[Report This]Date: Aug 24, 2015 06:46 am Title: Chapter 18
HAZEL sure was determined to get some on her birthday. Lol.
Author's Response:
Lol ikr?! She was mad determined ;)
Date: Aug 24, 2015 03:04 am Title: Chapter 18
Well it's about goddamn time.
Lol, sorry hahahahahahaah, but no that was great!! It was sooo cute!! Man, I need a romance like that!! So so cute <3
Author's Response:
Lol your reaction just made my day!!!! I wanted to write a lil cute intimate moment between Michael and Hazel finally :)
Date: Aug 22, 2015 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 17
He gets panic attacks?? He needs to realize he was being a dick to her and stop this passive aggressive crap. If you want something/someone you fight for it. The whole itll happen if its meant to be is just bullshit. Thats horrible what he said to Tatiana i know he didnt mean it after all he wrote im so blue about her cheating on him. Good for Hazel for getting out and partying with her sister and Kendrick. K if Michael wants Hazel to listen to him he has to get her to not wait around for the opportunity to present itself. I dont think him knowing details like what her fav foods are or that she has always wanted to go back to a beach isnt stalkerish what would be stalkerish is if he knew what time of the month her period was judging by the tampobs in her trash that hed been going through. That would be just downright creepy. Saw a movie where that happened, called Kiss the Girls. It was an actual stalker and kidnapper who did that to his potential victims. shes standing up for herself! Shes right on all points hes not used to having to communicate meaning not just get what he wants when he wants it. And making compromises too. Love that Ken doll is so understanding like a normal person should be. Haha I am right good 2 kno u agree XD The king of pop needs to get his head out of his ass and get a reality check if he wants this relationship to work. Awwww all Haze cute nickname btw was thinking of was MJ's lips when she was making out with Ken doll not sorry i call him hes actually a decent dude who deserves a better nickname but whatevs
Author's Response:
Lol I actually do remember reading somewhere that Michael would suffer from panic attacks :/ I just thought I would add that to his character in this story because of how he doesn't really like being in the spotlight (other than on stage) and it sorta freaks him out to see how much people love and are crazy about him. He doesn't seem to understand why lol I actually wanna see that movie u mentioned! It sounds interesting. I don't mind u callin him Ken doll btw rofl. It's super sweet how Kendrick is so understanding and cool about the whole situation. I think he always had a feeling that Hazel was into someone else but it's a good thing he wasn't mad about her leading him on like that. That's just wrong of her to think of Michael's lips while she was kissing Kendrick smh plus she accidentally called him 'michael' too? Oh boy lol anyway, Kendrick's gonna become a really good friend to her :) as for Michael and Tatiana, yeah what he said to her was a little harsh and somewhat true but I think it's just cuz he now realized that Hazel is the girl he truly wants to be with but he's gonna have to win her back and like you said, get his head outta his ass and a HUGE reality check :)
Date: Aug 22, 2015 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 17
Oh man, kinda feel bad how MJ started crying. When men cry, like honestly, it's just the worst. So, she'd better give him one hell of a kiss once she sees him. Great chapter man!! :D
Author's Response:
Aw thanks!!! Ikr?! It's a rare thing to see men cry but when Michael does it just breaks ur heart :( He's got some SERIOUS feelings that can't seem to go away about Hazel.....I'm gonna have a whole lotta fun writing the next chap.....ish is GOIN DOWN lol
Date: Aug 20, 2015 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 3
Dang, I'm mad he straight threw up on her though lol but she did tell his ass off YASSSSS! But maybe now Michael is gonna start having more respect for her...great chapter love!
Author's Response:
Aw thanks sooooo much!!! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! :D Hazel did tell his ads off!!! And the whole throwing up on her was just straight up wrong as hell lol
Date: Aug 20, 2015 01:07 am Title: Chapter 16
I love that he knows her favorite foods. Thats just freaking adorable. They shouldve talked about the necklace. I mean they just went on 1 date, its a little too soon for that. He shouldve taken it slow but i get it, he is probably really happy for the first time, in a long time and wants to shower her with gifts. The necklace isnt for Tati he's just lashing out. Love that hes writing songs about her he should talk to her instead of shutting her out and assuming the worst i assume something awful happened with his previous relationships before Tatiana? Then he goes off and acts like a dick again. I dont blame her for quitting. Kendricks good for her not as a love interest still waiting for his MAJESTY to get his head out of his ass, but as a friend. He just calls up and assumes shes at his beck and call. And he can treat her how he wants cuz hes michael jackson like no dude get a reality check and apply ice to that burn XD im so bad 😎 lovve that her sis came into town to see her she could use a good support system. And really stupid bird? Thats the best hes got. Btw for some reason im thinking hazel looks like olivia pope from scandal but younger. Idk why. Hope she has fun at the club she needs it! And mike needs to man up and get her back and give her the credit to man in the mirror
Author's Response:
Hey! Yeah, I don't wanna make Michael seem you know, a lil stalkerish lol because he notices all the little details about Hazel and what she likes/doesn't like. He definitely is paying attention to her even if he doesn't want to admit it. They really should've talked about the necklace but as soon as Michael found out she didn't want it, he immediately went back to being an ass to Her cuz he didn't get his way. You'll definitely find out in the next couple chaps why Michael acts so harsh towards women. He's had some pretty rough relationships in the past, especially with Tatiana. Lol I LOVE what you said about Kendrick and his MAJESTY DOES NEED TO GET HIS HEAD WAAAAAY OUT FROM HIS ASS ASAP rofl I Think its adorable that Aiko came to surprise her on her bday too!Hazel hadn't seen her in 4 years and really could use her support. To be honest, I never really had in my mind exactly what Hazel was gonna look like (I always imagined she either looked like Aaliyah or Taytiana Ali) but I loove the Olivia Pope look too! That's really good. Let's just say Hazel will have......an 'interesting' time at club midnight lol And Michael really needs to give her credit for co writing the song.
[Report This]Date: Aug 19, 2015 04:36 am Title: Chapter 16
Michael is not helping his case. And no way was that necklace for Tatiana.
Michael owes Hazel a huge apology for his dick behavior. And credit for cowriting man in the mirror. If I were Hazel, I would not consider going back to work for him without those two things.
And if he wants to date Hazel he'd better start being nicer to her. And a!so tie up and lose ends where Tatiana is concerned. Have they broke up yet or not?
His behavior is unacceptable. She has done nothing but be nice to him.
Author's Response:
I agree 100%! I don't think he got the necklace for Tatiana either (he might've said that out if anger.....I hope lol) Yeah, he still has yet to give her credit for her part in 'Man In The Mirror' and really needs to asap! He definitely needs to settle things between him and Tatiana before even THINKING about trying to get with Hazel. Because apparently, in Tatiana's eyes......they're still together.....the next chap is gonna be crazy lol a whole lotta stuff is gonna go down at club midnight ;)
Date: Aug 19, 2015 03:21 am Title: Chapter 16
Oh my. What a dick. I'm sorry but like, no, I hate it when guys just start putting all their shit on a girl, it's not fair at all. Oh man, so much drama now, don't know if I could take the intensity lol
Author's Response:
I know! It's a shame that there are some guys who actually do that to girls smh. Yep the I intensity between him and Hazel is REAL AS HELL NOW lol he's being absolutely disrespectful to her and to think he claimed he was fine :(
Date: Aug 11, 2015 05:52 am Title: Chapter 15
OMG NO. IT WAS GOING SO WELL. THEN SHE BLEW IT OH FFS. Sorry, I just. We girls are so confusing.
Author's Response:
I knooooow :( There's actually a reason why hazel suddenly changed her mind though....you'll def find out in the next chap! Btw I absolutely agree with you, girls can be EXTREMELY confusing at times lol
Date: Aug 11, 2015 12:05 am Title: Chapter 15
Ugh why are they picking on Hazel? From experience unless you're in a small school environment then that won't happen in college. The stupid high school mean girl shit. First off she should be proud of herself she wrote Man in the Mirror one of the most famous best selling singles ever AND the sexiest man in the world is wrapped around her finger. Remind me again why she's letting those losers get to her? Yea eyeliner is a bitch to figure out once you get the hang of it its pretty easy. Contouring on the other hand just no. I love that hes so nervous and giddy for their date its adorable:) I bet he would get embarassed listening to himself on the radio dont see why hes amazeballs. And aww their song came on😍 i so bet he drives around & listens to his own music i just know it. He fangirls over her calling him baby in her sleep how cute is he. Love the beach surprise he really does pay attention to her. Love that he still builds sandcastles. Its cool he goes shirtless in front of her not that shed judge him for having vitiligo or anything. I think she didnt take the locket because she thinks he wants something in return or just expect more. Or maybe its just a really nice gift and she should try to go with the flow either way they have to decide what they are to each other. Seems like theyre rushing i mean this is a first date so. And hes only recently admitted he likes her. Hasnt explained the previous dick behavior. I hope hes not immature enough to lash out at her for not accepting it and for her wanting to take this slow
Author's Response:
I agree! Hazel shouldn't let those bullies get to her! She just has some really poor self esteem :( And I also agree with what you said about why she didn't take the locket from him
[Report This]Date: Aug 10, 2015 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 15
She should just tell him that she has reservations because he's been so mean to her in the past.
Author's Response:
Agree 100% :)
Date: Aug 09, 2015 10:20 am Title: Chapter 14
Glad his nephew is ok! Haha love that he thinks Hazel has a soothing a voice XD wtf is with him not giving Hazel the credit for writing man in the mirror? I get hsving a bad day and all. Bit of a dick move there bro. He needs to charge Joseph with assault. Never liked that fucking asshole. Michael should go to the police have that fucker put away. He has physical evidence now that he was assaulted. Just saying. Love how awkward and cute he is when trying to ask Hazel out on a date. He's surprised when she agrees as if he doesn't know how sexy he is. I take it him and Tatiana broke up? Cant wait to hear how it goes!
Author's Response:
Hey girl! I've missed ya :) Yeah, it's official! Michael FINALLY stirred up the courage to ask Hazel out for a date. It was a major dick move for him not to give her credit on 'Man In The Mirror' I agree!!! He definitely should charge Joseph with assault but he's too afraid too :( Joseph is the ONLY one who's able to bring out the vulnerability in Michael that he tries hard not to show in public. Even though it hasn't been announced, Michael is definitely DONE with Tatiana's thirsty ass but she's not......it's about to get pretty juicy real soon lol Hopefully their date will go well in the next chapter!!
Date: Aug 08, 2015 02:53 am Title: Chapter 14
Yaaaaaaaay!!!! Dear god that took forever to happen, but he did it, thank goodness :D :D
Author's Response:
Aww ikr?! Hopefully their date goes well!!! It's a shame it took him so long to finally ask her out lol
Date: Aug 05, 2015 03:10 am Title: Chapter 13
Oh my gosh!!!!!! Wait who's Taj....never mind, I'll know soon enough, but oh my god!!! He just collapsed!!! Like. wooow. Poor Michael, like, wow.
Date: Jul 16, 2015 11:08 am Title: You're A Jerk, I know.....
What a dick move. Cant say i wasnt expecting that. Shes not used to rich dudes in that industry who can afford to screw with women etc, are total playboys. Shes really sensitive but she should know that most of his life was in front of a camera and hes used to putting on an act. Hes so immature god. He just knows how he affects women. Loved their creative process together, loved that you chose man in the mirror, i think you captured perfectly how he came up with the song and what its message is. Loving this thanks for updating!
Author's Response:
Amen! I agree 100% pretty soon Hazel is gonna be able to break through the invisible wall Michael has put up all these years......she's gonna have him sprung honey ;) lol