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Reviewer: MJFan232 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2015 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 4

Neat so far... :) I wonder if she will tell Michael about her vow to never trust men, as well as the dead deers in the forest, too...

Keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and creatively beautiful writing! :)

Reviewer: kitty101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2014 11:52 am Title: Chapter 4

Next chapter please

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Date: Jan 22, 2014 07:31 am Title: Chapter 3

More please more

Reviewer: MJFan232 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2014 06:57 am Title: Chapter 3

Wow. Good for Julie that Michael was right there looking out for her, and that before she left, George was on the ground, where he deserved to be, too. Served George right - having that old mentality of what a woman is supposed to be (meaning in the kitchen and always obeying her husband, and nothing else). However, what George doesn't realize or understand is that women have come a long way in history - since Bible times, in fact.

Even Jesus Himself remarked to his friend Lazarus's sister Martha in the New Testament from the Bible that her sibling Mary had chosen one thing, and that was to listen to Him.

Anyway, keep up your super-neat, very creative and beautifully phenomenal writing! :)

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2014 06:54 am Title: Chapter 3

More please. :)

Reviewer: MJFan232 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2014 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 2

Wow. That took a lot of courage for her to do what she did and head out of there - and find a better life, hopefully. :)

I can also see her thinking to herself this quote from the 1994 film Forrest Gump (which is a really good movie, too): “Dear God, make me a bird, so I can fly far, far, far away from here.”

Anyway, keep up your super-neat, very creative and phenomenally beautiful writing! :)

Reviewer: April Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2014 07:59 am Title: Chapter 2

Omg! Thank god for maria and her help. I just hope he doesn't come back just in time for her to leave

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2014 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yay I glad you to hear you want to continue this story I was wondering what happen to it, it was one of my favorites thanks for bringing it back. :)

Author's Response:

Aww really? It's great to know you read it back then. Thank youu :)

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2014 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love it!!! Please keep going!!!



Author's Response:

I will, thank you :)

Reviewer: DaizyfreeMJJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2014 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

I liiiike. Keep going. :)

Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: KOP77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2014 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm really intrigued already and I can't wait to see what happens next!:) Can't wait for more!!! :)



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Thank youu :)

Reviewer: kitty101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2014 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Keep going



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I will, thanks

Reviewer: April Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2014 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like this so far and I would love if you continued! I mean wow. He was treating her with utter disrespect then she took it and now she is fed up triedps to leave and be at a her then strips her naked? What does he want from her cause she clearly wants nothing but anyway I like stories like this so I will keep a watchful eye for your next update :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! :)

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