[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2014 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 13: Now Entering.... The Friend Zone
.... I think Michael and I would get along wonderfully. :) We have so much in common. Think about it.... We both hate Jake, we both want Erin to be with Michael. I mean, hell, I'd even help plot Jake's death with him!!! Lol keep goin girl!!!
Author's Response: Lol!! I'm pretty sure you would!! Let me know about your plan of action. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2014 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 12: Moving On?
Yeah you should definitely add Michael's pov it would be nice to know what's going on in his head lol.
Author's Response: I think I will do just that!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2014 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 11: Setting The Record Straight
She told him and I 100% agree with her Michael needs to get ho's act together if he wants to be with her so bad action speaks louder then words.
Author's Response: That's right! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2014 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 10: Bone To Pick
TeamMichael all day lol.
Author's Response: Lol! I figure just about everyone will be TeamMichael.
Date: Jun 21, 2014 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 10: Bone To Pick
*-* omg.... UPDATE
Author's Response: I will!! Thanks for reading!!
Date: Jun 20, 2014 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 10: Bone To Pick
Michael's getting a little jelly belly, lol. Can't wait for more!!! :D
Author's Response: They'll be more soon!! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2014 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 8: Two Can Play That Game
Man..... Jake's FUGLY!!!! Like Eugh...... Gross. lol But she needs to show Michael she won't wait for him forever. Even if its with an ugly bastard who's WAY too cocky for my liking.... Love it girl!!!
Author's Response: Really?!? I thought Jake was pretty good looking. But hey, once Michael see's Erin with Jake I'm pretty sure he'll get the memo. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2014 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 8: Two Can Play That Game
Jake is a hottie. Erin should go for him. Maybe if she gets some dick she will stop being all pressed over Michael. Cause Michael doesn't deserve her. He's too manipulative and untrustworthy. He made his bed, time to lie in it.
At this point, I think she should forget all about Michael in any kind of romantic sense.
I won't be mad if you retitle the story "Too Late"
Author's Response: ROTF!!!! I was laughing so hard about how you wouldn't be mad if I retitled the story "Too Late"!!! I am actually thinking about changing the title though. You're right, it's time for Michael to suffer in silence. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 16, 2014 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 7: Can't Have Your Cake & Eat It Too
Seems like Michael is playin games.
Author's Response: Right! Thanks for always reading and reviewing!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 14, 2014 10:12 am Title: Chapter 6: Falling
I most certainly don't hate Erin for being hard on Michael I actually think that it's good that she's playing hard to get. Great chapter. :-)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: Jun 12, 2014 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 5: Just Good Friends
Hmm, so they're gonna chill. Can't wait to see how that'll turn out. Update soon! :)
Author's Response: I will! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Jun 12, 2014 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 4: Gotta Make A Big Impression
I also think it isn't fair that Erin has been single for most of this time. She needs a boyfriend and NOT Michael. It's his turn to suffer in silence.
Author's Response: Another great idea!! Thanks!
Date: Jun 12, 2014 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 4: Gotta Make A Big Impression
That's right Erin. You show him who's in control. Lol. Can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! There will me more!
Author's Response: Thanks! There will me more!
[Report This]Date: Jun 12, 2014 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 4: Gotta Make A Big Impression
This is a crazy story idea. I didn't read the prequel but based on what I've read so far, I don't see how Erin could ever forgive Michael. I mean they could stay friends, sure, but if it were me in her place that's all we'd ever be at this point. He made his choice. It was the wrong one, sure, but that's his problem.
I am not one to usually hold grudges but there are some things that are unforgiveable. I don't see how she couldn't help but always feel like sloppy seconds if she were to get with him now. Actions speak louder than words. And fifteen years have passed. FIFTEEN!!! Surely he's had plenty of time to change his mind, but as long his marriage was working out no skin off his back, right?
Plus there are family boundaries that should never get crossed and this is one of them. You should never betray your sister for a man, especially one who is so obviously not worth your time.
Anyways, I'm interested to see if my feelings change as I keep reading. Gotta say that I don't see it happening. But you've definitely caught my interest! Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: You're right! It is a bit crazy. I didn't intend to write a sequel but the readers insisted so hey, why not? I'm going to try and make this story work out the way people want it to without it being far-fetched and unrealistic but it will be hard considering the family boundaries in all. But thanks so much for reading and thanks for the review! It will really give me something to consider.
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2014 11:52 am Title: Chapter 3: Too Much
Now he know damn well Erin wasn't going to give into him that easy.
Author's Response: Lol!!Thanks for reading and reviewing!!