Date: Jul 14, 2014 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 24
Daaammmmnnn!!!!! Poor Mike. I hope he nver treats his child like that. Mike and Liyah live in a fucked up world. I'm just waitin' on the good times to roll through.
Awesome chapter!!! I love the banner.
Author's Response:
lol giiiirrrrllll , exactly he needs be a good father. Dont they though? everybody is a liar. Thanks for the review girrrlll lova ya
[Report This]Date: Jul 14, 2014 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 24
i see where Michael get his lies from his mother and father smh why is everybody lying i feel like Chris is the realest one in the story he kept it 103 with Michael when they went to jail like latoya was hounding liyah about telling michael about the abortion but wht she aint hound teddy about telling michael that he was his son. smh this story raises my blood pressure sky high & i love it please update soon 😘😘
[Report This]Date: Jul 14, 2014 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 24
Chiiiiile I knew it. I knew Teddy was Mike's father. See I'm smart like that. Girl yes indeed. Shit really just got real. Fr fr!!!!! But even tho Mike is upset which I understand, he still needs to tell Liyah the truth about Kamille' s baby and Liyah needs to tell him about the abortion. Girl you and these secrets. But you getting on me about my torturous chapters in my story. Lol. Anyway I love the banner your sister made for you. It's great. And the chapter was great too. Full of drama. Keep up the good work Bri :)
Author's Response:
lol girl you did say that and when you said it I already had the chapter typed up and I was like damn she figured me oout lol. didnt it though? girl Michael dont know what the truth means and ALiyah dont either lol. Thank you I love that banner too she just popped up and was like here lol thank you Bre. And you stay teasing though
Date: Jul 14, 2014 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 1 , 2 , 3 &4
And awwwe your sis is an MJ fan AND she gets on this site? I like this chick, lol.
[Report This]Date: Jul 14, 2014 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 24
*takes a sip off this extra sweetened hot tea with with lemons squeezed in it* Kat.....I......these people are a trip. That's why Teddy got mad when Michael had told him that he couldn't take care of his "son". If I were Michael, I'd keep my distance from both his parents for a while.
Aliyah...she told why she was at the hospital but she didn't tell about the abortion just like Mike didn't tell that he was there to see the ultrasound. I still don't know how I feel about Nichole having a child with Kamille but I guess it's no choice but to accept it at this point.
But girl, so many liesss, why is everybody lying? I'm gonna need for you to do the next update quick fast and in a hurry please and thanks!
Author's Response:
lmmfaooo I swear I just died girl you are hilarious like really be having me dead. Aint they though they are Michael's parents I can now tell where he get it from their lying asses. Told that boy his father died like that smh. Aliyah that girl smh. Update is coming to you in about 20 mins -muah- stay tuned
[Report This]Date: Jul 14, 2014 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 24
OMG drama drama drama. And these two are really starting to get on my nerves seems like everybody else coming out the closet with their secrets but these two but in all honestly I do feel bad for Michael and Aliya cause the more they wait the more drama its going to be I just hope she doesn't find out by that Kamill bitch.
Author's Response:
exactly girl you hit on the nose , girl whats done in the dark will come to light they holding back all these secretes aint doing nothing but hurting themselves smh stay tuned love thanks for the review -muah-
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2014 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 23
Aliyah is manipulating Trey i see you girl try be all nice so he would drop the charges but too bad the video went viral smh damn Michael now Kamille ugly ass is pregnant with somebodies baby smh i dnt know what to think this story be raising my damn blood pressure i cant take it smh Michael is crazy as hell dont get mad at Aliyah you got a whole baby on the side tf😤😤 update soon i cant wait for more 👏👏👏
Date: Jul 11, 2014 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 23
Im happy for michael but he need to tell aliyah even though i dont belive the baby is his and aliyah need to tell michael about the abortion. They both are hiding mayjor secret that can affect the realtion ship but im praying that they act like adults
Author's Response:
new reader? heeeeyyyy , exactly you are totally right both secretes can destroy their relationship but its up to them to stay lol that was soooo corny but ya know thanks so much for reading stay tuned
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2014 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 23
Michael...ew. Keep your hands off of Kamile, you might catch something. He is forever making me mad. Why hasn't he told Aliyah yet? Dang I guess he just gon wait til the baby pop out. Aliyah is a pushover now but I swear by the end of this story she's gonna lose her shit and I'm gonna cheer her on the whole time! Matter fact, I don't even know if I will because why did she feel the need to go visit Trey? These two, I swear!
Author's Response:
lmao you cant stand Kamile she only doing her job of being a hoe let that girl liiiivvveee lol. I dont think Liyah is a pushover just too nice you see she slapped the hell out of Erica no good ass lol. Michael is a coward for not telling her straight up and Aliyah is a coward for not telling him about the baby as well they both at immature for keeping something that can crush them both. lol stay tuned love
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2014 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 23
Really Michael? So he still ain't told her? SMH how so they expect to have a nice relationship if the choose to keep secrets from each other? He needs to tell her and Aliyah needs to tell him her secret as well.
Author's Response:
Girl exactly Michael is full of lies like one lie after another he aint gonna stop until they catch up with him. You hit it right on the nose girrrll thanks so much for the support stay tuned -muah-
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2014 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 23
I swear to God I will be laughing so hard if that baby comes out blond hair blue eyes and white. Or if the kid looks nothing like him. Please don't let it be his. Remember Kamille, having his baby will not make him stay. With you that is. And fuck Trey's ass. I hope Michael's album sells well. Continue soon!!!
Author's Response:
Heeeyyy I havent seen you in the reviews in a minute Im missing your hilarious comments such as this one. Blond hair and blue eyes and white omgggg giiiirrrrlll this baby mmm mm mmm , exactly she believeds that though remember in the last chapters she was like you cant walk out on me cause Im pregnant bitch first off yall was never together you was just a lil jumpoff. Trey lol stay tuned
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2014 07:44 am Title: Chapter 22
I dont know about Erica like she is just tooo much like how you gonna do that she is your beatfriend!! and you try to sleep with her boyfriend but she sound so genuine but eh people stay crossing liyah so you never know. Trey needs to chill out cause allat revenge isnt called for
Date: Jul 08, 2014 12:05 am Title: Chapter 22
Trey can go eat some dog nuts!
Author's Response:
lol oh wow calm down girl lol
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2014 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 22
Erica was all up on him in the flashback like come on she cant just dislike Michael because of Aliyah girl BYE you want him we ALL know you want him so stop playing thats why you hate him so much cause you want him so bad you mad cause he with Aliyah and not your skank ass. You go Aliyah girl she should have smacked the hoe dont come to my house crying an pleading talking bout you aint do shit. Im feel like more fuckery is around the corner waiting to happend , Aliyah abortion and Kamille pregnancy LORD give me strength with this story pleeeaaassseee. I cant wait for another story from you like your very talented with your stories and they are so damn relatable love it update soon pleeaasseee 😘😘
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2014 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 22
FUCK ERICA. Mistake my ASS, a drunk mind speaks the sober truth and if she wanted Michael then she wants him now! Fuck Erica's tears, Aliyah needs to work things out with Michael first and Trey....bye boy.
AND YES I have an idea for a new story too, I can't wait to put it up!
Author's Response:
Girrrlll lol you cant stand her now she onna list with Kamille aint she? lol