Date: Nov 16, 2015 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 25
Man, that sex scene was hot!! Loved it!! Poor Lena is a little scared about the trip. Everything will be fine since she will have Michael by her side. Continue!
Date: Nov 16, 2015 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 25
i wonder what will happen next, I just hope there won't be any unfortuante mishaps before they make it to New York, glad you updated been waiting patiently lol.
I just wish michael would see the beauty we all saw in him in this story and reality too!..
[Report This]Date: Nov 16, 2015 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 25
It about time lol l love it
[Report This]Date: Nov 16, 2015 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 25
It about time lol l love it
Date: Sep 06, 2015 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 24
Yeahhh im so glad to see this story updated!, ahh her grandpa stupid silly old man needs to chill gosh the world has changed geez!. I loved the talk between mj and grandma betty it felt meaningful. I can't wait to see mj and her travel to Chicago to chase their dreams, I wonder what they would face, tune in next time for pyt lol.
A great chapter b25;
Date: Sep 06, 2015 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 24
Man her grandpa is such an ass!! Her grandma should dump his ass! God her grandma is so cool! I can't wait to see what's in this package! Continue!
Date: Aug 01, 2015 05:29 am Title: Chapter 23
God I love her grandma!! Those two are wild though for doing it with the door unlocked but her grandma didn't care! ;) Continue!
Date: Jun 21, 2015 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 22
Finally been waiting for this story to update! Been a silent reader heh
, loving the pace between Lena and Michael. Keep it coming!!
Date: Jun 21, 2015 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 22
I love Betty White!!!!!!
Date: Mar 09, 2015 04:39 am Title: Chapter 19
Still one of my favs on here.... <3 Can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: Nov 20, 2014 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 17
Awesome! Read this story in an hour, I liked it that much! Lena is my favorite OC out of all the stories I've read. Keep up the great work! :)
Date: Oct 16, 2014 02:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Me when i saw this story updated: OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG finally yaassssss <3 YAY YAY YAY
[Report This]Date: Sep 05, 2014 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 15
AHAHA AWWWW OMGGG GIRL I LOVED THIS!!! Those two drive me wild!!! The way Lena cares about him, and the way Michaels turned bold is just to amazing, LOVE IT, and cant wait for more!!! Publish again soon!
Date: Aug 23, 2014 12:25 am Title: Chapter 1
I adore this story! i've only read one chapter and I'm in love haha
I love how Lena is joan jett in the picture :D
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2014 08:31 am Title: Chapter 14
THEY MADE LOVE!!! OH MY GOD FINALLY
THAT. Young lady.. Was THE MOST... Erotic, beautiful, amazing, loving and INTENSE love making scene I have EVER... Ever read. Please publish again soon, cant wait for the morning after!! Their love is so amazing!!