Reviewer: motownmjdevotee Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2011 11:41 am Title: Chapter 29

I loved this update Dawn gurl.  I'm so glad you're not trying to kill off my baby no more.  *smiles*  At least not until after 29 August.  Whew!  Thank you sis. You had me worried.  

Reviewer: martovska Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2011 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 28

Beautifully written BrakeOfDawn!!! There is always a hope in my heart that whatever you writing about have really happened on that day. Especially that there was so much uncertainty, and unanswered questions. Like, his sister spoke about him in a present time, autopsy results, different middle name on the death certificate, and funeral arrangements, etc., Also I remember watching a public memorial service for Michael, and his friend Macaulay Culkin was attending with his girlfriend. I must say he definitely didn’t look sad, it was quite the opposite, he was talking and smiling to his girlfriend. And the moment Macaulay spotted the camera being directed his way, he stopped!!!!!

Once again, if his death was really faked, it must have been very hard for him. And I wish there was someone special like Valery to support him all the way through!!! His fans would never hate him!!!! Not a chance!!! All of his fans get happy and excited to hear the songs that were unreleased, and always hope for more!!!! Michael was, is, and always will be a legend!!!! He always emitted LOVE!!!!! And there most likely will not be another artist reaching his heights!!!!

I just hope that he is still with us, walking under the same sun, breathing the same air, and lives a peaceful life with someone special!!!!

Once again, thank you for your beautiful story girl!!! You know, just a thought flashed through my mind, maybe you are that Valery girl, that knows so much about Michael LOL…..Just kidding :)

P.S. Valery should take a really good care of him!!!!! Always waiting for more!!! Oksana :) <3

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2011 03:06 am Title: Chapter 28

Wow.. so he planned and executed his "death".. I surely hope he won't regret it. But I'm hoping even more he, Val, and the kids have a good life in Brazil. He totally deserves that and so much more. 

Reviewer: joy2thaworld Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2011 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 28

This is madness.......and  brilliant! Color me shocked...bod you are amazing. I never expected this a fake death? wow I know Michael is going through it. Yeah he's finally going to live the life he always wanted but he is giving up so much. I know his fans pain is tearing him apart. aww so aparently Michael left money for Val in case he died. I love that man. <3

Imma miss you BOD especially after you dropped this bomb on us.

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2011 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 27

that was sweet n cute

Reviewer: martovska Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2011 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 26

God girl, you driving everyone absolutely insane with your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The love scenes are emotional, full of love, and absolutely HOT!!!!! I’m not tired to tell how good of a writer you are!!! Amazing work!!!!!! :) <3

 

Reviewer: joy2thaworld Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2011 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 27

*cries* Michael really desevered this. He earned it. He desevered to be happy. This is so bittersweet. I want a confrontation with Mike and Grace don't go to soft on me girl.

Author's Response:

yeah... mike deserved it... so true. i wish and i hope he was... 

thank you for your comments! you know i really much appreciate each and every one of them!

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