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Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 14, 2015 04:37 am Title: Chapter 4 (Get on the Floor)

I'm reading the parts of Chris, Eddie, etc. in their voices and DYING with laughter. Excellent update!



Author's Response:

Sounds just like them, huh? I'm glad you enjoyed it, BluJayWay. There is still more to come. I guarantee you will love Chapter 5. Later!!!

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 14, 2015 03:29 am Title: Chapter 4 (Get on the Floor)

Hehe, that was fun! (Although Alessandra's friends are too pushy for my tastes). Anyway, I hope the girl gets her man and no more nosing in from well intentioned friends. Everyone's allowed to make their choices and mistakes. Let's see what happens over coffee....



Author's Response:

Ha ha! They are nosy aren't they! I think many girls have that one, two or few nosy best friends. Alicia, especially Tisha do mean well, as well as Michael's friends. I just like everyone, would want to see them happy, wouldn't you? But girl, you know we are about to kick this up some more notches. Stay tuned for chapter 5!!!!

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2015 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 3 (Come Together)

Yass, they saw each other. And I knew Trish was gonna dog Alessandra about it too, lol. Can't nothing get passed that girl. Anywho, everyone and they mamas know Mike want Ali. But he trying to keep it on the low. He's too cute tho. But I do feel that even tho he kept saying that they were just very good friends, deep down inside, he had some type of feelings for her. He had to and still probably does. He just didn't say anything just like she didn't say anything. The truth will prevail sometime later. I'll be patient and wait on it.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Loved it :)



Author's Response:

Zendaya, we all know that a good piece of MJ Fanfiction is nothing without a little bit of a tease! Only time will tell what will happen between him and Alessandra. The truth shall set he, she, and all of we free! It feels like a movie doesn't it? Only more twists and turns will unfold as we journey through the story so fasten your seatbelts and hold on tight! Chapter 4 is on the way!!!!!

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 09, 2015 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 2 (Butterflies)

Oh, God. She's about to see Michael after all these years. Wonder ow that's gonna go *wink, wink*.

Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Zendaya! I am really happy to know you are loving the story so far! I am really excited for Alessandra and Michael too! i hope to make you guys laugh, cry, smile, on and on the edges of your seats. So much is on the way and I can't wait for you guys to read chapter 3, which will be up as soon as possible.

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 09, 2015 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 1 (Who Is It?)

Great start!! I think I'm gonna love Trish crazy ass. She cracks me up. 

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2015 08:19 am Title: Chapter 1 (Who Is It?)

Great start, girl! Please continue! I love this.



Author's Response:

Thanks, girl! I'm glad u love it. Chapter 2 is already up so have fun and keep reading. I'm glad you love it already. It's gonna get better and better each time!

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