Date: Nov 12, 2012 09:53 am Title: CHAPTER TWENTY-EIGHT: Making Moves
I'm not really agree with what Michael is doing...Firstly because, he's not with Freddie anymore and because his marriage is a stupid way to move on.
He wants to do this quickly because he's hurting that Freddie got someone who makes him probably happy...But he will break Freddie's heart and Brooke's one when she'll find out everything.
I love this story!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review :)
Indeed, Michael's being quite stupid but I kinda feel for him too. I hope he'll realize what he really wants to do with his life soon enough.
[Report This]Date: Nov 12, 2012 08:04 am Title: CHAPTER TWENTY-EIGHT: Making Moves
Actually this chapter made me very happy. Marriage is a happy thing (unless you're forced to). But what if Freddie finds out? His heart will be broken! :'(
Please update soon, I really love this story! It's so well written!
Bless you! <3
Author's Response:
Yes, it is a happy thing indeed :) I don't know what happens when Freddie finds out... He won't be delighted, that's for sure :/
Thank you so much for reading this!
Date: Nov 04, 2012 02:04 am Title: CHAPTER TWENTY-SEVEN: Two Calls
I really don't understand why Michael reacted so badly when he learned Freddie had someone else. He was the first one, having Brooke while he was with Freddie.
He's engaged and in love with someone else for a long time, and he took Freddie's revelation like a betrayal or something...
But I also feel sorry that he thought Freddie doesn't love him back cause we all know that he is...He just moved on and he was right...Michael had Brooke so...
Author's Response:
Yeah, Michael's being quite selfish here and I'm afraid it won't get any better in the next chapter... Geez, but at least we will soon get some answers, if that's any help. Thanks for reading! <3
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2012 02:31 pm Title: CHAPTER TWENTY-SEVEN: Two Calls
Oh no... Michael knows... but he's just as much cheating on Freddie too with Brooke. Michael should tell both Brooke and Freddie the truth. But Freddie must warn Michael for his health. This is such a suspencefull good story!
I'm so happy you updated so fast again. I love this story! :)
Plz continue! <3
Author's Response:
Yeah, Freddie really should tell him... And both of them should get a nice slap in the face for being so stupid and stubborn. Thank you so much for your review, I hope you keep on reading <3
Date: Nov 03, 2012 08:37 am Title: CHAPTER TWENTY-SIX: Motown 25
So glad you're back!!! :)
I loved the ending of this chapter.
Author's Response:
Oh thank you! It feels good to be back <3 A new chapter is up, check it up, sweetheart :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2012 07:14 am Title: CHAPTER TWENTY-SIX: Motown 25
Omg omg omg! Finally! this is great. I am on edge waiting for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Yay! I just posted the next chapter, I hope you like it 2. :D It's getting intense again...
Date: Nov 03, 2012 03:34 am Title: CHAPTER TWENTY-SIX: Motown 25
I was missing this story soooo much.I'm so glad you're back.
Michael and Freddie both moved on but they still have feelings for each other. I really think that they couldn't hide it for too long.
They're happy with another person but what they're feeling for each other is still strong.
Please update soon!
Author's Response:
Yeah, it's just like you said... I hope they'll find a way to get back together though.
At times I have just felt like giving up on this story because writing a new chapter takes so much time and I haven't had too much time in my hands during the past months... until now *kjeh kjeh*
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2012 11:22 am Title: CHAPTER TWENTY-SIX: Motown 25
I just discovered your story; read everything and I loved every part of it! This is an amazing story! :D
This is really awesome, 'cause I love both MJ and Queen.
So, Michael and Freddie are sort of in the same situation now, huh? Michael is engaged to Brooke, and Freddie did it with an other guy and now he might have HIV. They're both keeping secrets. I hope they won't break up, they're a cute couple! ;)
Please continue! <3
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading this and for your review! Really kind of you :)
Yeah, they are kinda in the same situation and I have no idea how this is going to turn out... But we'll see ;) I'm just going to start writing the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2012 12:13 am Title: CHAPTER ONE: Who Let Billy Joel In?
Please update i really love this story alot!!!!
Author's Response:
Now I updated, but it's been a while... I really am sorry I didn't return to this story earlier than this, but I've been busy with everything else and to be honest haven't even thought about continuing this until now. But now I'm back :)
Date: Feb 25, 2012 05:56 am Title: CHAPTER TWENTY-FIVE: All That Glitters
I'm so happy you're back!!! I miss this story so so much...I hope it won't take you too much time before to update again.
So Michael still didn't talk to Brooke and still want to marry her...I think Janet is right. He still loves Freddie.
And now Freddie met Jim Hutton. Interesting...I wonder what will happen. Will they do their life with their lovers or will they meet again and bring the romance back?
[Report This]Date: Nov 27, 2011 06:39 pm Title: CHAPTER TWENTY-FOUR: The First Witness
Please please please update soon! I'm in looove with this story :)
Date: Nov 20, 2011 10:04 pm Title: CHAPTER TWENTY-FOUR: The First Witness
Ok... somehow, I missed the update. I can't believe it's been sitting here for almost a month without me seeing it! Lol. But I'm so so so happy you updated and haven't given up on this story. Loved it, can't wait for the next one <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2011 09:45 pm Title: CHAPTER TWENTY-FOUR: The First Witness
OK! to be honest, I really didnt like this story when I started reading.. like 1st 2 chapters!! May be because I never red a story like this...lol! But now I really really like this story, because I'm seeing this as only a story... I never thought that Michael was a gay (I dont want him to either:p) but I agree that we really dont know anything about it.. But, as a fiction story, this is just great!!! May I know you're a male or female? I saw you're a male in your account info. BTW, Your English is toooo good! trust me :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2011 09:19 pm Title: CHAPTER TWENTY-FOUR: The First Witness
yay youre back!
Date: Oct 31, 2011 10:49 am Title: CHAPTER TWENTY-FOUR: The First Witness
I'm soooooooo glad you updated...I was missing this story sooo much...
I just jumped in front of my screen when I saw the update lol...
As usual it was a great chapter...
I'm happy that Michael could confess to Janet, but now I really wonder what he will do with Brooke...
Please update soon...I'm addicted to your story lol