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Reviewer: April Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 19, 2013 07:32 am Title: Ch. 2: Hello There.

Lol they passed out asleep and he decided to stay! THATS funny lmbo!

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 19, 2013 03:53 am Title: Ch. 2: Hello There.

I don't like how they all kidnapped MJ. Some scientist is gonna like find him and steal him away then do creepy experiments on him.  Its one thing if they pulled him back on the beach then did some first aid, its a whole nother when they kidnap him. :/. Other than that, great chapter!



Author's Response:

Kaykay, they kids; they don't know what they're doin. Plus, it's Mchael Jackson. Who wouldn't want to save him? Lol, anyways, thanks a bunch for reading!

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