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Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2014 12:19 am Title: Ch. 4: Close Calls and Terrible Research.

So how does it really work? O.o



Author's Response:

If you're wondering about how someone becomes a mermaid, I think I should tell you:

As mentioned in the story, if a mer-person kisses a human (on the lips) once or twice, the human is able to breathe and talk in the water, but the catch to it is that they can only breathe in the water if the mer-person is with them. The third kiss, the human then becomes a mer-person, but is able to get out of it if dry, and if they are wearing a special piece of clothing or jewellry, such as a belt (like Michael's) or a bracelet.

I also should say it can work on deceased people too, so if the mer-person kisses the passed away human three times on the lips, the human can come back to life with the mer-person conditions, and can live on dry land.

I hope this clears it up for you.

With L.O.V.E.

Sweetpanda14

Reviewer: MJFan232 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2014 06:59 pm Title: Ch. 4: Close Calls and Terrible Research.

Neat so far. :) And I can imagine Michael as a merman (sort of like the 1989 Disney film The Little Mermaid, but different). And I can see Michael using his voice to charm Alex, too (which would be kind of like what Ariel originally planned to do to Eric with her beautiful voice before Ursula, the Sea Witch, came along). Also, unlike Ariel in The Little Mermaid, it seems that Michael is able to change himself into a merman and back to human at will, which is something I find to be awesome.. :)

Keep up your super-neat, very intriguing and phenomenally inspiring writing! :)



Author's Response:

Actually the Merman form that Michael has is the type of mermaid from the 1989 Disney film. Also, Alex and Mike are just friends, though Maddy is starting to ship those two like FedEx XD

Thanks so much from the both of us! :D

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2014 06:42 pm Title: Ch. 4: Close Calls and Terrible Research.

XDXDXD First World Michael Jackson Merman problems: Shipping upon shipping upon shipping upon shipping. Lol Those facts are cool though (I call dibs on being his Ariel first! XD) Awesome chapter dear dynamic duo! :-)))))



Author's Response:

LOLOLOLOLOLOL XDXDXD. Kayla, I swear, you make me laugh all the time. Thanks for le awesome review, form the both of us!

tink

~Sarah, <333

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