[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2014 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 5: Preparing for Departure
I'm glad Aurora stood up to her mother. Really, Jill was out of line, she should get a life and let others be.
Author's Response:
Yes, I agree with you but every love story has to have a twist!
Thank you so much for reading my work. :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2014 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 4: Subtle Tension in the Air
Wow, that was soooo beautiful! But I worry about what Jill may do....She is a powerful woman, she could hurt Michael's career.
Author's Response:
Don't worry, things will be ok! :)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: Dec 03, 2014 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 1: Across The Board
How could I NOT read it?! I've been watching for a while and waiting for you to accumulate a few chapters!
Author's Response:
You have NO idea how much that means to me. I love and appreciate loyal readers such as yourself. Please be sure to read my other stories as well. :)
Date: Dec 03, 2014 03:30 am Title: Chapter 5: Preparing for Departure
Hey! This is great! Can't wait for the next update!!!
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you SO much! I appreciate you taking the time to read it. :)
Date: Dec 02, 2014 11:20 am Title: Chapter 5: Preparing for Departure
I just finished reading every chapter thus far, and I loved every single one.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I appreciate you taking the time to read my story.
Date: Dec 02, 2014 04:11 am Title: Chapter 5: Preparing for Departure
Excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I appreciate you taking the time to read my story. :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 26, 2014 12:13 am Title: Chapter 4: Subtle Tension in the Air
So much talent, girl <3
Author's Response:
Oh, stop. *blushing*
Thanks! :)
Date: Nov 23, 2014 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 4: Subtle Tension in the Air
ugh..Jill needs to go away..who does she think she is? such a control freak and she needs to get over herself..
I would advise Michael files for divorce from Lisa before doing anything more serious with Aurora..otherwise he would be guilty of cheating as well and two wrongs don't make a right..
Author's Response:
I agree, she is a control freak and needs to stop being so judgmental.
Michael and Lisa are legally separated - that makes him technically single in his eyes.
You're right - two wrongs don't make a right but in this case, it just might! ;)
Thanks for reading.
Date: Nov 23, 2014 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 4: Subtle Tension in the Air
yes!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 23, 2014 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 3: Living Dangerously
Woo! Yeah Michael forgot all self control in this chapter! He needs to step back and end that Lisa chapter before he starts to write the Aurora chapter, that's only fair.
Shit, he's pursuing her like he's some sort of bachelor!
Their interactions in this chapter were soooo cute, though. The tickling... aww! Cause we all know Mike was extremely ticklish.
Author's Response:
I agree with you about him ending one chapter before starting a new one - keep reading! ;)
I guess in his mind he IS a bachelor since his wife isn't doing anything for him.
They are adorable - I'd give anything to tickle Michael! :D
[Report This]Date: Nov 23, 2014 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Girl Was Persuasive
Wow, this is getting better and better! Please make it a long story, it will be a long, cold winter and I need this!
Author's Response:
HAHA. I'll do my best to extend it as long as possible.
If you're looking for a good/long story - please check out Struck By Dreams and The Flame That Still Burns. I guarantee you won't be disappointed!
Thank you for reading! :D
[Report This]Date: Nov 23, 2014 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 1: Across The Board
Wow, this is the best story I've read in ages over here! Keep going!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. That means the world to me.
Date: Nov 23, 2014 04:00 am Title: Chapter 1: Across The Board
As cold as it was for Lisa to forget Michael's birthday, that sounds like something she would have done out of spite considering how mad she said she was at him during the separation as well as the fact that issues were unresolved for the most part and there was said to be poor communication between the two.
I hope this story doesn't end sadly as well..I am one of those who hates sad endings especially with the main characters..however best of luck.
Author's Response:
I agree - forgetting his birthday IS something Lisa would have done out of spite. Their marriage was doomed from the beginning and it was unfortunate that they were not able to work out their differences.
I can't tell you how this ends but I will tell you that you may not be disappointed. :)
Thanks for reading.
Date: Nov 22, 2014 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 1: Across The Board
This link has some helpful tips and tricks V
http://www.mjfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=2075
I use the HTML codes off photobucket.com
In the little editing box there will be a blue HTML button. Click that, a box will appear, you paste the HTML code in there and click update
That's for the people who don't like your story V ;)
Author's Response:
LOLLL!! Thank you so much! You are so kind and thoughtful.
Chapter 4 will be updated by tomorrow morning. (Or maybe even tonight as a special treat!)
[Report This]Date: Nov 22, 2014 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 3: Living Dangerously
Love triangles!
I can smell DRAMA :)
And a hint of romance teehee.
It was so adorable of him to pick her pen... N'awww.
Aurora has will power to break that kiss! Lucky she's a nice woman :)
I would have kissed the hell out of him 'My minds telling me no , but my body, my BODY'S TELLING ME YEEESSSS!'
Another superb chapter Michaela! Cannot wait for more.
Author's Response:
OMG YOUR PICTURES!!! I LOVE THEM!!!
Thank you so much, hun. I ADORE YOU! :D
I'm glad you are liking this story. A few people have told me they aren't into it but I have a feeling they're going to change their mind REEEEEALLY soon!
I can't stop looking at that gif of Michael OMG! BE STILL MY HEART!!
Can you please explain to me how you upload them to this site? I've been trying to add photos for months and it never works for me.
Thanks again, girl. Please keep the lovely pictures and comments coming! :D