Date: Apr 03, 2015 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 14: Coming To Terms With It All
For Pete's sake, PLEASE let this talk between MJ and Lisa Marie be productive. And I'm in awe of Dennis and David; their storyline is very intriguing. Please update soon!
Author's Response:
We'll all find out very soon! :)
I'm glad you like Dennis and David. I hope you can't see my struggle with creating them, haha.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: Apr 02, 2015 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 13: Knocked Over By Reality
Barbara is a BOSS! I hope she eventually sticks it to Jill. But enough of that... WHAT IS IN THAT DAMN FILE?!?!?
Author's Response:
HAHA, YOU'RE HILARIOUS!
You'll find out soon!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! :D
Date: Apr 02, 2015 07:24 am Title: Chapter 13: Knocked Over By Reality
Sandra was so wrong for lying to Lisa like that..she could have just said Michael was busy. I hope when Michael does agree to talk to Lisa the two of them could do it in a civil manner for once and not at each other's throats. and can't wait to see if Aurora's singing ability will go anywhere. maybe she could get a record deal or something.
Author's Response:
We'll see what happens!!
Stay tuned for more! :D
Date: Apr 01, 2015 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 13: Knocked Over By Reality
They r so cuteeeeeee lol
And lawdyyyyy yyyyyyyyyyyy yyyyyyyyyyyy y it got to be so much drama y yyyyyyyyyyyy do u always do it that way I be feeling some type of wayyy ohhhhhhhhhhhhh ohhhhyyyyy loll my remix of human nature lol
And lisa still want to be married to him girl TO THE LEFT TO THE LEFT oohh lolll okay I'm done
Good Update 😂👏👏👏👏
Author's Response:
I love your positive energy. Your comments always seem to make my day.
Thank you for reading and reviewing! :D
[Report This]Date: Apr 01, 2015 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 13: Knocked Over By Reality
Oh. I'm so hooked on this story.
Author's Response:
Are you really? :O
Thank you so much. I'm glad you are enjoying it. <3
Date: Mar 31, 2015 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 12: Discovering A Hidden Talent
Girlll they done got on my nerves **sipping on sum orange juice** lol
And A&M are so cuteeeeeee And lawdy all this drama
Lol Good Update 😂👏👏👏
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
Date: Mar 31, 2015 03:56 am Title: Chapter 12: Discovering A Hidden Talent
Sooooo much going on with this one. The drama is simply de-licious!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)
Date: Mar 31, 2015 02:57 am Title: Chapter 8: From the Theatre to the Cookie
“Soon, Michael.” Tom snared into the phone. “Very soon.” “You need help, Tom.” “No, ...."
^ I'm surprised they would be on first name terms, but somehow, in this story, it works. Am I the only one who found the above exchange hilarious? I could totally picture Michael saying that to someone who is so obsessed with him. It's almost like he (Michael) pities him (Sneddon). It stood out for me. Just great!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. I'm glad you see the realness of them using their first names and how profound it is.
I appreciate you taking the time to read my work. I hope you continue to enjoy it as it unfolds! :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2015 02:55 am Title: Chapter 2: The Girl Was Persuasive
Mr. Concur. I love Michael's mischievous side. :D
Author's Response:
HAHA ME TOO! :)
Date: Mar 31, 2015 12:48 am Title: Chapter 10: Being Tenacious on the Train
Once again, I beg you: please use more pronouns and less descriptive long words for people. Reading is getting hampered with these long descriptive words.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your feedback.
Date: Mar 31, 2015 12:12 am Title: Chapter 9: Irritated by Interruptions
Small advice: instead of looking for so many descriptive words, you should simply use "he" and "she". That would also help make the sentences shorter and easier to read :)
Author's Response:
Some readers tell me I am too descriptive while others say I am not descriptive enough. I don't win with this concept but I am doing my best to find a good balance between the two in order to make my readers happy.
I appreciate your feedback though. Thank you for reading my work.
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2015 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 1: Across The Board
I'm looking forward too your friend request.
Honestly I'm just happy I finally got a job. I've been unemployed since October. I've had 19 interviews before I got this job. I'm working the next six days straight. I haven't had a day off since Monday. They keep calling me in to cover other's shift. But, on the plus side I work with my best friend even though we only worked like an hour together. When I was still training.
Congratulations on your job. I say what's the point in working if it doesn't make you happy.
Girl, of course I read your Michael and Diana saga. Struck by a dream was the first story I ever read from you. You should continue Michael and Diana's love in different scenarios.
I've been slacking with my own stories. I haven't had time and I'm stuck. Writer's block can be such a female dog. I haven't felt motivated to write. It's such a downer to write on my phone.
Both of my laptops broke on me. Neither one of those times were because of me. And when I was putting the finally touches on my movie. Yeah, I'm a film maker. No laptop sucks for me. Hopefully I can afford one soon.
But, I'll be waiting for more amazing stories from you and more chapters for this. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat. Checking every day for an update from you.
Author's Response:
I totally get where you're coming from. I know how exhausting it is to have a job that drains all of your energy. But hey, if it's something you enjoy, then it's all worth it, right?
I'm sorry to hear about your laptops! If I could, I'd send you a new one myself. :)
Thank you for being such a loyal reader. You have NO IDEA how much i appreciate it.
I didn't know you were a film maker! Are you able to create trailers? I've been looking for someone to make one for me.
I'll be posting another chapter in a few minutes. I hope you like it!
Can't wait to hear from you again! Feel free to send me an email if you like: amyross788@yahoo.ca :)
Date: Mar 30, 2015 07:32 am Title: Chapter 11: Unknown Secrets & Confessed Feelings
Ooooo, I KNEW something was up with Jill and Tom! David and Dennis are getting it in-I love it. Last thing: it's about damn time Aurora and Michael confessed their feelings for each other. They both deserve to be happy.
Author's Response:
LOL yeah, it's getting juicy now!
LOL those two are always going at it like wild dogs.
Oh yes, those two had sexual tension for a while, haha. But now it's starting to develop further.
Thank you for reading and reviewing! :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2015 07:08 am Title: Chapter 1: Across The Board
I don't mind at all. My Facebook name is Riah LaLa
If there's more then one. It should say I'm from NY. I should be in a blue shirt. I believe.
My job is but, honestly I'm enjoying myself very much. The staff and customers are truly amazing.
No, thank you for writing amazing stories. You give such vivid details. I love to read and you fulfill my love, need, and hobby to read.
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
- Riah AweSomeNess
Author's Response:
YAAY! I'll add you as soon as I can. :)
I'm glad you're enjoying your new job. I just started a new one myself 2 months ago and it's INCREDIBLE! I don't ever wanna leave.
Oh gosh, detail is something I struggle with IMMENSELY. But THANK YOU for noticing! I really try my best to be slow down and give as much description as possible. I never used to before but now I can see a HUGE difference in overall plot and character development when you take the time to explain things one at a time.
I'm so glad you are enjoying this story. I'm really putting my all into it. I recommend you read my saga as well if you haven't yet. SBD, Flame and Embers. :)
Date: Mar 30, 2015 03:59 am Title: Chapter 11: Unknown Secrets & Confessed Feelings
Look Jill got one more time keep saying freak okay ooohh I'm so close bout to fight her
And Awwwwwww they r so cuteeeeeee
And Awwwwwww lolll
Pamela da fudge don't nobody want Tom he straight up uglayyyyyyyyyyyyy
Anywayyyy Good Update 😂👏👏👏
Author's Response:
LOL you're so awesome!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!