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Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2014 10:51 am Title: Chapter 26

..... Soon as Kamille gives birth to her Snow White, Michael gone come crawling back, if he doesn't sooner. He's the one being selfish. Aliyah just lost their baby. He needs to be there for her instead of some whore with a baby who probably belongs to someone else. Some man he is. Please continue soon!!!

Author's Response:

lmbo you are so determined that this baby is going to have blonde hair and blue eyes lol omgggg you are a trip , Michael is loosing it stay tuned love -mauh-

Reviewer: MJacksoners Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2014 09:54 am Title: Chapter 1 , 2 , 3 &4

damm, this story... michael is the biggest asshole of all time!! i cnt even imagine him being a cheater! thats too bad... but the last scene...part 4 is really good!! but i hate the asshole michael..

 i dnt like him that way... 😒😒girl... this is ur story, i shouldnt even complaining.. im sorry! and btw.. you're a very great writer

 

 i love the way your writing styles... keep going

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2014 09:52 am Title: Chapter 26

 Aww, she had a miscarriage. And I knew the truth would come out but not like that tho. But damn Mike, you're erasing her out of your life for good. Noooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So now you gone go back to Kamille now. He better not. His light skin ass better go back and get his woman before someone else does. He know he loves liyah with all his heart. He's just got bad news and reacted towards it in a way he felt was right, I guess. But please don't let it be the end of them. They need to sit down and talk. But Mike really don't have no right to go off anyway, cause his ass got Kamille preggos and STILL didn't tell Liyah about it. So it's like a what and what thing going on. I swear, this is some B.A.N.S. fr fr.


But fantastic chapter, Bri :) 



Author's Response:

lmao Breeeee!!!! giiirrrrllll stuff is about to hit the fan real soon stay tuned -muah-

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2014 08:58 am Title: Chapter 26

Aww man a miscarriage :,(



Author's Response:

i know :((

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2014 08:49 am Title: Chapter 26

Damn I didn't think he would leave her once he found out Nooooooooo that's not suppose to happen I don't want them to break up and I swear if he runs back to Kamill ass I will come after him with a bat I really hope he just acting on his feeling right now and just need time to calm down from it.

Author's Response:

I dont even know what I would have done in this situation leave and cool off for a minute or pretend that Im not mad and be with her I really dont know this was a tough one thank you sooo much stay tuned -muah-

Reviewer: smoothcriminal22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2014 07:35 am Title: Chapter 25

omg what is wrong with Aliyah?!!! i hope she dont have cancer or something i would just die with her , Michael didnt have to fire Teddy i dont think he had anything to do with it i think he prolly still mad because he found out about Teddy being his dad the way he did. & Leandra was doing he job buuuuut she crazy.

Reviewer: iloveyoumj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2014 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 25

oh and this banner been giving me so much life its my homescreen lol 😍😘 update soon



Author's Response:

lol thank you sooo much love

Reviewer: iloveyoumj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2014 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 25

Fuck Leandraaaaa like flatout she reminds me sooo much of Wendy Williams lol they be shutting her down on her own show smh anyways i love the interaction with liyah and michael finally he acting right they finally semidrama free. what is wrong with my baby though coughing up blood? thats never good but michael taking care of her that is so beautiful he need to get his act right anyways. Kamille weakass i dont like her idc idc and why Teddy had to get fired he aint even do shit 😒😒😩 i love this story i gave you a shoutout too 

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2014 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 25

Awwww man



Author's Response:

giiiirrrrllll lol

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2014 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 25

Whoo, girl, Mike is PISSED! And he is so loving and caring towards Liyah. But still, he is PISSED. That's all can say for right now. Lol. 

Reviewer: neece Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2014 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 25

I love this story!!!!! Please continue.



Author's Response:

I will continue thank you soooo much love

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2014 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 25

I'M really worried about Aliyah why issue coughing up blood?

Author's Response:

giiiirrrrllll lol stay tuned



Author's Response:

giiiirrrrllll lol stay tuned

Reviewer: Susie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2014 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 1 , 2 , 3 &4

Lmao Michael pulled the August Alsina move "didn't I tell y'all not to ask me that shit" 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 im  crying! I don't blame him tho, she remind me of Wendy Williams 😂 but it was so cute how Michael said he loved her and she said "I love you" back to the TV 😍 little stuff like that is the cutest thing to me! Good chapter once again girly



Author's Response:

girl when I was doing this part I was watching Wendy Williams show lol she is so nosey lol , exactly I love that stuff in real life I think its adorable

Reviewer: smoothcriminal22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2014 06:21 am Title: Chapter 24

Teeeddddyyyyy woooowwwwww why is everyone lying im just huuuu i love this story 😍 and th banner looks amazing

Reviewer: smoothcriminal22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2014 06:19 am Title: Chapter 23

Aliyah what are you doing girrrlll? matter a fact you might as well have Trey on the side cause Michael over there with Kamille he crazzyyy smh i hope its not his baby they need to go on Maury

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