Date: Nov 11, 2014 01:51 pm Title: Chapter II: Michael
Love at first sight...I love when writers describe Michael and his looks in the story. It just makes him even more dreamy. And Yaaaaasss they like each other and it's so cute. Michael is such a gentleman, I love it!
Author's Response:
Lol I do too! Michael's looks are so angel-like and beautiful that you can just imagine him as if her were standing right in front of you! Glad you like, I will try and update soon!
Date: Nov 02, 2014 05:06 pm Title: Chapter II: Michael
Yes.... I'm enjoying it so far.
Good Grammer, developing nicely . Pleasant to read.
Those nosy kids! I'm wondering if they are going to "help" or "interfere" with Michaels and Alisa ' s relationship?
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Lol the kids are just nosy, don't worry, they won't interfere with their relationship, only watch as it gets better ;)