Date: Jul 07, 2014 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 22
To be honest, I don't know if she should forgive Erica. It seems like no one can be loyal to Aliyah, she chooses some shitty friends.
I'm just waiting when Aliyah will find out about that baby. All hell will break loose.
Awesome chapter!!! I'm lovin it.
Author's Response:
Exactly she really did girl its crazy Kamille then Erica , thanks love stay tuned -muah-
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2014 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 22
I'm not even suppose to be on here but your story was calling my name for me to read the new chapter you updated. Lol. But imo, I really think Liyah should forgive Erica......in due time and Mike. And she really do need to cut all ties with Trey too and work on her and Mikey. But these secrets that her and Mike are holding from each other....they need to come to the light. They should at least sit each other down and let it all out that way shit won't pop off. But great chapter Bri. And I hope you do start a new story. I'll be waiting if you do.
Author's Response:
lol your the only one that thinks Liyah should forgive Erica lol , Trey girrrl lol exactly all these lies and secrets they got going on is not good for their relationship thats why they are the way they are now. Rollercoaster ride at its best lol girl go be with your family hell tell them to read with you lol -muah- have fun boo
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2014 06:48 am Title: Chapter 21
Awwh Chris 😭😭😭 he really a ryda die friend that will get locked up with you , that 200 thousand bail bruuuh they would have stayed in there if it was coming outta my pocket lili is better than me allat lol , Aliyah rey smash Erica i already know next chapter pleeaasse i love it
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2014 06:45 am Title: Chapter 20
😂😂😂 Michael really hit him with a basketball though? lol but he needs to get himself together you got a career a crazy mother and a baby on the way what an example 💁 smh
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2014 06:44 am Title: Chapter 19
oooommmggg its qbout to go down BASEMENT!! , Kamille girl LAY DOOOWWN!
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2014 06:41 am Title: Chapter 21
Chris is right Michael was selfish and what in the world was he thinking like damn boy you did go in but you aint have too and i hate how michael told on Erica but he couldnt tell on himself bout tht baby he has onna way boy you make me siiiiiiiccckkk anyways great chapter girlll
Date: Jul 06, 2014 12:31 am Title: Chapter 21
Mike, Mike, Mike, you fuckin' up bro. I understand he wanted to defend Aliyah, but he went about it the wrong way. He has a career to think about, a possible baby on the way (if it's his, I highly doubt it's his). I hate when men do that, act on impulse and not think with their damn heads. SMDH. He ended up in jail and dragged his best friend with him. Aliyah should've been harder on Mike though.
We all know Erica wants Michael; she ain't right. I'm glad Aliyah gave her hard slap to the face.
Awesome chapter girl!!!! Please continue.
Author's Response:
yessss thats what im saying Michael dont think he got sooo much anger built up in him he dont think bout the outcome of things , girll mee tooo exactly 👏👏👏 , Aliyah needed to do more than tht bit she kept it cute michael is stubborn he aint gonna listen until something else happends , thanks booo 😘 i will updaye today
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2014 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 21
I had JUST checked your page like 30 minutes ago to see if you updated even though It wasn't on the most recent page but I was desperate lol I'm so happy you updated. Can I just say YYYYAAAAAAAAASSSSSS Aliyah I'm glad Michael spilled the beans ! And trey pressed charges? Mike can say bye bye to his tour. There's about to be so much DRAMA and you don't even know how ready I am for it, I'm just gonna beg you to update again tomorrow PLEASEEE
Author's Response:
I promise I will not torture you anymore with these long update im telling you it didnt feel right not updating but I wont let you down girl you will have your update tomorrow , lol omg thats how I feel when you dont update . Girl aint it? I have prewritten chapter girrrlllla let me tell ya.... Im not going to tell ya stay tuned -muah-
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2014 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 21
Whoo, chile. Shit just got really real just now. Michael brought up the situation that happened between him and Erica. She just....ugh!!! Bitch you can't talk about a nigga not being good for nobody when your ass ain't no good for friendship. And I didn't even know you updated a chapter. Lol.
Oh, I almost forgot, I followed you back on IG and you're GORG too sweetie. :)
Author's Response:
Exactly its like the pot calling the kettle black like little shawty cool it now lol she just cant stand Michael for his lying and cheating ways but she did have a crush on him back in the day when they all was growing up. Should I do a random flashback? I might bless yall with some random flashbacks when the story ends. BTW Chris is her cousin.
Thank you so much pretty girl , I was like yesss she is beautiful
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2014 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 20
short but i still loved it , Michael went in on trey goofy ass yesss i love it 👌👏👏
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2014 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 20
Congrats to you on 1000+ reads 😌 and congrats to Michael for fucking up his career 😒😒😒 lmao I'm mad at him. I understand his anger but DANG he went into the practice tho?! I just know Aliyah is going to go off. She needs to slap him for me then again idk that's kinda cute in a fucked up way because he went that far to defend her 😂😂😂😂😂 you know what don't mind me it's late here 😂😂 great chapter boo, hurry up with the next one and the next one and the next one, call me addicted I don't care 😂
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2014 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 20
Shit just got real and now Mike and Chris are locked up *Akon voice* lol. He fucked Trey face up tho. Even tho it was short, I still loved it. I loves me some gansta Mike.
Date: Jun 26, 2014 10:46 am Title: Chapter 19
They are soooo cute, I love them but let me tell you, if I was Aliyah I be done hopped my behind right on that plane with him, if not to all the concerts at least one. LOL but if she's not, this story takes place in modern times, they best Skype, FaceTime or SOMETHING if you know what I mean 😂😂😂😂😂😂. Kamille....I....you already know how I feel about her. I don't think he should completely not have anything to do with the baby because it's not the baby's fault, but honestly it needs to be strictly business when it comes to him and Kamille. I'm not gon lie I almost felt bad for her when she was telling him it was his because she didn't mess with nobody else then I came back to my senses quick! Fuck her, she knew her role when she home wrecked in the first place! Michael needs to tell Aliyah and quick because the longer he waits the more problems it'll cause. *waits impatiently for the next chapter*
Author's Response:
Susie you would have a Private investigator on Michael ass 😂😂 i can tell every second you would be calling making sure his ass aint cheating. TBH i was actually feeling bad typing the chapter pike damn Michael treats Kamille like shit but then i remembered the hell Kamille put him through in highschool so i was like fuck that bitch we ont love em 😂😂 aayyye yo your reviews girl i swear they keep me going i be looking for em every chapter , thank you girl i will have that chapter out asap and where is your updats gosh im looking for em with a flashlight 👀👀 -muah-
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2014 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 19
Michael is doing the right thing to be a father but he needs to make sure it's his. Because Kamille probably have niggas in the closet.
HE UP IN THE CLOSET.
Michael is about to go hamm on Trey and I can't wait. I got my popcorn, blanket, and my body is ready. But, when Michael goes on tour. Mhm, I have a feeling Trey gonna be creeping on Liyah.
It would be too funny if the baby ended up being Trey's. I WOULD BE WEAKER THAN A MOTHERFUCKER. I still don't like Kamille baldheaded, calliou, breath smelling like asscrack, barney ass self. I hope she falls and can't get up and her life alert don't work.
Amazing as always, continue!
Author's Response:
Jesus take the wheel these gifss had me KO girrrlll 😩😩😂😂😂😂😭💀💀 please dont kill me this review gave me soo much lifee , stay tuned hunnty stay tuunneed. I would be suprised where the hell Kamille thotiful ass when spreading her legs at 😂😂. Thank you love thank you
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2014 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 19
I'm glad Mike is stepping up and being a real man for once in a lifetime......even if the baby may not be his. Like I said, they need to go take a DNA test to make sure tho. And Mike is ready to kick some Trey ass for kissing his woman. Aliyah was right to tell him cause he needed to know but he also needs to know about her abortion just like Liyah needs to know about this thot's pregnancy. Great chapter girl.
Author's Response:
Breeeee 😩😩😂😂😂😭😭 you really hate Kamille lol i think i like her hardcore character she is hard eventhough she is a bitch but yeah i like her attitude i know call me crazy but Aliyah is soft when it comes down to Michael Kamille lets him know straight up but then again kamille is a hoe we dont love these hoes 😂😂😩 thanks love 😘😘 stay tuned hehe