Date: May 01, 2015 10:50 am Title: Going Back To Cali...
uh oh ....
Author's Response:
Uh oh indeed. Joe stepped into it for sure. Lol. <333
Date: May 01, 2015 10:23 am Title: The Slush Hits The Fan...The Mess Is Made...
oh man no - Michael did not!!!!
Date: May 01, 2015 09:40 am Title: Well...Welll...Well...
hahahah there i was thinking damn she is going to ruin it between Michael and Pen.
Author's Response:
Just you wait. She's a grease ball!! :((( but Pen owned up to the kiss right away so she would have failed. <333
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2015 04:21 pm Title: Someone To Watch Over Me...
It's a girl!!! FUCK YEAH!!! Lord Michael... To see and hear him say that lol #instantdead
Aww I'm glad he's gettin' his little girl.
These two sex addicts crack me up! "One glance and he had me laid out..." I LOVE them!!!
Cali onstage though >.<!!!
I'm not ready for the last chapter!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Lmaooooo I would love to witness him just blurting that out too. Too funny! Yup he's getting his little girl after all. The two of them are ridiculous with there sexing. Lol. Cali was hilarious. I had the whole scene pictures out in my mind. Lmaoooo. It's coming, the end and I'm putting a lot I to it. Stay tuned bb!! <333
Date: Apr 29, 2015 05:49 am Title: Enlighten Me...
story is perfect. Damn at Michael disappearing like that.
Author's Response:
He hauled tail smh poor Pen had no idea what would happen! <333
Date: Apr 29, 2015 05:44 am Title: Farwell To His Arms...
ahhhhhhh noooooooo Michael nooooo
Date: Apr 29, 2015 05:36 am Title: The Miami Heat...
yup i remember :D
Date: Apr 29, 2015 05:30 am Title: Ex-hail...
ooooh Nye.....the sly.
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2015 03:36 pm Title: Indulgence...
brilliant writing.....makes my efforts look childish haha.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! I put a lot of thought into my stories. I'm sure you're brilliant at what you write. We are always our own worst critics. <333
Date: Apr 28, 2015 03:05 pm Title: Rude Bwoy
proper laughed out loud reading this
Author's Response:
You'll laugh cry and gasp in this story guaranteed lol! <333
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2015 03:02 pm Title: And So We Meet...
loving this.....
Author's Response:
Hey! Welcome to the story!! Thank you for giving it a chance!! <333
Date: Apr 28, 2015 11:59 am Title: Someone To Watch Over Me...
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh it's a GURLLLLLL!!!!!!! Lol **wipes tears** omgggg one more chapter **balling my eyes out** 20 minutes later....... Lol but yeah and omgggg cali had me weakkkkkk and Michael fr BENNNN dats my song doe
Anyway Good Update 😂👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Author's Response:
Yup!!!! It's a girl. A little princess for them both to love. And Michael with his corny self turning Ben into Pen. It's sweet tho. Lol. One more chapter to go!! Stay with me!! <333
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2015 10:59 am Title: Someone To Watch Over Me...
Okay, first of all I gotta say this!
He said Eldorado. Don't be reminding me of the old days right now. I love you with all my beating heart, and this is why it's taken me like two days to read. I knew I would get emotional, because you do that to me. That's why I knew better. I had to mentally prepare for this! And I know I"m gonna have to do the same for the last chapter. Ugh, I'm gonna start doing that now. Taking my deep breaths and getting a good snack for that one.
Someone to Watch Over Me *cries in church stomp* That song is perfect for so many reasons. I used to sing that way too much as a kid. What two year old needs someone to watch over them? I was still wearing Barney products. Goodness me. Let me stop rambling.
Beautiful update as always. I can wait for the next update. I can't say I can't cuz I know how I'm gonna be and ugh. I can wait! It's weird and hard saying goodbye. You know how I feel about your writing and how much of an inspiration you are to me. I love this story so much and I know I'll visit it again and again. Thank you so much for this story, Tut.
Author's Response:
You are the wind beneath my wiiiinnnnnngggsssss!!! I appreciate it everytime you call me a mentor. You most def inspire me to write better. It's all most the end for these two but never say never you might just see them again!! You know Michael had to throw just one more Eldarado into the mix. Love Ya to bits!!!<333
Date: Apr 28, 2015 08:22 am Title: Someone To Watch Over Me...
Sweet updates as always my girl!
Author's Response:
Thanks love!!! <333