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Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2014 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 60

Holy shit it was all just a dream!!!!! I was so mad, I had to take a break.....I know it's only a story, but I was in my feelings! I actually took a break from the whole site because it seemed like every story on here had a cheating Michael recently. But I"m back now and catching up! Will post reviews as I finish reading the rest. 

I can't believe Danielle what a slutbag! I hope Michael fires her for good........or she'll probably rape him. 



Author's Response:

Really there is?  Oh I didn't notice that (not that I read every story here)  im glad you still reading 

Reviewer: Ladyloca007 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2014 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

No problem :) and I'm always here to help and support :)



Author's Response:

:) that means a lot to me thank you 

Reviewer: Ladyloca007 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2014 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yea I could understand since it's your first story... I'm fine with that..and I do love how there is a lot going on like humor, serious, sex and conflict plays, so it keeps me on my toes most times and unpredictable lol.



Author's Response:

Aww thank you and I try to keep it interesting and seriously taking it day by day because the idea it started with was just a simple short story between two best friends but see where it is now? A complicated story with lots a things going on but I do enjoy writing it and really appreciate your loyalty 

Reviewer: Ladyloca007 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2014 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 74

FINALLY!!!!! Lol it was cool...Especially how Mike was trying to keep up with the lingo hilarious lol. But it did seem like you were holding back a lil on the threesome part...It wasn't bad trust me...just expected a lil more action that's all... There's nothing wrong with getting nitty gritty hardcore sex in it...( only if your 18 or older.. Not really sure lol) lol I'm rambling... But yea great job girl!!! :)



Author's Response:

Im older than 18 but it's damn hard to write those scenes and first time ever writing a scene like  that so yeah I try lol maybe if there is a next time (maybe in a future story always have ideas lol its even better) 

Like always I try to put a little humor in there glad you liked it 

Reviewer: Ladyloca007 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2014 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yaaay ... But I didn't mean to!! Lol



Author's Response:

No problem I love a challenge lol 

Still writing by the way posting probably in the next half hour to hour or so so (see writing takes time)

Stay tuned lol 

Reviewer: Ladyloca007 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2014 10:58 am Title: Chapter 1

Lol what about Nina?



Author's Response:

Haven't you given me enough 'homework' yet lol but writing as we speak 

(And I thought those last two weeks of my break would be homework free lol) 

Reviewer: Ladyloca007 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2014 08:30 am Title: Chapter 73

Ohhhh snap!!!!!.... What will Mike reaction will be???? Will Nina be accepting of this?? Stay tuned n find out -_- lol



Author's Response:

Lol you answered your own question lol 

Reviewer: Ladyloca007 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2014 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 72

Hell with all three women being pregnant everyone should be celebrating.. Even Jane and her guy lol.. But Nina is totally teasing Mike and loving every single bit of it lol.



Author's Response:

Lol 

Reviewer: Ladyloca007 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2014 10:33 am Title: Chapter 1

Awww well take your time with the ideas... I can definitely wait.. Not going anywhere no time soon :) and I'm glad you kept going.. Bcause your a good writer.



Author's Response:

Awww thank you so much :) 

Reviewer: Ladyloca007 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2014 10:03 am Title: Chapter 71

Lol I know  I can't help it though lol.. But I'd say atleast you have readers your doing something right. And you have me who would review as much as I can :)



Author's Response:

I know and trying to put your idea in the story somehow but just need to work towards it and find a way to get there 

And really appreciate your loyalty without your reviews I would have quit long time ago 

Reviewer: Ladyloca007 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2014 06:03 am Title: Chapter 70

Wow... Man Mike couldn't take his eyes off of Nina's " girls" for nothing lol... But since they"re not into men... Who know they could bring Des or Kathy to have playtime one day lol... What is wrong with me??? Lol



Author's Response:

Lol you're too much Iol I probably loose more ppl since I lost them since the  dream thing if I put something like that into the story but lol you're great with your ideas lol 

Reviewer: Ladyloca007 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2014 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 69

Lol Awww really??? Im glad it made your day:) ... Seems like there's a possible number 2 for Mike and Des???? Lol



Author's Response:

Yup really :)  hmm who knows? Lol 

Reviewer: Ladyloca007 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2014 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 68

Lol my mind is soo in the gutter with these comments.. I wonder will there be a possible threesome with the new PA? I can't help myself lol



Author's Response:

Lol you're too much lol

Because she's not so much into men? Lol you made my day with your review 

Reviewer: Ladyloca007 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2014 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

Lol knew they were gonna get it on sooner or later lol



Author's Response:

Ikr? Lol 

Reviewer: Girliknowthatthisislove Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2014 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 65

Wow! Just Wow! Chocolate sauce on your body, and Michael has to lick it- MIKEGASM! damn, this chapter was sexy, just like the last one! Keep up the excellent work!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you :) 

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