where you are going to take it. I know there is a method to your madness ;)
Now, for my lingering questions: What was Randy up to? Who put the blanket on her? Did Michael really go back to the room for his lighter? When will Michael make me not want to smack some sense into him? LOL
Author's Response:
Whoa, not used to seeing that many reviews on here... Girl, you're the best for taking the time to read and comment on each chapter individually.
I love hearing from others how the scenes made them feel as it makes it easier for me to see if I'm still steering it right and making the impressions I was aiming for. Your reactions were definitely on point.
Might as well answer that last question to 'warn' you that Michael is about to get a whole of a lot darker before things can start looking up...and after that, I'm not tellin' yet, lol. Let's just say you're about to get a lot madder at him, but I do hope that, the more chapters you read, the better you can understand him. That seems to be the problem with most of my readers, tho. I don't quite get the feeling that they do, but I'm definitely hoping they will as the story progresses. Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2014 11:50 pm Title: CHAPTER 7
Michael needs to get his signals checked.
Frank needs to understand his limits.
Jael needs to open her mouth and talk.
Randy needs to keep issuing invites.
And Marlon needs to be quiet.
Loved this chapter!