Reviews For The Afterlife
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Reviewer: Dreamer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2014 11:14 am Title: Assurances

JC is mad cool. He doesn't even mind Mike's "unpure" thoughts haha. 

One more thing...why did you end it there!? You just left us all hanging high and dry. Lol



Author's Response: *raised eyebrow* I left it hanging? Check again......

Reviewer: KOP77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2014 09:23 am Title: Some Time Later

Oh yeah! I remember. Totally didn't cross my mind. Brain fart, lol. 



Author's Response: *waggles finger* Gotta pay attention! I write every detail for a reason........

Reviewer: KOP77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2014 07:42 am Title: Some Time Later

So the voids can attack the kids as well. Hm, interesting. Can't wait for more! :)



Author's Response: Remember, voids can attach to anyone with a clean essence (remember the two little girls).

Reviewer: KOP77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2014 07:28 am Title: The Old One

Trippy indeed.



Author's Response: I like trippy stuff. Makes stories fun.

Reviewer: Mjaxrox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2014 08:02 pm Title: The Old One

Ohhhhhhh, that was Jesus? That just blew my mind. Meanwhile, Michael seems pretty eager to go further with Jade.



Author's Response: Remember, he doesn't like names. He probably can't decide which of his past ones he likes the most.

Reviewer: Dreamer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2014 02:01 pm Title: The Old One

J.C. Huh? Alright, Jesus. That was kinda trippy though. So is Michael like a descendant of J.C.? I'm really curious!!!!! Lol



Author's Response: lol No, he's not a descendent. But they are the same type of spirit. JC just decided his last experience was so bad that he didn't need to come back.

Reviewer: KOP77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2014 01:10 pm Title: The Old One

Oh wow, that was... That was interesting to say the least. I shall be patient for more to come, but still, can't wait, lol. 



Author's Response: Trippy, right?

Reviewer: Dreamer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2014 10:22 am Title: To Be Human

Oh shit. Why do you do this to us?! Lol they finally get somewhere and then all "hell" breaks loose. 



Author's Response: *snicker* Don't blame me. I just say what the story wants......

Reviewer: KOP77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2014 10:00 am Title: To Be Human

Oh no, where's Michael? He better not be playing hide and seek.lol Can't wait for more. :)



Author's Response: The story just won't stop today. I'm hoping I can post once more and then fictional Mickey will leave me alone for a while! lol

Reviewer: KOP77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2014 09:42 am Title: Common Sense ain't Common

Brian's funny, his character really amuses me. Can't wait for more! :)



Author's Response: Just posted. Enjoy!

Reviewer: Dreamer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2014 09:35 am Title: Common Sense ain't Common

Brian is a plump fool! I really love his character though. He's so funny. And finally, Michael gets it. I can't wait to see what happens! 



Author's Response: I swear I love Brian!

Reviewer: Dreamer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2014 11:22 pm Title: Try Something New

Okay....I'm gonna need another chapter asap! Lol



Author's Response: Lol I'll actually be working on one soon.

Reviewer: Hazel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2014 08:55 pm Title: Try Something New

Oh my gosh! Aren't they the cutest thing ever?! For some reason, this is reminding me of Casper and Kat only Jade looked like how she was before she died and not a white blob.

 Lmao I can't wait until they can "feel" each other.. wait... that sounded dirty. I meant I can't wait until Jade until Jade re-experiences human touch again! She's starting to be more human (er...act humanlike anyways) and less like a robot.

Woohoo I can't wait for their date... hangout... whatever!



Author's Response: I've never watched a Casper movie, but now I may have to check one out.

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2014 01:32 pm Title: Try Something New

*facepalm* oh god. What have you two gotten yourselves into?!



Author's Response: Why, shenanigans. What else? lol

Reviewer: Mjaxrox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2014 01:31 pm Title: Try Something New

I adore this story! I can imagine everything so clearly. There has to be a way for Michael and Jade to be together. I can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response: Mmmmmmmmaybe......

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