Date: Mar 30, 2015 03:40 am Title: Chapter 11: Unknown Secrets & Confessed Feelings
uh oh..I see some real drama is about to begin..and I think I'm onto Jill's dark secret and it doesn't surprise me in the least..she's such a hypocrite. I think Aurora should leave New York for good and file a restraining order against her mom..that should make her back off.
Author's Response:
YES! This was the turn I was telling you about. My muse wad DEAD then all of a sudden in the middle of writing chapter 8 the idea just came to me.
I was like "YES! THANK YOU MUSE!!!" LOL!
PFFT! Hypocrite? More like skanky, two faced cow LOL!
We'll see what happens when or if Aurora finds out about her mom's dirty little secret.
Thanks for reading and reviewing! :D
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2015 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 1: Across The Board
Oh my God. I'm so embarrassed. I'm sorry. I've been running on no sleep for the past two weeks. Just got a new job. Takes me two buses and a train to get there. 2 hours?! Then I'm moving. I hate the whole process. Drives me crazy.
Honestly I don't even remember writing that part. I remember everything else and that's the truth. I meant everything too. But, I truly am sorry. I'm an idiot. I should've proof-read before I sent it.
There's a lot to learn at Panera Bread. I feel like I'm back in college. But, please forgive me fpr my honest mistake.
P.S. You're welcome. Be proud of yourself. You got something amazing and please accept my apology. Half the time I don't know what's going on in front of me. Sometimes I wonder how I can still function. But, I always make sure I have time for your amazing stories.
Much love Riah AweSomeNess.
Author's Response:
It's ok. Don't apologize. I know how it is to have a hectic schedule. I wish you all the best in new job! :)
Wow, your commute is LONG. I used to work super far from home too, it annoyed me to death.
You're not an idiot. You're just tired and over worked - it happens to all of us.
Thank you so much for your kind, uplifting words. I am so flattered and happy to have met you. I've love to keep in touch with you via email or Facebook?
Let me know if that's ok with you.
Thank you for taking the time out of your day to read my work. I really do appreciate it. Talk to you soon! :)
Date: Mar 25, 2015 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 10: Being Tenacious on the Train
Yes, you are. I'm LOVING all of the juicy layers in this story.
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2015 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 10: Being Tenacious on the Train
You always write the best stories. I can't tell you one thing wrong worth it. All of your stories are my favorite. Words can't describe how amazing of an writing you are. And I'm still waiting for that other Michael and Felicia story. Girl you have a real talent. Don't let anyone tell you other wise. Because we all here believe in you. I know I do. Thank you for allowing me to experience your breath taken, incredible, amazing, out of this world, speechless stories. Thank you so much.
- Riah AweSomeNess
Author's Response:
OH MY GOD! I am flattered beyond words.
NO ONE has ever given me such beautiful compliments before. I am truly humbled.
THANK YOU SO MUCH! I appreciate you in more ways than you can imagine.
PS - I think you're a little confused. I don't have a story with someone named Felicia. Are you talking about Michael with Diana?
Date: Mar 25, 2015 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 10: Being Tenacious on the Train
Both Priscilla and Jill are thorns in my side..just, ugh..can't take much more of their foolishness..Jill has some nerve..untalented? and she's talented?? She's just jealous because she doens't have someone to love. Sneddon needs to go away, too. And Lisa better do the right thing and show she has backbone despite the anger and frustration..
Author's Response:
Yeah, that was a pretty ballsy statement for her to make. Yes, that's exactly why and you will soon find out why! ;)
I think my readers will like the way Lisa turns things around. Don't want to give too much away yet though.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Love you! <3
Date: Mar 25, 2015 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 10: Being Tenacious on the Train
Awwwwwww 😂😍😍😍😍
okay now..... I'm so close wanting to slap Jill, Lisa, Tom, and Priscilla like they getting on my nervessss like go somewhere lmlllll Jill was funny talking bout Tom but back to em they get on my nerves
And Awwwwwww lol
Good Update 😂👏👏👏
Author's Response:
Haha, thanks so much! :)
Date: Mar 19, 2015 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 9: Irritated by Interruptions
Oh lawddd mannnn Lisa is so ughhh first u gon divorce him then still talking bout u love him girl bye she so two faced
Then Joseph talking bout adultery wen his tail did the same thing he needs to go man bye he needs his own life mannn
Then Jill talking he cheap omg I cant stand her nosey tail her, joseph, lisa, and Priscilla should all get along they cant stand my boo idky he didnt do anything they jealous I called it lol
And David and Dennis they be getting it on lolll
Good Update 😂👏👏👏👏
Author's Response:
HAHA you're so funny like always!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
Date: Mar 16, 2015 01:45 am Title: Chapter 8: From the Theatre to the Cookie
You're not losing your touch at all! I have been ACHING for new content in this story; please keep it going!
Author's Response:
THANK YOU! I can breathe easy now, HAHA!
Be sure to look out for my next update! :)
Date: Mar 15, 2015 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 8: From the Theatre to the Cookie
Tom Sneddon is a cold man" my song lol but FRFR **thug mode** Lisa boo go somewhere like if she don't take her trifling self somewhere lolll u make don't like her but I actually like em as a couple lolll
Tom man y is he so obsess with getting Michael down he needs to go somewhere and fix his ugly triflin face
And Jill boo needs to get a life AND A MAN y she always in her daughter life she needs to go and worry bout her self girl these ppl need a life
Good Update 😂👏👏👏
Author's Response:
HAHAHAHA! I had an emotional day today and your review totally cheered me up! THANK YOU!
Date: Mar 15, 2015 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 8: From the Theatre to the Cookie
ugh, that Sneddon..he is a huge thorn in my side..someone needs to tell him stop drinking haterade..
and I love how you are showing Lisa has some integrity despite her pettiness..I hope she does the right thing..
and when is Jill gonna realize Aurora doesn't give a rats behind? does she have a block of wood for a brain or what? I sense Aurora will have to do something real drastic to get her to back off.
This still has potential..and I'll help as promised..have a couple of ideas already.
Author's Response:
I know, he is a hater for sure.
I'm glad you see that in Lisa. I didn't want her to come off as the bad one like she did in real life.
Jill is just very overbearing and strict. She raised her daughter alone and that's what happens when you're an only child.
Thanks, I'm glad you think so. I can't wait to read/hear your ideas. :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2015 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 7: Getting Too Personal
Loved it so much!! I'm having a bit of trouble with Facebook on my phone! Sorry I'll message you once it's working again :D
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks hun. Chapter 8 will be ready very soon.
No problem. We'll talk again soon! :)
Date: Mar 11, 2015 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 7: Getting Too Personal
I've missed you! The vignettes within each character relationship were strung together so well.
Author's Response:
I've missed you too!
Thank you so much for the compliment. You have NO idea how much that means to me.
I hope you continue to read and love this story as it unfolds.
Your support is greatly appreciated. Thank you for waiting so long. <3
Date: Mar 11, 2015 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 7: Getting Too Personal
Welcome! Oh how I missed this. I am glad you've gotten back into it!!
Tsk.Tsk. you know, I suspected that Priscilla was to blame for some of the foolishness that went down in her daughter and Michael's marriage..such a miserable wench..and would say the same about Jill too..seriously she makes me wanna hurt things..is she dense or what?? She and Priscilla ought to get together..or maybe not..
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thanks Keren! It's great to have your support!
Yes, Priscilla wasn't very supportive of Lisa and Michael's marriage. In fact, she was extremely racist and told Lisa Marie multiple times to leave him. Jill is very narrow minded and shallow. Her and Priscilla getting together would be a lethal combination, HAHA!
I'll be updating again this weekend!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
Date: Mar 11, 2015 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 7: Getting Too Personal
Finally! Great chapter. Glad you are back at it
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks hun!
I'm so glad you are still interested in this story. I think I lost a lot of readers after shelving it for 4 months.
Thank you for your never ending support. I hope you continue liking this as it unfolds. :)
Date: Mar 11, 2015 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 7: Getting Too Personal
Ight so yo girl is back yassssssssss lmllll
😂😂😂😂😂😂
Ight Lisa needs to go like girl bye u ain't want him so he got another girl
Her moma needs to go like girl boo she mad cuz she ain't got no man
And priscilla Ik she ain't like the marriage but I agree dat Lisa ain't no child and she needs to gon head and worry bout her kids and stuff u wasn't thinking bout my boo now since u heard he found a new boo u jealous girl gon head somewhere Chile be Killin lol
lol good update 😂👏👏
Author's Response:
LOL you are hilarious!
Glad you like this one.
Will be updating againt this weekend! :)