Date: Jul 09, 2022 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love the addition of the dark warlock..Warlocks are awesome
[Report This]Date: Mar 21, 2015 08:23 am Title: Chapter 5
Sigh... This story is getting better and better. I love that Sai Baba quote. So refreshing. The smile Scarecrow gave her reading the part about love...something beautiful this way comes!! Lol. I love how in tune they've become. The idea that she was born to help them so well figured.
That photo of Michael as scarecrow is awfully adorable!! *heart eyes* 😍
Oz had already started to fall apart right after Eviline met her fate. Did the warlock come from somewhere else or was he home grown I wonder. Hmmmm can't wait to find this out and more.
More soon! <333
Author's Response: Thanks. I really like that quote too. I have much more planned for Scarecrow and Beatrice 😉. As for the warlock, you'll soon find out more about him.
[Report This]Date: Mar 20, 2015 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love how you develop and make your characters personality so legible.
The part that really struck a chord with me was when Beatrice answered that Dorothy was 'Happy' and Scarecrow averted his eyes to hide his pain stricken expression. That really tugged at my heart strings. I just wanna to give him a huge hug. And I hope scarecrow grows to accept that Dorothy will most probably never return to Oz.
And who's this girl with the silver shoes?Hmmm.
Thank yah and update.
Author's Response: Thank you! I just love how engrossed you are with the story. Yes, Scarecrow is a little heartbroken right now but maybe things will work out for him. And the girl with the silver shoes is Dorothy. That was what the people in Emerald city called Dorothy when she was in Oz. I'm sorry if I confused you with that reference. Maybe I should rewrite that part and make it more clear.
Date: Mar 20, 2015 10:26 am Title: Chapter 5
This reunion was so sweet, even if the circumstances are less than sunny. Do I sense a little flirtation between our two heroes? Hmmm...
Author's Response: I had alot of fun with this scene, thanks. As for our heros...possibly 😉
[Report This]Date: Mar 20, 2015 09:56 am Title: Chapter 5
Something is brewing between Beatrice and Scarecrow! Poor TinMan, being enslaved like that and made to dance for everyone's amusement. I want to know what happened to Lion, and why Scarecrow reacted like that........
Author's Response: Yes, it looks like there's a spark between Beatrice and Scarecrow. You'll have to stick around to see if it grows into something else. 😉 Hopefully they can help TinMan and everyone else held prisoner. As for Lion, I can't tell you what's going on with him just yet, but I will say this...don't be surprise if you see him in the next chapter 😉