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Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2015 09:00 am Title: Chapter 55

I honestly believe that the bodyguard Dirk is responsible for hurting Casey I could be wrong but my bet is definitely on him.

Author's Response:

Its totally off ;) but Dirk is a dickhead. haha 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2015 07:43 am Title: Chapter 54

Man Michael's breakdown just gave me enough anxiety to choke several cats and a small dog. Gawd what is he doing?!?! He's giving all this fight for Mal but putting himself in a place where he might loose it all to his own problem. That was painful to read I swear. 

I wanted to climb in there and shake him a bit...a lot, who am I kidding. Sigh. He has five days till this thing gets started he better Man up for real. Don't get me wrong I understand his reasons for panicking but how does he expect to help fight someone else's battle when giving little credence to his own especially when the consequences of his holds such a dismal outcome. Ugh. I'm in between hugging him and slapping him. 

Come on Michael fight damn it!!!

More soon!! <333



Author's Response:

Also that was only 5 days from when that message had been left for him, there's even less now! 

Hard times for Michael ahead. 

I'm a bury-my-head-in-the-sand type avoider of things, I can see how easily it can become a very quick problem until you're in so deep that everything is shocking and scary --more so than if you had of just faced it in the beginning. 

Yep, too busy fighting someone elses. But if I were Greg, I woulda ripped his face off hahaha. 

Reviewer: Lorry Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2015 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 54

Sight I knew the peace wouldn't last long damn it sky! Lol. Poor mj ahh the anger I even felt it geez I knew greg would be mad but that still didnt give him the right to yell at him, gosh! Thank goodness for malania. 



Author's Response:

Dude, If i were greg I'd be livid. I can't stand people wasting my time! hahaha. But yeah, from Michaels PS; poor baby! I'd give him a hug. 

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2015 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 53

I loved seeing Michael open up for a change. Excellent read!

Reviewer: tnoelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2015 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 53

Ugh, you wrote your ass off in this chapter. Bravo.

Reviewer: Lexara Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2015 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 53

Gosh, just talking to Michael must have been as good as having sex with him .........

*sigh*.

You capture his personality a lot like I imagine it to have been as well. (For all we know about him, just very few of us probably did really know him, of course).



Author's Response:

Thanks, Lexara! :) Yeah, have to admit, I think I'd have rathered talk to him for hours over having sex with him for an hour....hahaha. Well, at first, I mean. 

:) 

Reviewer: Lorry Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2015 09:08 am Title: Chapter 53

aww but im glad they are slowly breaking the wall of imitaticy between them, as always they are so cute!, i found it so cute that mj took her chocolate and ate it for himself, cheeky thing he is!, I just hope this peace they have will last for some time but with the media and all the crazyness with mj being accused well sadly that wont last long...let's hope they can enjoy it for now~



Author's Response:

Its hard to say what I would do if MJ stole some chocolate from my very mouth. I can't tell if I'd have kneed him in the balls and smacked him in the back of his head until he spat it out in to my hand.... or if I'd be as cool as Malania was.

I mean, its chocolate.

Peace... heh heh heh.... *snicker*

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2015 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 52

That was a beautiful moment between them. I loved reading every word. 



Author's Response:

Thanks BJ :) 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2015 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 51

Katherine was out of line. You would think she would be sympathetic to the fact that Mal's vulnerable due to her business being spread out on the street so salaciously. Michael is going through that very thing. Simply being cordial isn't a sign of caring. Just because she didn't come off as a rude bitch doesn't mean her moderate wording wasn't any less stinging or hurtful. 

The whole exchange was upsetting for me so I can imagine Michael's feelings.

I love seeing them being intimate. It's very endearing

Keep em coming when you can. More soon! <333



Author's Response:

I can see both sides of the coin on this one, but yeah, Michael can make his own decisions and she just needs to accept them! 

:) 

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2015 09:46 am Title: Chapter 51

Mothers of boys are just as distrustful and possessive as fathers of girls...Mrs. Katherine is really only looking out for Michael's best. She will come to accept Malania, but she needs some time.



Author's Response:

I agree! :)

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2015 05:22 am Title: Chapter 50

The interaction between Malania and Kaito reminds me of my brother and I to a degree. He's always trying to protect me, even though I too am an adult. Overall, this was a very solid update. 

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2015 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 49

Aww hell, what a mess. Hopefully they get to the bottom of the breach. 



Author's Response:

Thanks BJ :) 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2015 07:37 am Title: Chapter 49

Awe man. Well let's hope he had a mind enough to make sure there was nothing in the room for her to use to cut herself. That would be such a set back knowing there's a lot more to come on the horizon. 

More soon <333



Author's Response:

Hahha he puts out like a giant butchers dream of knives and stabby tools for her to test her self discipline...

lol, Im an asshole. 

Reviewer: VickiJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2015 12:57 am Title: Chapter 48

Who broke the patient-client confidentiality contract? Someone needs to be fired! Am I wrong to say that I wish she would've hit Peyton once square in the face? Goddess knows she deserved it, Crazy bitch.



Author's Response:

Maybe she should have! maybe Peyton's uppence will come :P 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2015 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 48

Good grief. How did that psychopath find out about Mal's private business?  Did she overhear? Who's spilling secrets? Tune in next time to The Accused. Man I'm on the edge of my seat here. 

I'm glad she got over her nerves. However the stay has just begun. 

More soon. <333



Author's Response:

Hahaha so many questions but never any answers! Like an episode of LOST. 

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