Date: Jul 15, 2015 01:21 am Title: Chapter 4
Good development. Very good descriptive writing. I can see everything that you describe in each scene.
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2014 09:11 am Title: Chapter 4
Aw I really feel for Parker smh no child should have to go through such sadness but life happens :( I'm happy Michael was there for her and allowed her to grieve, he's a very smart young boy. :) I can't wait for more! XD
Author's Response:
Yeah :( its so sad for Parker and her situation but she's lucky to have someone like Michael to be there for her. Yeah he is a smart young man for sure :) lool thanks for always reading and reviewing boo! Much Love <333
Date: Jun 17, 2014 08:48 am Title: Chapter 4
Aww, I'm glad Michael can be there for Parker in her time of need. "Let It Be" is also one of my favorites by the Beatles! I thought for sure he was going to kiss her but I have a feeling he will by the oak tree. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
Yeah Michael is such a sweet boy :) and Yesss I love Let It Be! Lol i know right but that stupid football had to come and hit him in the nose xD lool anyway thanks for all your support! Much love <333